(Rewrite the article introduction based on current reader feedback)
Keywords: dual male protagonists [Gong, a boss from another world who is cold on the surface but actually dotes on his wife × a former social beast who is cunning and has some innocence and charm], life in another world, group portraits
Introduction: On a normal morning, Zhan Ming catches up with the early shift like many hard-working workers. While waiting for the traffic light at an intersection, there was suddenly a "rumbling" roar from the sky. Everyone looked up and saw a huge shadow of unknown origin passing across the sky.
When everyone was wondering what it was and lowered their heads to look ahead, two strong men appeared in the middle of the road.
One of them held a machine gun and the other held a rocket launcher. They didn't give everyone time to be shocked before they started shooting indiscriminately.
"It's such a ridiculous way to die that it's like a dream!" Zhan Ming complained before falling down.
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Big background: In this world created by "gods", players are just indifferent NPCs, and this world is just a game created to please other gods.
54 Cards is the starting rule of the game, but it is actually just an introduction...
Lightning Protection: The writing style is relatively immature, the framework is okay, but the writing power is a bit weak. The protagonist's behavior is a bit naive. He is the kind of person who, after having real contact with someone, finds out that the person is good and no longer feels defensive. There are a lot of daily scenes, a lot of supporting roles, and relatively few emotional scenes. Maybe the two parties' good feelings for each other will make people think that there are mostly lustful elements.
Reader comments
The article is a bit immature, but it is true and novel. It is an Infinite Flow novel based on playing cards. Zhan Ming's image is described in detail, which is very suitable for the performance of suddenly traveling from a peaceful era to the cruel Infinite Flow world. He is kind without losing his edge, and is smart without being cunning. Fortunately, most of the people he meets are good people, and there are not many depictions of the cruel world. The character Qin Sui is a big boss, and the relationship between them seems to be greatly affected by the cards, and there is also a lot of lust. The plot is not based on dungeons. The protagonist is relatively Buddha, and there are many hooks. There are some foreshadowings in the early stage, which makes people can't help but watch it [Shy] Overall, it's good, go for it.
It looks good [sends heart][sends heart][sends heart], the setting is very interesting. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love]
The subject matter is quite good, but the writing style is a bit novice.
It's good-looking, and every character is well-drawn. However, I feel like there are a lot of love rivals, and none of them really agree with each other. [Note]
It's well written, I hope it doesn't end badly.
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author! (*^ω^*)
So far, I'm quite satisfied. It would be better to reduce the number of supporting characters with single arrows in the future.
I quite like the Demon King. Zhan Ming has a good relationship with everyone, hehe.
Although I don't have much literary talent, I still want to say that I'm glad to have read this book.
The article is a bit immature, but it is true and novel. It is an Infinite Flow novel based on playing cards. Zhan Ming's image is described in detail, which is very suitable for the performance of suddenly traveling from a peaceful era to the cruel Infinite Flow world. He is kind without losing his edge, and is smart without being cunning. Fortunately, most of the people he meets are good people, and there are not many depictions of the cruel world. The character Qin Sui is a big boss, and the relationship between them seems to be greatly affected by the cards, and there is also a lot of lust. The plot is not based on dungeons. The protagonist is relatively Buddha, and there are many hooks. There are some foreshadowings in the early stage, which makes people can't help but watch it [Shy] Overall, it's good, go for it.
It looks good [sends heart][sends heart][sends heart], the setting is very interesting. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love]
The subject matter is quite good, but the writing style is a bit novice.
It's good-looking, and every character is well-drawn. However, I feel like there are a lot of love rivals, and none of them really agree with each other. [Note]
It's well written, I hope it doesn't end badly.
It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author! (*^ω^*)
So far, I'm quite satisfied. It would be better to reduce the number of supporting characters with single arrows in the future.
I quite like the Demon King. Zhan Ming has a good relationship with everyone, hehe.
Although I don't have much literary talent, I still want to say that I'm glad to have read this book.