Extraordinary Supervision Bureau

The writing is very good, surpassing 99% of the books on the platform, but it is a little bit sadistic. The essence of online writing is still refreshing. Of course, it is not the kind of mindless and refreshing writing. This kind of writing has a relatively small audience. The author can consider changing it a bit. There is not so much bitterness and hatred. After all, reality itself has many unsatisfactory things. Novels should be more enjoyable when used for entertainment.

It's a slow-burning but good-looking book. It has the same feeling as when I read the mysterious book in the past. The paths that appear have their own spells, and there is a big framework. It is a very orthodox book. It's too slow. Chapter 400 is still living a small life in the market. I can't hold my head up in front of the immortals. I can't even look directly at the spiritual sense. The second volume is a failure. I discarded the past of the first volume. I found a bad job and "worried about being noticed by the immortals" and didn't report Kui Mulan. I didn't dare to turn around. He inexplicably abandoned everything in the first volume and started a new life with the second life provided by "Origin Castle". He said it was for revenge, but in fact he was writing about the market and exploring small life. I don't know what the author was thinking and conceiving when he wrote the second volume?

After reading the first big chapter, the male protagonist is the kind of good guy I want. The protagonist is brave, resourceful, and kind-hearted, but he is not the Virgin or the False Virgin. His love is fraternity, like a person who has just come out of the ivory tower. He is full of expectations for the world, passionate about life, and kind to others. I believe that with greater ability comes greater responsibility. Instead of using your little golden finger to dominate, you will draw your sword to help when the road is rough. The protagonist has a kind of vigor that is completely opposite to the depression and decadence of the protagonists in many Tomato books. It brought me back to the feeling I had when I was a kid watching Ultraman.

Let's not talk about anything else. The author really wrote it carefully, but in fact, I feel that some places are not enough foreshadowing. For example, the part where Su dies. The protagonist and Su don't have much story. If you write her to death like this, it will be difficult for readers to feel sad. The second thing is emotion. For example, you can write about the heroine's help to the protagonist when the protagonist is at a low point. In a good novel, the emotions must be very delicate. I feel that the author is a bit of a novice, but the writing is very good. It is better than most Tomato novels and is not clichéd. Also, the behind-the-scenes revelations later are a bit straightforward, but the writing is really good. Come on, I hope the second volume can be longer and the foreshadowing is smoother. There are not many books that can be read with your brain, and it is a new ability system developed by myself.

A really great novel! I don't know why the score is so low, but the writing is very good from small love to righteousness! After finishing the first volume, I felt somewhat unfinished. The naming of the sequence is also very thoughtful! Come on, author! ! !

It's a book that I like very much, so I wrote a little bit about it (I don't know why the book reviews I wrote smell weird) 1. The Chinese style is very strong and incorporates a lot of Buddhism, Taoism, gods, demons and other elements. It can be seen that the author has a very rich accumulation. 2. Very good setting. So far I have seen the setting of the Yellow Emperor's Internal Canon - the mutual generation and restraint of the five internal organs, and the corresponding aura of the five internal organs elements. The seven original sins and virtues - the setting of the way of heaven. The Book of Changes (guessing) divination and divination. The Classic of Mountains and Seas (guessing) some spiritual beasts. 3. The plot is relatively compact, with many links and foreshadowings. There is a feeling that something happens and then suddenly feels very unexpected, but after thinking about it again, it feels very reasonable. Some suggestions: 1. There are a bit few elements of the Foundation, the frequency of files appearing is a bit low, there are few elements of Cthulhu, and there is no indescribable and terrifying feeling like Cthulhu. 2. There are some emotional problems, some stiffness, too fast progress, and even suspicion of ulterior motives. 3. I saw some people saying that changing bodies is awkward. I don't think it's okay, but it's better to change as little as possible, otherwise the plot will feel like it's all over the place. 4. The logical relationship between some foreshadowing and the plot is a bit complicated. It would be better if it could be explained in terms of the protagonist's psychological activities (I may have confused memory) To some readers: 1. If you post a comment when you see a typo and point it out, using the platform's typo correction method will deduct 💰 from the author. Life is not easy for everyone. Write to the author: 1. If it doesn't work, just get a push, otherwise there will be no traffic, no income, and it will look very deserted. 2. I don't know why. In some novels, I want to comment on it after just a few sentences, but in this book, there is a feeling of being speechless. It's weird, weird. 3. I hope to integrate more traditional culture, Chinese strange books, historical trivia, etc. Into the novel. The benefits are obvious.

I stayed up late to read it, the characters are vividly portrayed, the description of the big scenes is vivid, and the knife scene also catches people off guard. The only drawback is that some of the plots are a bit stiff, but the flaws are not hidden, it is a rare masterpiece, please update it as soon as possible [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

The logic is smooth, the image is full, the system is sound, and the development is reasonable. What is distinctive is that the book's description of God is conceptually strong, and many character arcs are just a lonely boat in the frenzy. Focusing on the description of suffering, the sense of reality has indeed increased significantly. As a result, I am more and more looking forward to the growth of the protagonist. The slow growth makes the watching process more urgent, but it is still a novel experience. Overall quite good. The following is my understanding of some of the poisonous points mentioned by others (basically I can explain them reasonably): The individual nature of the protagonist means that he can only play high-end rounds. The protagonist's personal ability (hang) is too obvious + the enemy's (?) Perception is so strong that he has to hide his identity to stay alive. There are too many high-end games in the early and mid-term (the 5-person Immortal Fault is stronger than 4, but the protagonist has not yet reached 5. I look forward to how the author describes this jump in life level in detail. 5 Mainly describes the performance of combat power), which leads to the perception of the municipal supervision bureau (the threshold for using props is high, the intensity of emergencies is high, and it feels like you have tried your best). In fact, almost no low-level monsters ran away. There is almost no cross-regional joint law enforcement capability. This should be because it is difficult to catch immortals. At present, the higher-level combat power (7 and above) has not been demonstrated, and the high-level players are basically still playing chess (this was the feeling until the middle of the third volume).

Mystery is also one of my favorite novels. When I read this book, I felt a little bit as excited as when I first pursued mysteries. The author really put in the effort and wrote his own thing. I hope the official can provide more traffic and not let the good book be covered in dust. I also hope the author does not want to be a eunuch. Come on!

What I like most is the spiritual core of this book. It is uplifting and positive. The protagonist is also an all-around good person. Instead of being inexplicable and decisive in killing in some modern novels, the protagonist is shaped into a person who can use violence at will without any reason, and then advertises the protagonist as a good person.

Yes, it can be called a masterpiece on tomatoes. The characterization of the characters is also pretty good, and the hidden threads in the first chapter are handled quite well. But I'm a little worried about whether the author can sustain this world view, and there are some holes to fill in. What is the use of the wishing vending machine [face covering]

Good book, really good to read. After reading more than 70 chapters, I haven't seen any obvious flaws. The world view and ability settings are very complete. It is the best book I have found on Tomato in the past month. I have read a lot recently, mostly around 9:00, but basically I gave up on the book after dozens of chapters because of some poisonous points. The author has really written a lot in order to make the world view more detailed. He often introduces the contained objects in one or two chapters, various ways of heaven and containment levels. Although it is very detailed, it is really uncomfortable to read. Because it interrupts the rhythm of the plot, these dozens of chapters feel like nothing is seen and not attractive. I read more than 70 chapters of this book on the first day, and I read the next 70 or 80 chapters for almost a week.

Now that I have read the 43 pictures in the third volume, let me talk about my feelings. I think the setting is very good, and the ideas and ideas about the 22 ways of heaven and the corresponding characters are all very good. I am also a big fan of mysterious books. However, the author's writing style is still lacking, both at the end of the first volume and at the end of the second volume. The emotions given to the author are not impactful enough, and there is no mysterious sense of fate. Also, going to the Lawless Land with the Swordsman was too bland in terms of description. There is no description of the feeling of life and death. If it is the author's first book, I personally feel that it is quite acceptable. Five-star praise is given.

This book is really good! ! ! The reason for the low rating is that there are too few people [crying] After reading so many books, I think the system setting of this book is top-notch (a perfect combination of mystery and Chinese style), and the grasp of the plot is also just right (I won't give examples, it's best to read it yourself). It is a typical series of good books that are not popular [crying][crying][crying]

I just finished reading the first volume and I think it was well written. The logic is clear and the writing flow is good. The only thing I don't like may be that the protagonist is written to death, but it still has its flaws and is still a good book. By the way, a small suggestion. Since the author has added sequence settings similar to SCP, he should try to write as many as possible. At the end of the first volume, he only mentioned about ten. The more you write, the higher the combat power in the later stages, and the more difficult it is to insert such settings.

The first volume is really well written. It's very comfortable to read. It's exciting but also peaceful. However, I don't really like the setting of the second volume in which the corpse is brought back to life and the map is changed. I can't stand it. There are other books with the same plot. You can read the first volume and see if you want to continue reading. But this book is still good to read.

The writing is delicate, although there are some slight loopholes, such as why the wealthy father doesn't know those extraordinary paths, but his children do. But after reading this novel all day long, the rating of this novel is definitely 9. There is nothing toxic at the moment, and the writing is okay. I encourage you.

This book is one of the best in the same or similar genre that I have read, and I personally feel that it is definitely in the top five. I have now read the end of the second chapter, and I have to say that the author's writing style is really good, and the foreshadowing is also very good. The knife, especially at the end of the first volume, is really relatable. I feel that this rating is too low, and it is not as popular as it should be. It is a pity. I wish the author will write better and become more popular [Love]

Amazing work on the wrong platform! The logic is tight and the foreshadowing is superb; the rhythm is relaxed and moderate, and tension and warmth are intertwined. The writing is delicate and vivid, and the scenes and characters appear vividly on the page. The power system is even more bold and innovative, breaking out of the traditional framework and bringing a new space of imagination. It is definitely worth reading!

I have finished reading the first volume and I really admire the author's imagination. Various foreshadowings and turning points are perfectly matched [Thoughts] The psychological activities of the characters are also vividly depicted. And this extraordinary system really makes me feel like I saw something mysterious in the first place. I will always support you [send heart][send heart]

It's the first time I've seen this kind of system, using character to represent ability. It's also the first time I've seen someone use a pressure cooker to make elixirs when upgrading. But it's undeniable that it's really good-looking. It may be a new book, but the rating is low. Come on, author!

After thinking about it, I decided to write a review. In fact, I rarely write book reviews, and I rarely read unfinished books. But how can I put it, this book has really liberated my book hunger. The author has written very well. Although I can see the shadow of other books, but to be honest, I can sew well, sew in my own style, and write my own things. The descriptions and settings of the supporting characters in the book can also be remembered and read. The plot and writing can be considered one of Tomato's best products, but I don't know why the rating is so low. It's another gold-digger masterpiece in my tomato shop. I just want to update it faster. It's really frustrating to keep up with the updates. I don't have the satisfaction of reading the entire story in one go. But I hope the author will work hard and continue writing at this pace.

This book is so pitiful. It's so beautiful but only so many people read it. To be honest, the subject matter is very novel and the writing is very good. I think it's a little less than 9.5 Points, but no one reads it. It is very difficult for the author to insist on updating. For selfish reasons, I still want the author to complete it. I don't know if there will be a day.

This rating is indeed low, 9.3 Or 9.4 Is still acceptable. It is enough for me to read a book for two days at a time. The writing style is a bit stiff in some places, but the story telling is okay.

I couldn't stop reading the first volume in two days. Overall, it was really enjoyable. It can be seen that there are shadows of the Lord of Mysteries in the book, but the author also wrote his own characteristics in the book, which I think is great and powerful. But what I want to complain about a little bit is the relationship between the protagonist and the classmate named Su. I feel that the author still lacks some preparation for this aspect. When I suddenly see the confession at the end of the volume, I still feel that I can't hold my breath, which is a bit abrupt. I think it would be better if the author had time to revise it later. Overall, it's a really good book, and it's definitely a book that can be read on the Tomato platform. The battle scenes are rich but not lengthy, the details are well prepared, and the overall rhythm is well controlled. Each event is also mixed with some descriptions of daily life, which is what I particularly like. I hope the author can keep working hard! I will always support the author!

I've been working on it for 3 days and I've almost seen the update. It's fun to watch and has mysterious shadows, but it's not just an imitation. The protagonist's growth path is clear, and the foreshadowing can basically be perfectly closed in the subsequent chapters. I look forward to the follow-up and hope for more updates.

Overall, it's okay. The worldview at the back should be quite big. The emotional line is almost meaningless inside. Then there are the buried pits. It looks like a poisonous spot from the front, but it feels reasonable when you look at the back. And the frequency of updates and the way of burying the pits may be the reason for the low score. The most important thing is that I like the character of the protagonist. If you have a good outlook on life, you can save it. I am very satisfied.

The subject matter is novel, but for me, it feels like a pity to abandon it and tasteless. Come on, author. By the way, I would like to give you an update [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Regardless of the fact that the rating is less than 9, it is all caused by the small number of people. The plot is compact and good, and the narrative is so immersive that I don't even have time to post a review. I finished reading more than one million words in a few days. I just hope the author can hurry up. Such good novels are indeed rare on Tomato.

It's a good book, but the first volume often falls into another event before one event ends. Some of the complexity made my head spin, but it got much better in the second and third volumes. Why isn't it popular? The setting is very novel and it can be considered a scorpion daddy. If you feel that the above words are not good, just think that I am crazy.