Heart*

Good! ! ! ! ! !

The rhythm is too chaotic, and the name seems awkward. First of all, the protagonist or the villain must have obvious personality traits, right? The narrative structure of the novel is not good, which makes the whole novel unreadable from the beginning. Otherwise, if you tell everything that should be said at the beginning, it always feels like you are hiding it, or you have not organized the outline well, and the main line that should be taken is much different.

Awesome, [admiration][admiration]

I feel like each chapter would have been better if it were longer, and the emotional scenes were well written.