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Very good. Weird power can defeat elemental power. The setting is very good. This kind of plot of crushing the protagonist group is really great. Recently, I have always seen the protagonists in other books directly fighting Weird after time travel and winning. Come on, in Weird's novel, is Weird defeated head-on? Is that still called weird? If this isn't a fun story, it won't be interesting. As for the issue of abusing the protagonist, is the protagonist still worthy of being the protagonist if he hasn't experienced ups and downs? Do we want us to see a giant baby become invincible after getting the system? I still think this book is very wrong.

Awesome, the author wrote it well, but it's a bit short. [Praise]

The author's writing is very good, but it feels a bit too depressing. Although the protagonist has no memory after death, it is still a bit sadistic. The protagonist's group is destroyed by the group in various ways, and it is very uncomfortable for the cook, because he is cut into pieces and turned around at every turn. The weirdness in this book is too strong. For Weird, there is no difference between the owner of the God's Eye and ordinary people. For example, Kong can't beat a weird Qiuqiu man, etc., But it is indeed better than other novels in which Weird can be defeated by the protagonist group with strength, but it feels that the pressure on the protagonist is too great. So far, it has not explained how Weird can be expelled, and not only does he have to be careful not to violate the rules, but also to be wary of doctors, who always inexplicably kill a lot of people around him. You can feel the suffocation and despair when you get into the protagonist a little bit. From the current point of view, the protagonist is basically hopeless. Basically, if you encounter something weird, you can only commit suicide and restart. I hope that something can be arranged for the protagonist group later to counteract the weirdness a little bit, and at least give them time to run away, so that only a few of them will die all at once if they encounter the weirdness.

Very good. This is the first time I have read this kind of book about something weird in Teyvat. It's very good.

First of all, so far, this book has focused on solving strange crises. The logic is clear and strict, and the plot advances in an orderly manner. It is rare that the primary and secondary lines are intertwined and confused, the narrative is long and slow, and the context is inconsistent with the logic. Secondly, in terms of character creation, it generally conforms to the characteristics of the original characters. For example, Leosli's seemingly out-of-touch but never-missing-the-chain characteristics at critical moments are evident. Interspersed in the middle are the author's further understanding of the relationship between characters. For example, the relationship between Navi and Ren Fufu is positioned as a "family relationship" similar to that of father and daughter or brother and sister, which I personally think is great. There is also the shaping of the characteristics of the group portraits, which well reflects the beauty of human nature such as friendship, dedication, and responsibility, and is handled very well. Regarding this point, from my first glance, Chiori's character design problem needs to be solved urgently. I thought that although she was vicious and harsh in her daily life, she could stick to her bottom line at critical moments, understand the overall situation, take the overall situation into consideration, and would never appear to be a naysayer or deliberately looking for trouble. I hope the author will pay attention. Furthermore, in terms of language, I think it can be called concise and lively, without any ineffective rendering or modification, so it is very suitable as a ghost story novel. In short, this book is a masterpiece among online articles. It is one of the best online articles I have seen so far. You can read it. (PS: The character chef may break his defense after reading this book, because he will break down and turn around at every turn. This description is also relatively detailed and quite explosive. Because I am a magic chef, I have more food supplements, I have seen more characters, and the characters I imagined are also very solid, so I may be less affected. But seeing a human being beheaded is still...)

To be honest, it is a pretty good book, but there is one drawback. According to the way the author describes it so far, it is not about jumping timelines, but reopening parallel universes. In other novels, the protagonist can at least know whether he is in a parallel universe or a timeline, and then be cautious and cautious. However, the protagonist does not know that he is in a parallel universe, and then walks away, leaving a mess. . . No, I hope I can get a positive response from the author, please No, buddy, if you strengthen the doctor, then strengthen it. What the hell are you nerfing [what] [what] [what]? What did you do when you nerfed the Abyssal Ying? The sleep sound wave was gone for a second, and the powerless potion was gone for a second? Yes, it is ineffective against gods but effective against Abyssal Ying[what][what][what] Then there is the follow-up plot where the protagonist discovers that he is a strange person. The portrayal of the protagonist in this section is abrupt and awkward.

I can only say that this book is super exciting. The protagonist has the characteristics of this person, and the character of Genshin Impact in it is also very vivid and worthy of being portrayed. It is perfectly reproduced without any sense of character collapse. The descriptive words are very good and it is easy to get me into it. Especially when it comes to bloody scenes, I can only say that the author is awesome. Lus, the protagonist is also really brave. If I had this kind of pain, I would have gone crazy. This is also a character trait of the protagonist. He is tenacious. Faced with a helpless situation, as an ordinary person, he is afraid, but he will bravely commit suicide for the sake of others. It hurts me just thinking about it. Although the protagonist is now facing a strange and helpless situation. I can't do it, but I guess I might get some help after passing through Liyue or other countries. In Liyue, I guess it was Zhongli's guidance or other methods that changed the protagonist's half of the ancient dragon bloodline that Villette gave to the protagonist. This allowed the protagonist to face the weird and have something to fight against. Some small tricks, the above are my speculations. If there are similarities, I will not be responsible. If there are no similarities, I will still not be responsible.

Really well written. First of all, the Fontaine chapter is the most exciting, giving readers a preliminary understanding of the weirdness. But the plot got a bit boring towards the end, but overall it was okay. I feel that the author can add some explosive points to the plot, and add a little IQ to the weird people, such as Leosley, instead of becoming mentally retarded as soon as they become weird. Give a little more tension when someone turns weird. Don't die once and then find out the information and then it's gone. Then there is the description of the strangeness. There is still a little bit of Fontaine at the beginning, but it disappears at the end. It can be summed up in one sentence. I feel like I could describe it as much as I want, as readers would love to see this.

It's very good, I like it personally, but for some reason, I really want to cry when I look at it. I don't know if I'm scared. However, I really, really like reading this novel, and I hope the author can continue to update it [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

A very good book that successfully combines the original god and the weird. I hope the author can keep this sense of compactness, especially the feeling of death and rebirth is really great. But at the same time, I have to complain that the update speed is too slow. It's really not good enough.

It's very interesting and very appealing to my taste. At least it hasn't crashed so far. This track is too niche. I remember there were only two books I've read of Whole Tomato. One of them crashed because of the writing. If you, the author, crashed this one... 1. If your writing fails, readers will immediately rush to your door. 2. Never interrupt updates, as there will be dire consequences if you interrupt updates. 3. The way to remove the weirdness of readers is... To update chapter 100 4. If you are resolute and don't want to update... You don't want to know the consequences... 5. If it cannot be updated for some reason, you need to report it to the readers, otherwise they will rush in front of you and tear you into pieces. You will not want to experience the feeling of being torn apart. 6. If the plot is poorly written, readers will forgive you, but what they will do after many times... I don't know, but I know you will never want to experience it.

Very good, a very good Genshin Impact fanfic. Kudos to the author. The writing style and plot are not inferior to first-class fanfics. There are some details that need to be paid attention to. For example, when chatting about serious topics, Xia Volei actually used the word "what". Pay attention to the character design, which slightly affects the perception. The low word count is a good thing, but sometimes the way of skipping plots is awkward, etc. In short, the future is promising!

Finished reading it in one go very good Affirmation from a 12,000-hour bookworm [Like]

Okay, ok, ok, ok, very ok. This is one of the few good books I have read, but I just don't know why I can't understand it. Maybe it's because my brain is not big enough. I usually read too many books without using my brain.

This book is really wonderful and made me feel crazy. The author please do not stop updating, otherwise you will

This article is still very good, but you need to be mentally prepared. The protagonist is really bad in the early stage and has no ability. He relied on the backtracking to slowly win the first copy, which is now in Liyue. It is very difficult, very difficult, and the protagonist's combat power is a little worse than before, and he has also been strengthened a little bit (not much. I think there is no difference between the improvement and the non-enhancement), so if some book friends feel that the protagonist is too weak and cannot accept the repeated death of their favorite characters, etc. Then it can be avoided, after all, I cried when I saw my favorite character for the first time. But the logic of this article is still very clear, so this article is very good, but you need to be mentally prepared, otherwise you will easily get angry. [Lips curled][lips curled][crazy][crazy] (Mainly because of the recent book shortage, I can't find any interesting novels, so I slowly accepted this book. If you can't accept it, don't read it. After all, I also want to give up and want to read it, and keep swinging back and forth) [roll eyes] [roll eyes] [cover face] [cover face] Also, that Dotore is really speechless and irritating, really. There is also the little hook that the protagonist got. Muscle memory, he remembers the water element that originally belonged to him. This belongs to elemental power and is a weird and restrained elemental power. So this hook is there or not. There is another trick, which is more obscure. It is that the main character can only trigger the trumpet by saying "I'm sorry" to himself when his favorite character dies. But the probability is too low. When those characters die, they die directly. Those who die are called clean and neat. It is impossible to speak. With so many pictures, the only two times it was triggered were when Fufu said [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]. It was really too harsh and difficult to trigger. At present, I only know these two tricks, which can allow the protagonist to barely fight against the weird (prompts do not count) and there are no others. I hope the author can strengthen the protagonist, thank you.

The combination of death return without completely retaining memory and strange rules is quite interesting, and the combination with the original world setting is also excellent. One of the highlights is that it makes full use of many original characters and plots to unfold the rules and weird stories.

I feel it is a masterpiece among Genshin Impact fanfics. I have read it before but didn't read it because I was not interested in the weird elements. As a result, I couldn't stop reading it. The plot is intertwined and the author obviously spent a long time conceiving it before writing it. Five-star recommendation

So pretty! This is my first time reading a weird story about Genshin Impact, and it's so exciting!

This book is very awesome, and the IQ is online. However, there is an incredible problem. After the protagonist commits suicide and rewinds, the protagonist has rewinded, so other people have not rewinded, and are still in that timeline. Every time he dies, then the previous time node he was in will also die once.

It's quite exciting, and the combination of the two elements brought me back to the first time I watched Monster Stories from the Zoo.

The subject matter is very new, and the content is indeed very good, but if you read too much, remember to wash your mind. This does not mean that the content is bloody, it is too weird and weird. If you are like me, it is the first time to watch the weird theme, I suggest you look at other things, otherwise it may cause anxiety and fear. Of course, not everyone is timid like me and has too much brain power. I just recommend not to get too deep, and you need to activate your brain in some places. In short, the subject matter is very new, but it is a bit of a headache for me to watch. Very good book and made my brain spin.

It looks great so far, much better than the one next door. I was confused when I read that one. I couldn't even figure out the mental state of the author of that book. I don't want to talk about the content. I just want to say that the author's book is very good. I hope it can continue to be like that one. I can say that this book is the best novel about this subject that Tomato has written so far. Although I have only read three books, I can definitely take a look. It doesn't look good, I'll tear off my deskmate's head and kick it for you guys [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The writing is very good, and the protagonist setting is also very good. Although it may be a bit holy to always help others, the character feels worthy of respect. The weird setting is also very good. The protagonist's wisdom to fight against the weird pressure is worth continuing to promote... I hope it won't collapse in the future... See Chapter 174 [Please update] [Like]

Fontaine is particularly good-looking in the early stages. Although the main character's IQ in the later stage sounds like it fluctuates with ability, but it sounds unambiguous at critical moments. Fontaine's character of Villette really makes me think it's a funny chapter.

On the premise of ensuring that the plot of the game is correct, I wrote a strange flow of rules. The logic is not bad, and the plot development is also interesting. However, I hope that the protagonist will not become too strong in the end and the ending will be hasty. Come on, the author.

It's so beautiful, I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot. Come on author [learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][learned][like][like][like]

The characters are not OOC at all, and the writing is very good. I feel that it is one of the few fics I have read that fits the characters well. Good luck to the author [please update]

At present, Tomato only has two weird Teyvat novels with over 100,000 words. The other one is really difficult to read. The logic is all messed up and the rules are outrageous. But this book is really good. It is logical, has clues, and is reasonable. I hope I can finish it and don't collapse after writing it. If you continue writing like this, it will become popular. To be honest, after coming out of Fontaine, I can't understand it more and more. First of all, a piece of information sometimes needs two or even three chapters to explain, which greatly affects book friends who are chasing books in real time, and makes people want to keep books. The second point is that the rules and ghost stories have become a little less focused on the rules. The rules are not completely followed. Finally, the author has dug so many holes, I hope he can fill them all.

I read this novel in the evening, which I felt was quite novel. I worked on it until 4 o'clock in the morning with more than 300,000 words. It was quite interesting to read it in the middle of the night. In fact, the character of the protagonist is quite average to me. I mainly want to see the changes in the characters after they become weird, the triggering conditions, etc. When I was watching it, I felt that this was not a rescue. I just committed suicide several times on the spot and it was completely ruined. But then I found out that the protagonist had a cheat that could be resisted (that is, the protagonist became weird), and I felt that it was a bit equal. The only drawback for me now is how it was shown to me during serialization.