You Asked Me to Write Xianxia, but I Wrote Naruto: Wang Mingren?

From the current point of view, the writing style is okay, but the updates are a bit slow, and the last name is a bit ugly.

The five-star evaluation has been received, the author continues to work hard

I feel like these names might be better: Uzumaki Naruto → Feng Mingnan (if you think the recognition is not high, then Feng Mingnan) The Uzumaki clan was good at sealing, so they changed their name to the Feng clan. Ming, bright, Naruto is a very sunny person, and can also correspond to his Yang Nine Tails and Yang attribute chakra. Naruto's name comes from the real-life Naruto City in Japan, which was previously named another city, Naruto City. Naruto's name in the work comes from Jiraiya's "The Legend of Perseverance", and the meaning of Kusunoki is perseverance. So the word Nan is used. Uchiha Sasuke → Jiang Tingyi (if you think the recognition is not high, then Jiang Zuoyi) The Uchiha were the two clans that founded Konoha and were defeated by the Senju clan. The Shennong clan among the ancestors of China, whose surname was Jiang, was also defeated by the Xuanyuan clan. They were very similar. Sasuke's prototype is the God of Thunder in Japanese mythology, so the word "ting" sounds good. Sasuke's assistant means second in Japanese. Sasuke is the second son in the family, and B is the second in heaven (A, B, C...). It also has a wood attribute (Otomu), which corresponds to Naruto's Kusu, implying a bond. Senju Hashirama → Hime Cheon-sun (if you feel the recognition is not high, then Hime Joo-seon) The reason for the surname Ji is almost explained clearly above. The prototype of Thousand-Armed Hashirama is Thousand-Armed Avalokitesvara. According to the legend of Thousand-Armed Avalokitesvara, she was created by a mortal who was very good. Senju Hashirama himself is also a kind person. (Actually, there is also a joke idea, a thousand hands and a hundred eyes are all under heaven, Ji Qianjian) Uchiha Madara → Ginger Madara or Ginger Madara The prototype of Uchiha Madara is Izanagi, the creator god of Japanese mythology. The creation god in Chinese mythology is Zhu Jiuyin, also called Zhulong (I also have the idea of ​​replacing the nine tails with Zhu Jiuyin).

It's very interesting that this kind of magical transformation feels like it could be published as a separate book

So far, there are no big problems in the magic modification part, including the biggest problem in the original work, the character of Sakura is disgusting and the problem of low presence has been solved to some extent. Although it has not been completely solved, it is within an acceptable range. After all, this problem is really difficult to solve. The best part is the magic modification of the moves. It's really fairy-like and really strong. But there is also a fatal problem. It has always been taboo to write too much about the daily life of the tool protagonist in this type of text. The focus should be more on the text and the reaction of the people in the different world for the first time after the text. Too much description of the daily life of the tool protagonist is meaningless, unless a good story can be written in this daily life. There are really too many daily routines for the protagonist of Tool Man. There are only two chapters every day, and there is one chapter with no text at all. What on earth was I reading?

Not bad, not bad. I had this idea before, but my writing skills are limited and I can't write it. Come on, author💪

It's good to watch. I love watching [Flowing Kiss]. Isn't it because the fanfic has a different plot from the original work? Tu Yile I take back my words. .

Updates are too slow. It is recommended to update 100 times a day. The plot is also very interesting.

It's a modified version of Naruto, plus the novel author's youth dream type

You can still write novels like this while doing it! You really, really, the Chinese version of The Story of King Naruto