Genshin Impact: Those Years of Being a Naughty Kid

The writing is superb! The plot of the game and the world tasks are all intact. It is not a mindless white story where the heroine focuses on love, but a serious career. Occasionally, the heroine exudes the charm of the succubus and saves some knives. The protagonist group laughs and tears during the trip. Regrets will be made up for. Good deeds are rewarded. The heroine is a naughty child but she is not annoying! It can be seen from this that the author's views are very upright, and the story will not destroy the highlights of travelers, characters, and NPCs, which makes up for the regret of many fans not being able to travel with travelers from beginning to end. Both the characters and NPCs in the novel are flesh-and-blood individuals. The most important thing is that the author will also recall and narrate the points in the world plot that we do not understand and forget in a language that we can understand. This is very good. Those who play with Traveler and Paimon are all good friends!

The author's writing style is simply great! I really like Su Dadai's look [blowing kiss]. The plot of Mondstadt is really great, but after reaching Liyue, the plot just goes along. It seems a little boring. The main plot can add a little bit of new ideas. The legendary mission can have a few chapters before and after each country. I prefer to write the previous chapter before writing the legend. Leave a little spoiler, for example, write the beginning of each legendary mission at the end of the chapter, so that readers can guess whose legend it is, which will make it more suspenseful. This is my personal suggestion. You can try to write it or not, it doesn't matter, just treat it as fun [shy] I look forward to the author's next update [blowing kiss] I'm here to follow up on the review~ I really like Su! Although I have been writing for a while, I really read it frequently every once in a while, and every character in the author's writing feels like he has his own thoughts! By the way, I really like the plot of Rice Wife! No matter how many times I have rewatched it, I still particularly like the plot of Ina Wife. The original plot of Ina Wife not only makes people feel novel, but also relatively completes Su's character setting! And the writing style has been greatly improved! I really want to brag! [Please update]

Oh my God, I've been watching it for so long without realizing it. It's really good to watch, and there are very few characters that are OOC. At first, I thought the heroine would have the soft character in most fans, but I didn't expect that the more I read, the more surprised I became. The author writes it very well! Su Qiang also has a heart to protect his friends, and many plot writers have integrated and written it very smoothly. I really like the daily interactions and joys and sorrows of travel between Su and her friends. Many characters in the article are very delicious (?). For me who don't like weak female protagonists in Genshin Impact fanfiction, this is simply a fairy tale! Thank you to the author for the great meal, I will eat it [crying]

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Overview: Players Su, Kong, and Paimon form a traveler team, including Count Tuotuo. They focus on an adventure journey of clinging to people, sticking to people, sweeping goods, and doing whatever they want. Good: 1. When I was working on the plot, I wanted to say no to some unreasonable plots. Inazuma's dual perspectives go hand in hand, and it incorporates side plots while advancing the main plot, which is very clever. Count Totuo reminds me of Nata's little earth dragon, that one is super cute. 2. The bonds with the characters in the plot are more numerous and closer than in the game, and there are many plots of giving each other gifts. Make full use of your gaming backpack. However, from a game creation perspective, it would indeed be a bit strange for the protagonist to be too familiar. Plot elements such as following flowers and mandrill-decorated rooms can also be integrated into the game plot to highlight the specialness of the protagonist. 3. Shura Field is well grasped, with only a vague feeling, sweet spots but not too strong. Wendy's Transformation into Wind Crystal Butterfly really impressed me. Awkward: Su is indeed too bearish sometimes, such as stealing the dragon's whiskers that his ancestors shed. But there aren't many, so it's acceptable. Not many changes have been made to the original plot.

For me, there are some weird points. For example, although it is called All Su, there are Ayaka Kamisato, Xiaomiya, and Sora in the heart. Especially the chapters about Ayaka made me uncomfortable. The protagonist Su felt like a background pet, and some of Ayaka's words made people feel uncomfortable. Also, I was a little surprised because of Dain's unrequited love. Everything else is okay, but I think the protagonist Su is still too well-behaved and doesn't really do whatever she wants. Anyway, it's still good-looking and I will continue to follow it.

I really like the heroine, a husky-like cat, who will start fighting and poking at me whenever we disagree, so I like not to talk nonsense. And she got along very well with Sora and Mandrill.

It was so good, I was blown away. The protagonist was very easy to relate to, both the male and female characters. I was laughing the whole time, and I was so excited while reading the story. The protagonist is a very cute girl, super funny, super well-behaved, and a super good baby! ! ! ! The relationship with True Lord Liuyun is also very friendly. Seeing this every day makes me feel soft.

This is a masterpiece! I hope it doesn't stop updating. I really like this protagonist and it's great that he travels with Sora! 🥳

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I wanted to give it a 4.5, But I couldn't order it, haha. From my personal experience, the writing is very good, the characters are well created, and the characters are basically non-ooc. It should be considered a relatively perfect fanfic. The background is also very serious and well-documented. Su is also very cute and handsome. I am following the main line. It is not recommended for those who want to make major changes to the main line. The main thing I don't like is that if you are very, very well-versed in the background of Genshin Impact and hold your own opinions, there may be some conflict of views.

It seems pretty good so far, the pace is moderate, and overall it follows the main line. If you want to make big changes, I don't recommend watching it. It's a bit slow, and the shaping of each character is relatively full. At present, there is one scene that seems a little uncomfortable to watch. The scene where Ling Hua and Sora go to the festival, because as mentioned before, Sora understands his feelings for the protagonist. The intimacy of Sora and Ling Hua's behavior here is a bit too high. It may be a little bit worse when reading, but overall it is understandable and acceptable. This plot also enriches Ling Hua's character image and makes the characters more fleshed out.

Although it's not finished yet, I think it's pretty good overall. This article can be considered a slow-burning article. If you like this kind of article, I recommend reading it. This article mainly focuses on the original plot in the game, but there will also be some minor changes (although the changes may not be much different from the original plot). I personally think that the author's writing style is quite good, and everyone is written with vitality. Su is a very out-of-the-box kid, and I quite like her. The main line will be longer after reaching Inazuma. Compared with the main lines in the previous two countries, it will be much shorter. However, the main line of Inazuma is not bad, not bad. There will also be some extra emotional if lines for individual characters in the future, which I'm looking forward to. Finally, I wish the author a better and better writing! Action is worse than excitement, go and see it~ I wish you all a happy eating~(｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's super good-looking, and the heroine and Sora really have a good rapport. Although I don't know if the two of them are CPs?

Super pretty! I really like the character of the heroine, especially the cute little one with a tiger head and a tiger head! ♥とThe author, please keep updating! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Su Zhen is super cute, and Brother Kong is also super delicious. Originally, because I chose Yingmei, I didn't have any special feelings towards Brother Kong, but now I can no longer hold the banner of Kongsu firmly high! Of course, Mandrills are also delicious, but I still prefer Kong Kong.

At first glance, it turns out that it is not the first book, and it is not something that ordinary people can write. There are actually quite a lot of them like Air Travel Tomatoes, and they are all written as two cameras, but this one is different. The heroine is very lovable, the plot is well handled, and it is smooth and scary. It is definitely well-conceived, and the conception is very good, and there are more than 900 photos. I love it.

It looks good, it really looks good, but it's a little too little. Everything is good, and the author's writing is also very good. There are so few people. This book is really good. Come and read it. It's great. Come and read it.

Madam, madam, you look beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! Big cheers for the author. I really like Su Xiongxiong's sensible yet sensible look! Su is just a little arrogant, and she is only arrogant in front of people who can tolerate her arrogance.

I want to buy sweet-scented osmanthus wine, but it's a pity that I won't see my old friend again. This author is very diligent in updating. As long as you don't read it every few days, there will be several chapters. The language is vivid, interesting and vividly written. The character traits and qualities of the characters in the article

Super pretty! The emotional development is very delicate. As the plot progresses, it feels great to see the naughty child at the beginning gradually grow up! And as Su gradually integrates into Teyvat, I feel that Su matches well with everyone, and is a very lovable group favorite + heartthrob type! Finally, I support Kong being the official palace! ! !

It looks great. I can actually understand some of her rather bearish behaviors from the heroine's perspective. It's very fun to watch. It's a daily novel and the output is really large. However, I read in the comments that there is an extra episode, but I looked through the catalog for a long time and didn't see it. It just feels like there is still a little less sugar.

Good, good, good, good. Boutique

The daily slow-burning type, the behavior pattern of the travel team is quite comfortable, but the large-scale events are not written in order. The first Hai Lantern Festival in Liyue was written about the kite theme at the beginning of this year. The first large-scale event of Dao Wife did not write about Ling Ren's appearance. The Dao Wife autograph session was written about this year's Rainbow Color Tour of Life Rock, so the time is a bit wrong [Thoughts]

At first the heroine looked like she was nervous. But the more I look at it, the better it gets. Fortunately, there are travelers and everyone who drag the protagonist towards the thinking of normal people. (To be honest, I didn't read many fanfics because the protagonist was weak in some aspects and the supporting characters' action patterns were weird) Recommend a look

It's super good-looking, the main character is well-characterized, not OOC, but it's a very good book anyway! Looking forward to Nata's plot!

Su is too good-looking. She is the kind of girl who is powerful, super defensive, cold and soft-hearted, handsome and cute. I really like this heroine, and the interactions with the characters are not OOC. She is very consistent with the character. I always like it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

I just realized I didn't write a book review👉👈 Very beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! Whether you are CP or CB, you can watch it every day🙏The daily writing is very heartwarming and the plot is also very good. . Well, I can't tell you. Anyway, I won't delay the details👍. The background worldview about Su is also very grand. I won't praise it, but it's shockingly delicious😋

It is a very grand and original world view. The writing is profound and simple, the emotional logic and expression are very appropriate, the plot is integrated very naturally, and it is very comfortable to watch. This is fine chaff worth savoring thousands of times! ! !

My dear Da Da, I love this book, I love it like the wind in Mondstadt. So, I really want to read the new chapter, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love you Dada, the best Dada in the world. I wish you Dada more and more money.