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Are There Two Female Protagonists in Tomato? Beg!
When two surnames are united in marriage, a contract is made together, a good relationship will last forever, and the couple will have the same name.
The Transformation Story Should Be at Least 9.0, Please.
The Kind of Relationship Between the Real Daughter and the Fake Daughter Is so Good! It Must Be Finished
The male protagonist's emotional drama is not important
I didn't even know there was a novel with two female protagonists!
High-Scoring Double Heroine Article
Want to watch something like "Dressed as a vicious female supporting character?" I conquer the heroine! (Ginger Sugar Picks Up the Light)" book. High-scoring article with two heroines, I couldn't find it after looking for it for a long time
Looking for a Novel with Two Female Protagonists and No Male Protagonist
Please, there is a book shortage recently. Please note that there is no male protagonist.
The Heroine Is Particularly Attracted to Girls
Looking for High-Quality Articles with Two Female Protagonists! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I want to watch content similar to "Chang Qing Huan". I want a high-rated article with two female protagonists. I have recently become obsessed with ancient settings. Please recommend me.
A Novel with Two Heroines. If I Want Someone with Better Writing Skills, Please Beg Me.
What Is Your Best Two-Girl Novel? I Have a Copy
Want to watch something like "I am your love rival, not your wife!" (I am not a yandere)" book. Do you have any other novels with two heroines that you think are the best? Hee hee, I've been in a bit of a book drought lately, and I've finished all the books I like.
Please Recommend the Original Heroine's Guide to Quickly Wearing the Heroine! ! !
Want to watch something like "Dressed as a vicious female supporting character?" I conquer the heroine! (Ginger Sugar Picks Up the Light)" book. Please recommend the original heroine's guide to quickly wearing the heroine! ! !














































Okay, kissed me. I wanted to write a review after the first volume was over, but I couldn't help myself. The main narrative of this book is slow, but the overall emotions are progressive and orderly, and the rhythm is well controlled. It is reasonable that the relationship progresses slowly. After all, Xie Lian was a "straight woman" before this. Facing Yu Qing's attack, readers may feel something is wrong, but she will not think too much about it. As the story unfolds, there are step-by-step guesses and new perceptions, as well as every emotional trial and guess. How could you not feel the heat next to a fire? As the saying goes, once you fall in love with someone, it's hard to control the surge of emotions. I believe Xie Lian will gradually feel Yu Qing's affection and respond later. But the emotional rivalry scene still needs to be written slowly, and we will watch it slowly. I am looking forward to the follow-up of Xiaofrieszi.
It's so good to knock birds~ My daily life is really pure, and there are many incidents that I would never have thought of when writing a novel... The teacher is really amazing... Different from the conventions of some urban writings and the unreality of Japanese writings, what the author writes is indeed very authentic and close to life. Perhaps it is precisely because of this that I can feel that solid sense of reality, which makes the corners of my mouth go up to the sky (woohoo, my mouth is already crooked, but it gets even crooked when I read the novel...). What is worth noting in the novel is the psychology of the protagonist Xie Lian. From the initial misunderstanding, to haziness, to doubt, to acceptance, from the initial "straight girl" to being broken by Yu Qing, a clear and complete psychological process is displayed in front of you (Yu Qing is the fishing master, even if we are girls, we will be ridiculed by her). There is no jump at all. Those psychological reactions are in line with the character's personality, and some are even cute (the stubborn Xie Lian and the sister-like Yu Qing). In addition, the deputy CP is also very annoying! ! I'm typing this in front of me, but I don't know what to say. Anyway, the book is beautiful! So sweet! Long live the teacher≧▽≦! (Wow, I really feel like this whole article is nonsense)
This is the first time I read a first-person love story with two heroines. I am fascinated by the three chapters. It is very well written. I am looking forward to the follow-up updates (although I haven't seen the back yet). I will always support the author. Please continue to work hard🎉🎉🎉
Very sweet very sweet The little white rabbit was eaten by the big bad wolf step by step [laughing] Woohoo, why did you let me see this book [crying] One update a day, my dear, do you know how tormented my heart is? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
I still say the same thing, if I can, I would like to give it four and a half points, what should I say? This story is quite good. In fact, the reason why I gave this score is because I don't like the sad part at the end. Compared to the he that everyone hopes for, I prefer it to be. If Sister Lian didn't tell the truth, I might have hoped that they would be together. Well, but after telling the truth, Sister Lian is like a child in Yu Qing's eyes, very immature. Childish, and then she unilaterally announced the breakup. Maybe her parents were also a part of it, but the fundamental reason is still because of childishness, which is unfair. If it is just because of her parents, then no problem. I agree with both hands and feet that they will be together again, but it is a pity that because Yu Qing thinks Sister Lian is childish, and her parents, she unilaterally I proposed a breakup without considering Sister Lian's feelings or saying that I will tell you the truth and let's face it together. In reality, I am a person who hates making unilateral choices. I will not consider other people's feelings. I am self-centered and very selfish. So even later, even if their parents have reached an agreement, I still don't want them to be together, and Sister Lian said at the beginning that she wanted to break up with her, but in fact she didn't, so sometimes I actually resented Sister Lian. Anyway, I just thought that if I wanted to break up, just break it off and don't think about it, because the harm she did to you is real. As you said, every minute and every second you are with her is like a knife cutting into your heart, so why do you keep cleaning up? You can scold me, refute me, or criticize me, but that's what I think. This is how I really feel after reading this book, and I also posted it on Moments. I just say that this book is more suitable for BE, just like the abuse book I read before. They may have been moved, but it was only moved. When a person holds a knife and really hurts you, you will never go back to the past.
It's written in the first person, and is more realistic than other love stories. It's not the kind that parents would support once you come out. I was rolling on the bed in the early stages [like it], but the heroine gave me the feeling. . It's hard to imagine that she used to be a dog licker. The three-dimensional image creation of each character is very good, but it is really difficult to end this novel just when it has just begun. There is still a lot to write and a lot of things to do. The time in this novel is only two or three months. This may also be regarded as a characteristic. The characters in the book have their own lives, but what seems like the ending is actually a blank space for the future? The emotional description is not undelicate, it is really top-notch. I just don't know if it's an autobiography. I personally think it's unlikely, but the ending that looks very hasty is really weird. I have to think more about it. As soon as I fell asleep and saw the ending, the sky fell. Anyway, I found a treasure and the author is looking forward to the next book [Like]
It's really good and very different from other books. This feeling of ambiguity but not crossing the line makes me feel excited to read it. It's really not like other novels that give you a straight shot, followed by an industrial saccharine (mainly because I've read too much industrial saccharine) [please update]
Good-looking [learned] so sweet [send heart] He likes to pull and pull, Yu Qing is very flirtatious, please win Xie Lian and get married quickly [laughs] Zhu Ziwen also teased her, she felt a bit handsome and decisive, and she fascinated Ding Qiqi to death haha
It's a very delicate and well-written book. It's very heartwarming. It reminds me of Zhou Chou and An Dao. In short, I like it very much. So, author, can you give me more information? I'm so anxious [crying]
Few book reviews When I first started reading the novel, I didn't know that the author was an autobiography, but I felt that the novel was very realistic. I was hesitant to read this novel because of some reviews, but luckily I did. A very realistic and beautiful story. Many people are not optimistic about the plot of breakup and reconciliation, but from a realistic perspective, they can understand it. One is due to age and experience, and the other is that people's emotions are very complicated, and it is very real to have negative thoughts. Indeed, when I write a lot of book reviews, I want to excuse Yu Qing. Maybe the evil side she shows makes me feel very real. I just feel that many people's native families are not perfect. Yu Chun lives by looking at people at such a young age. Sometimes it has revealed the pressure of the family that Yu Qing has lived in since she was a child. I feel very sorry for Yu Qing. Many people in this world cannot choose their family of origin. There are some speculations about Yu Qing's idea of breaking up. One is family pressure, and the other is that she is actually a coward. She is not brave enough but wants to think that her partner should be more mature and can withstand the wind and rain with her. In fact, this is a growth issue that she has to face. In other words, if she doesn't fall in love, will she have to deal with setbacks in the future? Fortunately, they reconciled later, because I feel more like Yu Qing, who has an evil side but also wants to be loved. The luckiest thing is to meet a heart-warming and kind person, grow up together, and see the scenery of life together. (Because I and my girlfriend have separated and grown together, I cherish people and relationships more deeply) Blessings to lovers 999
It's so well written, keep it up
After reading it, my personal feelings about the plot after the breakup can be described as confused. No matter which novel I read, I will put my own emotions into it. The author's writing is good, the first part of the story is very interesting, and the breakup is a turning point. It is blameless, but a series of ellipses and then a 270-degree reversal forcibly separated me from it. It was too hasty and left too much white space. A good story gave a hasty ending. I cannot accept the jump from the delicateness of the previous article to the bottomless blank space, but as a reader, I wish the beautiful woman in the story happiness and peace.
It's really beautiful! The content is also from the author's autobiography. The heroine's unknowing emotions in the article are also very delicate. The emotional rhythm is a little slow, but it's so good! [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
It's worthy of five stars. It's funny without any stupid plot. It's very good. Highly recommended. I really like the author's novels. There are so many funny things in them.
The first-person perspective is a bit like Japanese light novels. It's quite interesting. The author is optimistic about you [I learned it] Later, the whole breakup plot collapsed [petrified] [sad]
To be honest, this kind of first-person book is really difficult to write. It's great that the author can write it like this. I've read another first-person book before. It's really strange, but the writing style of this one can be integrated into it very well. The writing style can also be like normal. To be honest, this kind of first-person book is really difficult to write. It's great that the author can write it like this. I've read another first-person book before. It's really strange, but this one is very strange. The writing style can be integrated like usual. I highly recommend it [OK] [laugh] [sneery laugh]
It's so beautiful, the only Lily book I've read without skipping chapters.
Beautiful, very interesting Woohoo, this book is really good. If it wasn't updated every day, more people would definitely read it [I'm about to cry]
Please, please let me read one more chapter. If there is no new chapter, I feel like there are ants crawling all over me.
Chapter 93 Confession, you're welcome. I'll go and see it myself.
In fact, the relationship is not slow, but the narrative is relatively slow. But after reading all the fast-food novels on the market where relationships progress very quickly, in the end I still prefer this slow-flowing rhythm. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is really interesting, unlike the stereotyped Lily cp who is silly and sweet but cold on the surface but actually doting. (Some authors want to write the protagonist as a naive but reliable person, but the writing is really stupid if the writing is not strong enough.) The writing is really good, fully demonstrating the advantages of writing. Such a low score is really not deserved. It can only be said that the pace of the times is too fast, and it is difficult for anyone to read slow-paced novels.
The writing is excellent, the plot is interesting, the emotions are delicate, it conforms to normal logic, and the sweetness is moderate. It is a rare masterpiece in Tomato! Highly recommended!
About three days ago, I read all the dozen or so chapters I had saved these days. When I read, lame excuses, concealing the true purpose, and playing with her, I kept thinking about these. Then the next day, around seven or eight o'clock in the morning, I saw the finale. Is this the end? So rushed
Great, it's Lu Tong and we are saved The part before the end is too blunt It gives people a very deliberate feeling, which lowers the experience of the whole book.
The details are very attentive, the plot is very real, and she is so sweet! All in all, the fat intestine looks good (#^.^#)😍
It looks good. The main character's thoughts are too interesting. The first person may have a sense of immersion. The details may be autobiographic. There is a slight conflict between the two protagonists later, which is normal. There will inevitably be some minor problems in a couple's relationship. A good relationship will always have some hardships. In short, it is good-looking.
It's very interesting. It's not a dramatic or weird world where the whole world is homo. It's a very ordinary story about two girls, Ji Liancheng and then making each other fall in love. It's not the kind of jokes that deliberately make you laugh, but the kind of informality in the words when chatting with your high school friends. This "irregularity" in the author's writing style is definitely the most important highlight of the author's writing. The laziness and mischief in the author's writing make the relatively innocent content very interesting. I really recommend it. It is definitely a good work worthy of 9 points or more.
I also think it's well written.
Ah, I wanted to do it at first, it looks pretty good
It has been three or four years since I last read "Her Mountain, Her Sea", and I have never seen a work with this style of writing (or maybe I haven't seen enough of it). In the past, I mostly read fairy tales and Western fantasy novels. It has been a long time since I have read an article that is neither systematic nor so refreshing. It is not meant to be either praise or criticism, but it really brought me back to the experience of mountains and seas. There is no other purpose but the collision of two hearts. The writing is very to my liking, and my mental state in the early and middle stages of the novel made my mouth water. I also enjoyed eating the knives in the later period. (I used to prefer small knives, but a group of friends gave me the book "Yongai Wuxi" and the wound has never healed. I don't dare to look for knife articles anymore). All I can say about this book is that it's delicious! It just ended too quickly. Who knows how painful it was to see my wife happily go to bed in the middle of the night and then finish the chase at the speed of light the next day qvq. Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography? Is it really not an autobiography?