About 65 million years ago, countless meteorites fell on the earth, causing the fifth mass extinction of life, a devastating disaster. However, this disaster was not meaningless. Under the impact of the meteorite, a mysterious energy accompanied by the impact of the meteorite fragments changed the ecological environment and life forms of the earth. Large or small meteorites turned into mountains or stones, and then grew vegetation over tens of thousands of years. They were first eaten by herbivores, and then the herbivores were eaten by carnivores. Driven by the biological chain, this mysterious force exists in the form of cells throughout the earth. Until 1,000 years ago, humans discovered the remains of this kind of meteorite in outer space and brought it back to Earth. Then, under the research of a biologist named "Xia Yuan", they completely liberated this mysterious force that has always existed in all living things and named it "Heart Core". In the world 1000 years later, will this force bring hope or despair to humans?
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The rhythm is too chaotic, and the name seems awkward. First of all, the protagonist or the villain must have obvious personality traits, right? The narrative structure of the novel is not good, which makes the whole novel unreadable from the beginning. Otherwise, if you tell everything that should be said at the beginning, it always feels like you are hiding it, or you have not organized the outline well, and the main line that should be taken is much different.
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I feel like each chapter would have been better if it were longer, and the emotional scenes were well written.
Good! ! ! ! ! !
The rhythm is too chaotic, and the name seems awkward. First of all, the protagonist or the villain must have obvious personality traits, right? The narrative structure of the novel is not good, which makes the whole novel unreadable from the beginning. Otherwise, if you tell everything that should be said at the beginning, it always feels like you are hiding it, or you have not organized the outline well, and the main line that should be taken is much different.
Awesome, [admiration][admiration]
I feel like each chapter would have been better if it were longer, and the emotional scenes were well written.