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Please support me and give me some suggestions, such as plot development and character characteristics.

The writing is good, and the egoism of Fangyuan is deeply portrayed. But how can I put it, the expression of Fangyuan's inner struggle and tearing is lacking in my opinion. If it is just square or round, the charm and expression of this character will be much less powerful. I like the fangyuan in the original work very much, and this fangyuan seems to be good too

The author gives you a tip. If Fangyuan and Yan Yan break up, it must be because of Jian Wei. When the time comes, let Fangyuan reveal that Yan Yan also protected Fangyuan from breaking up Zhaoyang and Jian Wei, and then let Jian Wei leave Yan Yan angrily. In this way, Yan Yan will be alone, and Fangyuan can control it, and then directly accept it all to achieve a perfect ending [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Okay, it fits Fangyuan's character very well

I hope Fangyuan can win in the end and kill everyone!

It's not lovable, but it also reflects human nature.

Give it five stars and wait for it.

I hope Fangyuan has a little cock in the back

Good looking, keep up the good work

It's still pretty good

Human nature, the human heart. Wandering about picking up and putting down interest rates, Fangyuan wants, wants, and wants, but in the end it's all a bubble! The author depicts the inner activities of the characters very delicately, expressing the hope in everyone's heart and the helplessness between people after knowing the truth. Where should you go in life and career, and how can you feel at ease emotionally? !