Red Mansion: Traveling Through Sun Shaozu Without Beating His Wife Jia Yingchun

The writing is okay, the angle is quite novel and interesting. I hope to improve the writing and optimize the voice. Come on, author!

Although there are some minor flaws, it is still very interesting. It is a Red Mansion fanfic. This is the first time I have seen someone write about Sun Shaozu.

The writing is really good. I watched The Bastard Is the King, The Bastard is Romantic, and I Can Turn the Sky. Everyone thinks Red Mansion Spring is better, but I feel it is not as good as this one. Some people don't like it, maybe because the protagonist is more specific, that is, they don't accept Qin Keqing, Lin Daiyu, Xue Baochai, etc. I don't care, after all, Xue Baochai is okay, Lin Daiyu and Yingchun are not many, they have the same disease, Qin Ke Qing is too sexy, I like this heroine better, and the author's writing is also very delicate, but there is no plot like the Dragon King, the pretentiousness is all in small clothes, the plot is warm and daily, the only bad thing is that the update is interrupted, let me know when the author will continue writing

It's okay, but the protagonist seems to want to marry Yingchun so much that he spends so much money before he even gets a wife.

As a heavy red fan, I really like this book. Don't be too picky about the language or timeline and other details. This is a very good book. After all, two pieces of wood are difficult for most of us to tolerate. Brother Lang also has a good character and upright views. Come on, author!

The angle is novel, Ermu's rescue, transformation and cultivation plan, I think it will work.

This is the best Red Mansions novel in my opinion. There is no brainless and disgusting stallion, nor is there any one-on-one appearance of a duke or king, nor is there any so-called "powerful plot" that ordinary people who have never been a village chief think are bullshit and wrong.

Very good, except that the last one turned into a breeding pig, the previous one is still very reasonable.

I originally planned to give it a 3-star review because I wrote too little about Sun and it was not enough! Overall it's good

Very good. A good piece of writing that takes a different approach. The characters are also very vivid.

I like it very much

Sun Shaozu in the northwest still became a Zhongshan wolf because of his message. I think this paragraph is very well written. The original work has not been changed. Please update it quickly.

A rare Red Mansion fanfic with Zhongshan Wolf as the protagonist

Good books worth reading

The writing is very creative, and the content of the incident and status are also more appropriate.

How should I put it? The meaning of the question is very new, but please update it soon. I also want to read Jia Yingchun [I'm about to cry]

It's so good. I don't know why it doesn't get a high score. Come on, author, I'll always support you.

The plot is not bad. It is suggested that in the end, after the author makes money and returns home with the beauty, he will expand his business overseas. Anyway, it's very big outside.

Wonderful content and wonderful presentation

It's nice, but the ending is a little too rushed.

Good! Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!

Relatively good. A book.

The ending is too fast

Not bad, very pretty

I finally finished writing it, although it ended very quickly, almost

It was beautiful, but it ended too early

The author's perspective is very imaginative and the future is bright.

The author's writing is super nice, but the ending is a little rushed.

It's well written and the characters are well drawn. I hope the author keeps it up.

It's great to watch! It was a bit disappointing to end so quickly, but the ending was great!