Beginning as a Palace Maid and Becoming an Immortal

It depicts the transformation of the protagonist bit by bit. The character design of the protagonist is still acceptable. If you don't kill indiscriminately, it won't be considered a saint. There will be a plot of helping others. Overall, it seems quite comfortable. The most important thing is, the author, who can read so many chapters in one day? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this [laughter]

It's a good book, and the story overall has a sense of immersion. However, the description of the plot is not rich enough, and many parts are mentioned in one stroke. If you are not convinced, you can describe some daily trivial matters in detail, such as eating, drinking, and having sex. You can simply describe it, and add some passion, humor and other elements, so as to attract more book fans.

It's still very interesting to watch. You are free and not aggrieved. There is no conventional routine of counterattack by the Wulinggen waste. In short, you can see that everyone is free now and can do whatever they want. At least they are not aggrieved.

After reading it, it's worth 9 points. The author's many fantastic ideas are quite interesting, and there are no big bugs overall. The only shortcoming is that the author likes to write a paragraph starting from a small character, but there is no after-sales service [face covering]

It looks good, it looks good, I want more, the update is too slow, too little, too little, I am so hungry that I don't know how to write the rest [Blow kiss] I want to see a lot, a lot, too little, not enough, not enough, I want more [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [like] [like] [like] [like]

So far, it is a good book. The background of the court, the rivers and lakes, and the revival of spiritual energy has been laid out one by one. Each branch plot will eventually gather into the main plot. As long as the relationship between the branch plots and the characters (gratitude, resentment, love and hatred) are properly arranged, it will definitely become a good work! 😎

It's very good. Although there are still some shortcomings in some places, and the plot is not ups and downs, it is better than stable. The great thing about this book is that the author is very good in the later period. The martial arts scenes written in the early stage are indeed quite enjoyable to watch. I give it a five-star praise [like]

Leisurely and leisurely, the clouds are rolling and the clouds are relaxing. This book seems as plain as water at first glance, but it has the fun of cooking wine under the roof when you have nothing to do. It is suitable for reading 20-40 chapters at a time. If you read it for a long time, it will be too dull, and if you read it for a short time, it will not be enjoyable. I have read too many novels about fighting and killing. When I read this book, I can change my mood every time I read dozens of chapters. It is very comfortable.

Congratulations on the ending. The author's way of writing is very special. He doesn't stick to a specific storyline. When a certain plot feels a little boring, he can just find a new way to connect it.

The subject matter is good, I'll add one star, but it has a lot of poison and it's quite a headache for me personally. I have a headache and chest tightness due to my diaphragm. If you don't mind, it's not bad. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food

A very good article on the recovery of ancient spiritual energy. Practice and explore the way forward. At first, the heroine showed some kindness from time to time as she took care of her family, which made her frown, but then she let it go. After all, the writing style of the whole story is relatively relaxed, and there are not many forced life and death crisis routines. In the first half, from being at the top of the world to leading the way in cultivating immortals, being at the forefront has its own style. The second half ascends to the upper realm, where big trees provide shade, and you can practice peacefully without the occasional storm. The overall rhythm is relatively comfortable and not too violent. The narrow route taken in the early stage is fortunately not pedantic. If you should strike, you will not be left alive. You can be as quiet as a hero and remain benevolent, and as active as a demon, you can be as cruel as possible. If you have the ability to be kind but not able, just do what you can. Even if you don't like to be kind and meddle in other people's business, you can accept it after seeing it. After all, the author has not created too many life and death twists and turns. This book can still kill the anger.

It's a very ordinary and leisurely daily life. Although the cultivation level has been increasing and the map has been changed, the sense of leisure has not disappeared. But it is obvious that the protagonist can't walk or live, and the interesting and fresh things have disappeared. In this sense, immortality may really be regarded as a disease.

It is the only one among the hodgepodge of novels I have read, including martial arts, martial arts, immortality, technology, back rooms, weirdness, cyberpunk, mecha, cultivation, and simulation management. The main thing is that the connection is smooth. You can read everything in one novel without feeling out of place. It is a masterpiece worth reading! Finally, I pay tribute to the legendary road warrior Lin Qingyun.

It's good to read. I thought the protagonist would be the first person to open up the path to immortality. Now there's an upper realm. I'm afraid the content behind it will be the same as other novels about cultivating immortality. It's a pity.

It's pretty good-looking, and the protagonist is pretty strong too

This book is well written and very comfortable to read. The early stage is more detailed and biased toward individuals. The later stage is more simplified and tends to be holistic. I feel like the early writing was really good. Although it looks good in the later period, it is also due to the goodwill accumulated in the early stage, otherwise I might not watch it. In the later stage, I felt that I had to rush to catch up with the progress, and then it became a lot more empty. But I still give it 5 stars. After all, this book is finished and there is no need to keep the book, so I feel that the goodwill effect brought by it in the early stage can still be counted.

Nice! ! ! She is the heroine I want to watch! ! ! I love reading Dian's fantasy, but I hate the harem and the shitty emotional drama written by Dian's author. This book is great! ! ! Many romance novels are about martial arts cultivating immortality and paying great attention to morality... I am really drunk. The heroine of this book is chic and free-spirited. I like it so much! The martial arts style in the early stage is very good, really very good, and the heroine is well portrayed. Because she changed from male to female, she has the kind of heroic master style, and the feeling of joy in the world. Later, the spiritual energy recovery is okay, and the sect is established and established. However, after the demon clan came out and the map was changed, I didn't like it anymore... It's a bit too high and low for me.

It's so beautiful. After watching it, my memory still lingers on when the protagonist was holding Fang Tian's painted halberd.

It's very interesting and the ideas are very exciting. There is no poison in reading it in one go. The stages are very smooth. The ending is open-ended and there are no regrets. However, the author may have forgotten Miss Beifang who helped Lin Qingyun after receiving the inner strength of Grandmaster Longhushan. The only regret may be that I did not go back to read it again. This is one of the few novels that I really like to read. It is just too short. Congratulations to the author for finishing the story.

It's a pretty good longevity novel. It has a calm mind and a slow appreciation of the fireworks of the world. There aren't many fighting scenes, and it's not very passionate. Although there is a knife, it was cured later. Overall, it's pretty good. It gives people the feeling of telling a story. Based on my personal preferences, it can be regarded as a treasure novel in Tomato.

This is the most special novel about cultivating immortals that I have read this year. The last one that impressed me so deeply was Senbon Chunliang. The ending is that Jin Feiyao ascends to the upper world. I never thought that cultivating immortals can also build a planet and reach the universe. It is so novel and I like it.

-The protagonist has a three-dimensional and full image, with distinct personality characteristics and a trajectory of growth or transformation, which is real and palpable

Whether it is the psychological description of the characters or the rhythm of the plot, it is really comfortable. This is what I want when I read a book. It is reasonable and less toxic. The protagonist's combat power has also grown steadily. Although some of the plot arrangements are predictable, they are not vulgar. The author's writing is very fairy-like, which is a bonus. It is really good-looking.

Watching the heroine transform from a little palace maid to a heroine to founding a sect, watching her break out of the small world and step by step towards the pinnacle of the universe, and finally return to where she came from to draw her own story, it feels like a very comfortable journey, with a beginning and an end!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good. Finally, there is someone who is a palace maid, but she doesn't want to fight for favors in the palace, but wants to become an immortal. Very novel.

It looks good. The world of the protagonist has always been unstable. If it is not destroyed, it is on the road to destruction [laughs]. To be honest, it is really cool to abandon the evil god and just take the guy and run away. It is a pity that the copied world cannot be demolished together.

The Human Realm is particularly exciting, and the content behind it is pretty good.

It's quite interesting. The author gave a supporting role. The fat general wields two pumpkin hammers, and the battle general is given a role. His name is Zhang Zhaixing.

Wow~~ Such a beautiful article. Five little stars are presented to it with both hands. It is remarkable that the author has integrated so many elements in one article without being confused. There is no sense of inconsistency in the integration, and the writing style has a mature plot and logical logic. The score of such a good article is actually lower than 9? So when I read an article, I can't just look at the ratings.

It's good. It has both martial arts and martial arts skills, and the writing is also very good. During this time of book shortage, this book is really good and can make people read it calmly.