The Coldhearted Spectator

It's really good. On the one hand, the truth is explained in passing, without deliberately saying it. On the other hand, as the author said, the heroine is really not for nothing. The male protagonist belongs to the former, but he believes that what he cannot let go of is one of Qingqing's three major illusions - she/he likes me (the other two are mobile phone vibration and someone knocking on the door). The female protagonists are clearly portrayed and have their own characteristics (the latest chapter has 5, but I personally say I only want 4, and I can't add more in the future). But one thing I really want to complain about is that there are multiple female protagonists, but from Chapter 86 to Chapter 244, it is basically a single female protagonist. The other female protagonists are just active (for example, if there is something, the male protagonist can do you a favor, and the behavior is limited to shaking hands and the like), but I have to say that the behavior of the male protagonist is very popular with me (damn strict wife control). But then the other heroines became more active (yes, that's what you think). This book is good, I really didn't expect to find it during a book shortage. I also hope that the author will update more often, so that in the new year the Chinese language will be prosperous and the writing will be smooth (so update quickly and set a goal of one million words). I also wish all book friends good health, all the best, academic progress, and career success in the new year (what a mechanical compliment). As for deducting one star, I am afraid that if the rating is high, it will be removed from the store. Brother, thank you so much for your hard work. There are more than 700,000 words and only half a hundred comments. As long as you update, I will continue to read. The first highlight of this book is the use of language and the reflection of real events. This is also the reason why I appreciate this book the most. The application of language can understand why what should be said under the circumstances, and the reflection of real events is presented in a complaining way, unlike some novels that use bad jokes. Although they are said to be funny, I only feel awkward. The second feature should be considered multiple female protagonists. Should I say it or not, this should not be considered a feature, but many people will use no female protagonists, single female protagonists, and multiple female protagonists as classification requirements. In my opinion, the author also managed not to give away his daughter. For example, you have a crush on a goddess, but the goddess is with your brother. What would you do? You can't stab him twice and then take the goddess away. Or in other words, within a hundred chapters, just because you did a favor for the heroine, the girl will be grateful and devoted to you, and from then on she will never say anything else to you (this is a common problem in many harem novels) (beat the author). As for the third highlight, the chapters of events are not long. For example, in most fantasy novels, before the competition/trial/entering the secret realm, there is always a way to foreshadow the growth process of the protagonist. However, if the chapters are too long, it is easy to get bored. But in these links, especially when entering the secret realm, writing hundreds of chapters is not a problem at all. When I see the middle, I always wonder when it will end? As for the fourth one, Huang Tian is above me, gambling and drug addiction are inseparable. There are still some shortcomings, the most prominent one is that most of them are flat characters. (Because it is in the first person, it is particularly difficult to highlight round characters, so you can only focus on details, which also tests the author's writing skills. Of course, don't force it if it really doesn't work.) (I also thought about it, if a person is good to you, you will naturally ignore or tolerate his shortcomings, and vice versa. This is a bonus, don't try it if you are not skilled). As for the rest, we haven't seen it yet. Finally, remind the author to update soon. Of course, I attach great importance to the quality of novels. This kind of beginning is still very attractive (I wrote the novel I have always imagined. There are so many mindless and exciting articles. It is not easy to find a novel). The later stages must not be bad. If there is anything wrong, I hope book friends will point it out.

Any readers who don't understand can ask me what I don't understand? Because the content of the book is a bit hard, I wrote it for fun anyway, not for anyone else. I hope you all will encourage me!

Super beautiful👀The characters are very delicately created. Each character has its own characteristics and personal charm, especially the heroine. The process doesn't matter, but I hope they all have a good ending!

It's very interesting, especially the male protagonist's conversations with various people. It's very interesting and feels a bit like a translator.

The author has a very rich imagination, so that The plot is unexpected and whets the reader's appetite. The author's logic is clear. It's so detailed and meticulous that it doesn't make the rich plot seem empty. Connectivity allows readers to follow the author's thinking.

The workplace, daily life, and love elements are all well written.

Come on come on come on.

The author just doesn't run away

It's really good, I hope the author can continue writing

How long will it take for Xiaojing to be online? Can the other heroines speed it up?