Genshin Impact: Live in Amber's House at the Beginning

Author, how many female protagonists does the male protagonist have?

Could you please have some gourmet captive food?

After reading Chapter 15, I feel that it suits my taste. It is well written. The only thing is that the punctuation is not good. Every sentence is marked with double quotation marks.

The book is very good, but the punctuation is difficult to read. It would be better if the punctuation is corrected. I hope the punctuation in the first few chapters can be changed, otherwise some people will be discouraged.

It's still very interesting to read, but it makes me so uncomfortable to see if the author can think about it before breaking sentences.

Dude, why did you change the punctuation?

No, one chapter a day, only 1,000 words per chapter, is it so updated?

This book is good, but too short.

The book is very good, but there are some punctuation problems that I hope can be corrected. Come on, I've been waiting for you

Very good, basically no big problems, worth a look

Although there are typos from time to time, the plot is good and the book is worth reading

@ Want to eat walnuts @ is rich in content. It's layered and looks good, looks good, looks good.

Very well written. It is a novel that is more suitable for relaxation

The aroma of wine is also afraid of deep alleys

Come on come on come on come on

Come on, be with you

Very nice, keep up the good work from the author!

Can we accept all the women?

I support the new book, which feels a bit average. . .

Why is the content different from what I saw before?

The girl is so cute. I really want to take her home and be my wife.

This rating should be a bit low. I think the writing is pretty good. There are basically no poisonous points, and there are also interesting points. It suits my taste.

Why does every paragraph have to have double quotes! ! ! ! !