From the Start, I Save a Little Golden Carp, Who Becomes a Dragon Maiden to Repay Me

This book is really good. It's the first time I've seen such a good book on Tomato. The pace is fast and the structure is complete!

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, it's not a human being. It's really the first time that I feel like a fantasy novel has so much feeling. The pace should be faster, I want to see the cool places

Why do so many people attack the author? Give me some encouragement. So the author is a bit imitating the plot, but the writing style is very good. The story connection and plot design are quite good. Slightly immature. But it's already very good. I hope that in the later stages of writing, each author will gradually follow the old author's ideas, and there is no need to criticize him all the time. His writing is really good. Keep writing, write well, and hope that one day you will be able to make a name for yourself in this field.

It's not bad. I like reading the author very much. Please keep updating and don't stop updating. The Dragon Girl repays her favor and the protagonist rises. The plot of Fighting to Break the Sky is a bit similar. Hurry up and find your Dragon Girl sister.

The further back, the more exciting it is

Update as soon as possible. It needs to be stable. Don't spend three days fishing and two days surfing the Internet.

It feels good, but it develops too fast, and the protagonist's emotional line is too fast. I didn't feel anything at all, and the two were forced to separate.

By the way, I'm afraid the author has not seen perfection.