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It was good in the front, but it was very toxic when that woman appeared in the back. If you want to write about being invincible, then stay invincible. If that doesn't work, don't write about how awesome the protagonist is. . The writing in the front is full of force, but when you come to the back and fight, good guy, you will suffer heavy losses. It's like Qin couldn't unify the six kingdoms without the protagonist. I keep writing about how powerful the protagonist is and how much he is valued by Qin. As a result, Huang Shigong kept plotting against the protagonist. I don't believe that Qin State doesn't have those characters who can't stop him. And after that woman from Zhao Guo appeared, I kept writing about how she deceived the protagonist and made trouble for the protagonist, but she couldn't be moved. It looks really awkward. The most important thing is that the protagonist gets hurt at every turn. He obviously talks about using those particularly damaging strategies, but he just rushes into trouble when something happens. His intelligence organization is like a blind man. The writing and plot were okay, but it just felt awkward and uncomfortable.

The writing is acceptable, with many clichés. It could be streamlined. The plot is a little slow and could be sped up. There are less emotional dramas for young people. The above comments only mean that I can watch it, but I can't write [Eating Melon].

Not pretty. Newspaper