The protagonist, Lei Zhen, transmigrates to a parallel world. Damn it, he comes with a System that turns him into a lovesick doormat for ten thousand years?
A doormat System would be bad enough, but he even has to become cannon fodder?
Ding! [The Host is dissatisfied with the System's settings. Would you like to change them?]
“Change them!” [System settings changed. From now on, the Host will be attacked by the protagonist and every villain in the System's settings. Please take care.]
Screw you, you dog of a System! I'm not going to be some supporting character, and I'm not going to be a lovesick doormat. I'll be the protagonist of my own story!
If every villain is going to attack me, then I'll kill every villain!
I make the rules in the world I've transmigrated into.
I'm going to be the ultimate villain!
The first son of luck is the son of the protagonist woman, and the second is the protagonist woman's brother.
It's very well written, I like it very much, keep up the good work
I can already guess what will be written next.
There are no other major flaws, except that the pace suddenly speeds up in the later stages, and the heroine's name is often confused or mistyped, which is very awkward. Everything else is relatively good.
The author is a talented person. I can tell that the protagonist Ye Fan seems to like his mother. He may have an Oedipus plot.
It looks good, but it's not good enough, the author [laughs evilly]
Very good-looking,
Very good, interesting and picturesque
It ended too quickly
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