After I Transmigrated into a Book, I Turned the Cannon Fodder into a Golden Finger

The overall plot is concise, smooth, and interlocking, giving it the feel of a martial arts road novel. The overall setting is also very novel. It is not easy for cannon fodder to save itself. The disadvantage is that the dialogue has no layered features and is too oral and protracted. For example, the dialogue between the heroine and Xu Er after she was seriously injured, and after discovering the secret of the treasure map, the scene can be changed immediately to reveal the mystery, without having to drag on for another chapter, which makes people a little irritated. The big plots are intertwined, the sub-plots are a bit loose, the pace is slow, and the plot motivation is not enough, but it is also in line with the style of a road novel. The characters of several masters are very distinctive. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is relatively light, and the character traits are also a bit light. The most interesting interaction I wrote was the meeting between the heroine and her best friend. Both of them were very lively, and the dialogue had interesting characters. They cheat each other's best friends but are sincere and very cute. Furthermore, the character creation technique is relatively simple. The hero's concern for the heroine is basically to make sure she doesn't stumble or get lost, and to watch over her all night long. Except for the heroine being seriously injured and being drugged to reveal her love, the emotional scenes were smooth and uneventful. . The part where he was being fed the medicine was very cute, I recommend you kiss him more.

I twisted the wand for a day, stopped for a day, and listened to it all. Bai Yisong's character gave me a sunny impression at first, but then he became a bit taciturn. Then the scene where the heroine died in front of him, to be honest, was well described. I like the subsequent development very much and look forward to the author's updates.

Nice. A heart-warming but flesh-and-blood story that will make you fall in love over time. I really like this kind of story. Sometimes I fall in love with it just by getting along with it. The main line of the whole story has always been very online, and there is not much description of other things. And the heroine is really brave. I never thought she would give up herself to save her senior brother. In that case, there is nothing you can do. But I didn't expect that the senior brother didn't leave, and in the end he used his inner strength to protect the heroine's heart. The daily story of the two people at the end is also quite touching and heart-warming. I really like the heroine's straightforward confession.

Such a refreshing novel, I felt sweet in my heart after reading the full text. I especially like the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists. Although they don't express their feelings in detail, the details that reveal their secrets are particularly cute. Moreover, both of them have words and actions, and there is no misunderstanding. The whole story is very comfortable. Although the whole article is short, it is really well told. It would be nice if the author could write it longer. Although Xiao Qian Xiaobai's story ends here, it will definitely be happier and more fulfilling in the end. I hope you can understand the wedding episode!

It's so good to watch, really, but it's not finished yet. I really like the content of this book. Ahhh, the love interaction between the heroine and the hero really makes me shy!!! It's really good to read, but do other seniors still have the chance to see it? If the author completes the update in one day, I will definitely be happy for the rest of my life 😢 😢

I think the writing is quite good, the plot is very coherent and can be read in one sitting. The male and female protagonists are very cute, the relationship is natural and not awkward at all, and the male protagonist's character is also relatively fresh. Finally, he is not a dark and yandere character.

It's still very interesting, and I finished reading the short story in a few days. The story is very simple, and indeed the heroine is really pitiful. But it's good to have Sixth Senior Brother with her all the time! Come on, author 😘😘😘

A very interesting novel

It's good to read. I haven't read such a comfortable novel in a long time. It's so cute. Everyone is a good kid, very warm and reasonable. I read it smoothly, and the characters are also very three-dimensional. My biggest taboo is knives, but this knife is really not long, short, and can be cured immediately. It's great!

Oops, they are so cute. The author wrote that the interaction between Xiaoqi and Xiaoliu is so cute. I squeezed the two babies to death. . I really like watching the daily life of everyone in Shimenshan. To be honest, I feel a little sorry for Xiao Liu and Xiao Qi's whining at the back. Our Xiao Qi sister is good at playing straight ball! The little lovers are so cute and reassuring. Thank you, the author, for bringing such a good story! Although you are no longer writing on Tomato, I still want to say that I wish you peace, happiness, and everything goes well in your present life!