The Witcher: Plane Wars

Admit yourself, I still write very carefully. The protagonist Colin grew up as a slave and experienced a lot. There is nothing out of the ordinary about how the heroines get to know each other and fall in love. It was a bit slow to pick up in the early stage, and there were also some pitfalls, which will be explained later. The description of plane wars will probably begin in the third volume, and readers with patience can follow it. Finally, everyone is welcome to provide comments and feedback. To explain one thing here in the follow-up review, some friends mentioned that some of the previous chapters had little to do with the protagonist and there were too many supporting characters. The first volume has been revised. There are also some questions that friends mentioned. In fact, I took them into consideration when I set the outline, but I didn't mention them in my reply because I didn't want to spoil them. But I will definitely find the answers later. I hope everyone can give a newbie more patience and continue reading seriously. I can't promise how good my writing will be, but I will definitely work hard on my first book.

The current progress is 65 chapters. Based on my 20 years of online writing experience, the writing style is not bad and I can read it. The shortcoming is that the mystery of the wizard has not been written yet. So far, I don't feel that the protagonist's research is of an academic nature. In addition, he has to take care of his family [facepalm]

Starting from the fragments of a magical world, catching up with the wizarding world and being promoted, passive integration, the idea is quite unique, but currently, the level is a bit low, and only the strongest is ready to advance to the fourth level. Are you preparing to be a stepping stone for the protagonist? I'll wait for you to arrange the plot later. Overall it's not bad, but it would be better to add a few more chapters every day.

I haven't noticed anything else, but I just noticed that the author seems to have a certain way of courting women? The plot design is reasonable, but if there are too many female protagonists, it will be boring. The number must be controlled. The latest chapter is four now. Let me make a blind guess, is ten enough? Haha 😊

The writing is okay. It seems that you are planning to start from a small place? How did it grow in the end? Let's wait and see, come on.

It's okay! Although it is a bit fast to collect the harem, and what is different from other wizard streams and invading planes is that there is no plane suppression, there are floating ships and space fortresses, etc. It feels like a prequel to the Ash Lord world. The wizard world here has just advanced to the intermediate plane world, so you can look forward to fattening up the harem.

A very good wizard novel that describes the protagonist's journey from a slave to a supreme being. There are many beauties accompanying me along the way.

Not like a wizard, like a mage

The wizarding novels are more exciting, in line with the wizarding novel's exploration of knowledge, conquest of planes, and upgrading of the world. At the same time, it does not provide any outrageous plug-ins for the protagonist. It is not the kind of mindless cool novel, nor is it the kind of mindless upgrading article. Overall, it is not bad. I read it in just two minutes in one day.

It's a pretty good book, but the first few chapters are a bit bland. But it was okay after that.

Very good Come on, author

Very good book, keep it up

It's quite interesting. I hope there won't be anything in the future. Just go back to Earth, and write about time travel well. What's the point of traveling back? And can you also include Teacher Lina?

It's very beautiful. Just looking at the front of it gives you a very comfortable feeling. The characters are written in a useful way.

Encourage the author [smile][smile]

It's pretty good, to be honest it's okay.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Come on, it's not easy to read this book

So far it seems ok, give me some support

It's okay, just pass the time and read it, there's nothing bad about it

Nice! Come on come on come on come on

Come on, great author

The finale directly released the outline. [Cover face]

Come on, the more you write, the better.

Good book, good book, very beautiful.

Generally speaking, there is no problem. It may be too early. It may be better to write it later.

I've watched half of it, and it seems to my liking.

It looks good. The more I watch it, the more I love watching it. Temporary

The writing is delicate and the descriptions are accurate. The plot unfolds slowly and develops slowly to be consistent with the real situation. Looking forward to more exciting follow-up!

The story is bizarre and fascinating