The Original Horror

Very good. Weird power can defeat elemental power. The setting is very good. This kind of plot of crushing the protagonist group is really great. Recently, I have always seen the protagonists in other books directly fighting Weird after time travel and winning. Come on, in Weird's novel, is Weird defeated head-on? Is that still called weird? If this isn't a fun story, it won't be interesting. As for the issue of abusing the protagonist, is the protagonist still worthy of being the protagonist if he hasn't experienced ups and downs? Do we want us to see a giant baby become invincible after getting the system? I still think this book is very wrong.

Awesome, the author wrote it well, but it's a bit short. [Praise]

The author's writing is very good, but it feels a bit too depressing. Although the protagonist has no memory after death, it is still a bit sadistic. The protagonist's group is destroyed by the group in various ways, and it is very uncomfortable for the cook, because he is cut into pieces and turned around at every turn. The weirdness in this book is too strong. For Weird, there is no difference between the owner of the God's Eye and ordinary people. For example, Kong can't beat a weird Qiuqiu man, etc., But it is indeed better than other novels in which Weird can be defeated by the protagonist group with strength, but it feels that the pressure on the protagonist is too great. So far, it has not explained how Weird can be expelled, and not only does he have to be careful not to violate the rules, but also to be wary of doctors, who always inexplicably kill a lot of people around him. You can feel the suffocation and despair when you get into the protagonist a little bit. From the current point of view, the protagonist is basically hopeless. Basically, if you encounter something weird, you can only commit suicide and restart. I hope that something can be arranged for the protagonist group later to counteract the weirdness a little bit, and at least give them time to run away, so that only a few of them will die all at once if they encounter the weirdness.

Very good. This is the first time I have read this kind of book about something weird in Teyvat. It's very good.

First of all, so far, this book has focused on solving strange crises. The logic is clear and strict, and the plot advances in an orderly manner. It is rare that the primary and secondary lines are intertwined and confused, the narrative is long and slow, and the context is inconsistent with the logic. Secondly, in terms of character creation, it generally conforms to the characteristics of the original characters. For example, Leosli's seemingly out-of-touch but never-missing-the-chain characteristics at critical moments are evident. Interspersed in the middle are the author's further understanding of the relationship between characters. For example, the relationship between Navi and Ren Fufu is positioned as a "family relationship" similar to that of father and daughter or brother and sister, which I personally think is great. There is also the shaping of the characteristics of the group portraits, which well reflects the beauty of human nature such as friendship, dedication, and responsibility, and is handled very well. Regarding this point, from my first glance, Chiori's character design problem needs to be solved urgently. I thought that although she was vicious and harsh in her daily life, she could stick to her bottom line at critical moments, understand the overall situation, take the overall situation into consideration, and would never appear to be a naysayer or deliberately looking for trouble. I hope the author will pay attention. Furthermore, in terms of language, I think it can be called concise and lively, without any ineffective rendering or modification, so it is very suitable as a ghost story novel. In short, this book is a masterpiece among online articles. It is one of the best online articles I have seen so far. You can read it. (PS: The character chef may break his defense after reading this book, because he will break down and turn around at every turn. This description is also relatively detailed and quite explosive. Because I am a magic chef, I have more food supplements, I have seen more characters, and the characters I imagined are also very solid, so I may be less affected. But seeing a human being beheaded is still...)

To be honest, it is a pretty good book, but there is one drawback. According to the way the author describes it so far, it is not about jumping timelines, but reopening parallel universes. In other novels, the protagonist can at least know whether he is in a parallel universe or a timeline, and then be cautious and cautious. However, the protagonist does not know that he is in a parallel universe, and then walks away, leaving a mess. . . No, I hope I can get a positive response from the author, please No, buddy, if you strengthen the doctor, then strengthen it. What the hell are you nerfing [what] [what] [what]? What did you do when you nerfed the Abyssal Ying? The sleep sound wave was gone for a second, and the powerless potion was gone for a second? Yes, it is ineffective against gods but effective against Abyssal Ying[what][what][what] Then there is the follow-up plot where the protagonist discovers that he is a strange person. The portrayal of the protagonist in this section is abrupt and awkward.

Really well written. First of all, the Fontaine chapter is the most exciting, giving readers a preliminary understanding of the weirdness. But the plot got a bit boring towards the end, but overall it was okay. I feel that the author can add some explosive points to the plot, and add a little IQ to the weird people, such as Leosley, instead of becoming mentally retarded as soon as they become weird. Give a little more tension when someone turns weird. Don't die once and then find out the information and then it's gone. Then there is the description of the strangeness. There is still a little bit of Fontaine at the beginning, but it disappears at the end. It can be summed up in one sentence. I feel like I could describe it as much as I want, as readers would love to see this.

I can only say that this book is super exciting. The protagonist has the characteristics of this person, and the character of Genshin Impact in it is also very vivid and worthy of being portrayed. It is perfectly reproduced without any sense of character collapse. The descriptive words are very good and it is easy to get me into it. Especially when it comes to bloody scenes, I can only say that the author is awesome. Lus, the protagonist is also really brave. If I had this kind of pain, I would have gone crazy. This is also a character trait of the protagonist. He is tenacious. Faced with a helpless situation, as an ordinary person, he is afraid, but he will bravely commit suicide for the sake of others. It hurts me just thinking about it. Although the protagonist is now facing a strange and helpless situation. I can't do it, but I guess I might get some help after passing through Liyue or other countries. In Liyue, I guess it was Zhongli's guidance or other methods that changed the protagonist's half of the ancient dragon bloodline that Villette gave to the protagonist. This allowed the protagonist to face the weird and have something to fight against. Some small tricks, the above are my speculations. If there are similarities, I will not be responsible. If there are no similarities, I will still not be responsible.

It's very good, I like it personally, but for some reason, I really want to cry when I look at it. I don't know if I'm scared. However, I really, really like reading this novel, and I hope the author can continue to update it [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

A very good book that successfully combines the original god and the weird. I hope the author can keep this sense of compactness, especially the feeling of death and rebirth is really great. But at the same time, I have to complain that the update speed is too slow. It's really not good enough.