There's Something Wrong with This Original God! They... Run Away! ! !
A strange force has invaded Teyvat. The law of heaven is dead. Are the Seven Gods still alive? If you go to the World Tree again, will you see the blood-red and dark tree at first sight, or the little grass god Nasida who was eaten by the Great Merciful Tree King with only one head left?
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Your book is indeed okay, but the concepts of past and present lives and the concept of time are a bit unstable. The most important thing is time. You could write about your future self and leave some clues to your present self, but you didn't write it. Really, you can write it like this, it's better if you write it like this