The Aloof Alpha Is Actually a Bitch

The characters are very attractive, but the writing could be better. It feels a bit chronological. Events are described from a simpler third perspective (?), And the perspective jumps a bit frequently (?). It feels a bit difficult to immerse yourself in. In fact, I really like this character setting. It would be really good if the writing style could be improved a bit. I'm not trying to be a teacher, but there are too few GB articles that really poke fun at me. This character setting really appeals to me. Come on, author, I believe you will write better and better

They are good-looking and sweet. There is almost no misunderstanding between the two of them, and occasionally one of them will be resolved quickly. Their spiritual body, the little whale, and the little white cat are really cute. But the cutest one is our little Yu'er, and he's also very strong; he's beautiful and sassy, ​​and he's ridiculously strong. Jun Yan and Bai Yu are really good to drink!

It's very beautiful. The only drawback is that there are too few. Can the author be locked up in a dark room and keep coding~

It's very sweet, not as deep as sadomasochism. I don't like the protagonist who abuses his wife and doesn't talk too much. I like it very much. When I watched it, I had an aunty smile on my face. It's a sweet love. The male protagonist is strong and the female protagonist is even stronger.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks so good [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] What I saw in front of the screen was an aunt's smile [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile] The plot is also very warm, and the characters of each character are also very attractive. In short, it is very exciting. I just love it, love it, love it [Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] At the same time, we are looking forward to (*°∀°)=3 big updates [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I really like this plot (although it's very cliche, but I'm a country dog ​​and I love to read it.) The only drawback is that the author's writing style really needs to be improved. The plot moves very quickly. Maybe you can slow down and add some description. In terms of characterization, it's just average. Fortunately, the writing is relatively smooth and the style is light and funny. So it's not ugly. I hope the author can keep working hard. After all, writing skills are not achieved overnight. Come on! The writing is getting better and better.

Super, super, great. You write well. I like it, like it very much [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Super pretty! ! ! Why the rating is low! ! ! I can't read any pornography! A little abuse makes you happy, but a big abuse hurts your body! This is really super pretty! ! ! If you like to read sweet articles, don't miss it. I'm so beautiful. I love you, the author! ! !

The writing is very good. It is on the same level as another book with similar themes that I like very much. It is still being updated. I hope you will continue to work hard! Produce more high-quality plots and characters [sending my heart][sending my heart]

① A man with high strength, duplicity, active clinging, cute and shy (mental kitten) VS a super strong, secure, ferocious temperament, careful and considerate female A (mental little whale) ②Double strength, the male is stronger and the female is stronger, the male protagonist pretends to be a and the female protagonist shares a dormitory. Before the two formally talk, the male protagonist will also be secretly jealous, but the female protagonist quickly notices and comforts her. The male protagonist is shy easily but he is also very proactive. Who knows, I love this kind of thing.

As an article I have read, I will definitely give it five stars! On the whole, it is relatively relaxed and humorous. Of course, military school stories cannot avoid Zerg, mechas and battlefields. In terms of fighting against Zerg, the writing is still a bit short. Of course, it can also make people like me who don't like to fight and fight feel a little better. The extra story is not like those so-called people who only care about life and not care about raising children. The child is an accident. They are also very attentive to their children, but they love each other most [blowing kisses]. Overall, although it is a bit sloppy. But overall it's still good, with a certain degree of readability [Sending Hearts] Finished, spread the flowers! ∠※

The writing is good, many details are described very delicately, and the emotions are warm and sweet. Keep up the good work.

Good looking The alpha heroine is cold and domineering to the outside world, she is a bad bitch to those she knows well, and she is a loving big dog to the male protagonist. The male protagonist Omega is cold and handsome to the outside world, he is gentle and considerate to people he knows well, and he is like a clingy kitten to the female protagonist. Giggles

Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonist is so clean that my mouth is harder to press than AK. It gets sweeter and sweeter from now on. The male protagonist is strong and the female protagonist is even stronger! ! ! It's so beautiful hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha The male lead is arrogant and cute, I love it so much The author is so awesome! ! ! !

This article is getting better~ It's good to keep reading. It's just that the segmentation in the front is not very good. It's tiring to watch a long section, but it's much better in the back. You can tell it's a newbie, but it's still pretty good. The plot is a bit simple, and the emotional line is not bad. You can just read it as a mindless sweet novel.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh XX So sweet and beautiful~~~ But it's too little~~~~~It's not enough to watch~~~It's so beautiful~~~~It's sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet~~~~I like it so much! ! ! ! ! ! [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Blow a kiss]

Those who love will eventually be protected by those who love. Jun Yan, a person who has no national righteousness, finally learned the responsibility of the country because of Xiao Yuyu. It's so beautiful. I hope there will be more follow-ups from Jun Lin. I really want to see it~

It's not bad. You can read it as a cookie. I personally like this kind of writing about roommates, female A and male A. The daily life is very loving, but they are fighting and so on. The writing on it is very scrawled, it can be said that it is written in one stroke. The focus is all on falling in love, but it is very sweet and you can read it over a meal.

Omg, it's so beautiful, oh my god, oh my god, ye jue, jue jue zi, the number one in my mind. The author is great, as long as there are no updates to 4⃣️, I will update in 4⃣️ [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

This subject matter is really good. The heroine is very strong, but she doesn't have a lot of competitiveness. She just messes around every day. He also has a face of ice, but his personality is very contrasting and a bit cliché. It feels very similar to the male protagonist in The Classroom. The male protagonist is quite cute, but not weak. The plot progresses in the early stages and is more routine, but in the later stages it ends too suddenly. Relatively clear articles, recommended for healing ((*^∀^))👍🏻

I like it. I love the characters in it so much. My favorite one is still my little Yu'er, 😚😚😚😚😚😚😚😚, ah, the ending could be a little longer, but it doesn't matter, this is okay, there are a lot of typos, but 🍅, I'm used to it, it doesn't matter to me, love, friendship, and family, I think they are all beautiful

I've already seen it with a pout, it looks good, I love it, I love it, I love it [love] [love] [love]

It's good-looking, very comfortable to watch, but it's just not enough. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart] It's good to watch, but it always feels like there's something missing (I feel like the plot develops a bit too fast), and the overall character is still very good (self-feeling)

Look good, look good, look good! ! ! Why is the rating so low? ! Really good-looking!

Just finish it without thinking about it, it's so beautiful [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] [Send my heart] I like the way the male and female protagonists get along with each other. I feel that there are very few articles on Tomato that I like.

But I don't want to comment too much, and the ending is 0K. It's a sweet post before going to bed. I like it very much. I hope more people can read it.

This book is the second female A novel I have read. The first one is still being updated, but it is very beautiful. I have never seen this kind of setting before. It is very novel. Before, it was basically male A. When I first read this book, I felt it was a little light and narrative-like, but it got better and better as I went on.

I read the entire book in two days and I have to say it is really good! The female protagonist is really strong, but she is also a real dog. Although the male protagonist is O, he is also very strong, and his strength can be said to be second only to the female protagonist. The full text is humorous and logical, worth reading!

The pace is faster, which I like. Both the male and female protagonists are enlightened, but they are afraid of the stupid ones who are not enlightened. The female protagonist is very powerful, and the male protagonist is also okay. Anyway, he is very good-looking.

It's an interstellar military school story. It's okay to read as a light-hearted and no-brainer story. The male and female protagonists of Jun Yan × Bai Yu are still very good-looking. Their relationship is bland but warm. However, the plot is too simple. The death of the insect mother is also very easy. The grandfather's sacrifice is a bit lacking. The plot would be better if it were richer.