From Palace Maid to Immortal Longevity

It depicts the transformation of the protagonist bit by bit. The character design of the protagonist is still acceptable. If you don't kill indiscriminately, it won't be considered a saint. There will be a plot of helping others. Overall, it seems quite comfortable. The most important thing is, the author, who can read so many chapters in one day? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [laughter]

It's a good book, and the story overall has a sense of immersion. However, the description of the plot is not rich enough, and many parts are mentioned in one stroke. If you are not convinced, you can describe some daily trivial matters in detail, such as eating, drinking, and having sex. You can simply describe it, and add some passion, humor and other elements, so as to attract more book fans.

It's still very interesting to watch. You are free and not aggrieved. There is no conventional routine of counterattack by the Wulinggen waste. In short, you can see that everyone is free now and can do whatever they want. At least they are not aggrieved.

After reading it, it's worth 9 points. The author's many fantastic ideas are quite interesting, and there are no big bugs overall. The only shortcoming is that the author likes to write a paragraph starting from a small character, but there is no after-sales service 🤦

It's very good. Although there are still some shortcomings in some places, and the plot is not ups and downs, it is better than stable. The great thing about this book is that the author is very good in the later period. The martial arts scenes written in the early stage are indeed quite enjoyable to watch. I give it a five-star praise 👍

It looks good, it looks good, I want more, the update is too slow, too little, too little, I am so hungry that I don't know how to write the rest [Blow kiss] I want to see a lot, a lot, too little, not enough, not enough, I want more ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👍 👍 👍 👍

So far, it is a good book. The background of the court, the rivers and lakes, and the revival of spiritual energy has been laid out one by one. Each branch plot will eventually gather into the main plot. As long as the relationship between the branch plots and the characters (gratitude, resentment, love and hatred) are properly arranged, it will definitely become a good work! 😎

The idea is quite big, integrating martial arts, martial arts, spiritual recovery, immortality, interstellar travel, technology, Gundam, cyberpunk, back room, Cthulhu, it's a mess. It's not easy to tie these mixed elements into a straight line. Some unreasonable parts are harmless. There are too many elements, which makes it feel fragmented when you look at it. The whole story gives people a sense of trance and unreality. Fortunately, the final ending is quite beautiful and heartwarming. It was already finished when I watched it, and it was okay to watch it in one go. However, if people are watching it, it may be difficult to stick to the ending. It is more exciting in the early stage when the aura of the martial arts world begins to recover, but it becomes a bit chaotic in the later stage. Suitable for reading when you are short of books. Overall it's pretty good~

A very good article on the recovery of ancient spiritual energy. Practice and explore the way forward. At first, the heroine showed some kindness from time to time as she took care of her family, which made her frown, but then she let it go. After all, the writing style of the whole story is relatively relaxed, and there are not many forced life and death crisis routines. In the first half, from being at the top of the world to leading the way in cultivating immortals, being at the forefront has its own style. The second half ascends to the upper realm, where big trees provide shade, and you can practice peacefully without the occasional storm. The overall rhythm is relatively comfortable and not too violent. The narrow route taken in the early stage is fortunately not pedantic. If you should strike, you will not be left alive. You can be as quiet as a hero and remain benevolent, and as active as a demon, you can be as cruel as possible. If you have the ability to be kind but not able, just do what you can. Even if you don't like to be kind and meddle in other people's business, you can accept it after seeing it. After all, the author has not created too many life and death twists and turns. This book can still kill the anger.

Congratulations on the ending. The author's way of writing is very special. He doesn't stick to a specific storyline. When a certain plot feels a little boring, he can just find a new way to connect it.