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The first extra episode is simply amazing! ! ! The ending made me, the electric deer girl, extremely happy! ! ! ! It makes me 🌟🐟 feel high! ! ! !

The atmosphere here is very good, the readers and authors are very friendly, the articles are also well written, Alastor is well portrayed, and the characters are well set up. I highly recommend reading this novel. I really like this book!

Does the teacher plan to write this book as all al or al all? Or is it just voxal/alvox? Is there any CP you can write down in the introduction? ◝(⑅•ᴗ•⑅)◜...°♡ (Is al on top or bottom?) (The following only represents my personal opinion, please don't criticize me if you don't like it (⋟⋞)Don't scold me (｡í _ ì｡) Mr. Www's OC is indeed quite good, but I personally am not very interested in it (I don't really like OCs with dream girls/men, or OCs with dream girls/men tendencies). If it is just a side story, it's okay, but it involves too much of the main plot, which makes me feel a little uncomfortable when watching it... There are many places that have to be skipped, which affects the viewing experience. Of course, this is the teacher's book, and it is very hard for the teacher to write the book. You can do whatever the teacher likes. And this is just something I personally don't like, so I still gave it four stars (◦˙▽˙◦)

It's very interesting, the characters are very consistent, and the interaction with VOX is also very interesting, but there are too many extras. I am also curious whether the author will write some content for the second season? I'm a little curious about the scene where Alastor appears to be a prisoner but plays cards with VOX behind his back (this is purely imaginary, don't mind teasing each other)

I love it so much. It's rare to see such interesting fanfics in Tomato. In fact, maybe it's mainly because I love Vox so much and this is the only one in Tomato that talks about Vox. And compared to other books I've read, the author is really hard-working.

First person, the subject matter is very new! But I feel like I am reading the original work. If possible, I will add a blueberry deer in the later stage. I really feel that the national fortune is gone, woo woo woo XX

Thank you to the author for the great update, I hope you can continue to update [laughing evilly]😞

First of all, this novel is indeed very good, but I just want to make some personal comments. 1. You refer to me too much in the first person. Sometimes there are multiple ones connected to one, which doesn't sound the same. 2. There are too few paragraphs, and the whole thing is just a big lump. I want a big lump, just because I hope this can be subdivided. The 3rd extra chapter is fine, but the whole thing is put at the end, but then this is the smallest one and the whole thing has no impact. Everything else is fine, and there are really few topics like Alastor. Five points for the author's hard work. I still give you a great author.

There are really very few novels about time traveling as Alastor, so please don't stop updating! ! ! (இωஇ )

It looks pretty good so far, I hope you continue to work hard! (=^▽^=) I hope to update 5 chapters every day! (≧ X ≦)

Don't say anything else, it's just super cool. This is the first time I've seen Alastor from this personal perspective. It's so interesting. I'm already thinking about what you're going to write after you finish writing the entire main plot [laughing] [laughing]

Good luck, haha ​​[smirking] [sending my heart] I just don't know if there is a cp [thinking]

It's a good book in the cold circle, but it's a pity that there are few people in this circle, so the rating is relatively low, otherwise the rating could be higher [I understand] Although I don't understand Hell Inn that well, the characters in it are very three-dimensional and interesting. I hope the author can keep writing [laughing] [like] Finally, I would like to ask briefly, does the protagonist have any CP? [Laughing evilly] Regardless of whether there is or not, I will continue to watch, I just want to know the answer [laughter]

*Damn, Tomato's ability to swallow comments has really taught me a lot. Forget it, send it again. I don't believe it, I can't post it yet. Hehe, this is also my trumpet. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Hehe, the trumpet adds another book review [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

So far, this is the first completed inn novel I've found. It's huge and full. The level is acceptable. It is recommended to read quickly and pass the overall level. The presence of the system is very weak and can almost be ignored. Those who do not look at the system flow can safely invest in it. The first half mainly focuses on the plot (the first part). Baozi who has not watched the original series can understand the main plot and the characteristics of the protagonist. The second half is about Zootopia. Looking back at the first plot, the protagonist mainly acts with the protagonist group. He still has his original abilities but rarely shows them. Some extras have CP, but the main text does not. CP has Electric Deer, the protagonist and Ian (should be original characters) There is a temporary angel deer at the back of the plot At the end, there are complaints about the plot and character collapse of the second part, and the ending is touching. Finally, I would like to ask other readers who have read this book, why did I read it from beginning to end and had almost no comments? Thanks for watching

It's so good, five-star review. I hope there will be more episodes like this. I really love Rivals. I hope the little deer is down there [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing is very good, but I feel that the descriptions and expressions in some places are a bit strange, as if the semantics are repetitive or inappropriate ( But the overall feeling is very good, quite interesting, five stars (after all, it is quite tiring to write an article while going to school, thank you to the author for your hard work)

Finally Finally found a book with Alastor as the main character I am very satisfied with the fact that the character is not destroyed at will 👍

I highly recommend this book, a great work by a Hell Inn fan. It's very consistent with the original work! [Sending my heart] The most important thing is that the author is hard-working! [Smiling evilly] Requesting articles! @Arasto

Xiaolu and Minsk are too close to each other. The extras are really nice. Xiaolu and TV are also very close to each other. I really recommend Dianlu Xiang [like]

This is the first time I have seen such a beautiful book written in the first person. I love reading it😍😍😍

I forgot to leave a review. ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶♥ Is very well written, as is the extra, but sometimes I can't quite understand it. The second season of the anime has ended. I look forward to the follow-up written by (o^^o) teacher. Just don't stop updating. Just write and I will support you until the end! ٩(●´৺`●)૭٩(●´৺`●)و

It's nice to watch, but I still hope that the finale won't be like the original story of a happy ending and making dumplings [smile] There is still room for improvement in the character of Adam. I hope it won't be like in the original work, where he talks trash with unknown meaning before dying and is then used as dumpling stuffing [eating melon] Of course, everything depends on the author

When I first saw the title of this book, I thought it was a stereotypical role-playing protagonist, but later I discovered that the author has a very good handle on the characters. By the way, the author has written a lot of extras, and you can also submit your own designs. The author really knows how to write! ! ! !

Love to watch, like, more points (le) Nice Alastor, makes my broadcast spin (

It's so awesome, the super exquisite inn story, I love it so much! Just can you give me more? Please!

Did I remember the wrong book? Isn't it about running for the National Games? I'm watching it with great enthusiasm.

Yummy radio demon makes my microphone spin Kneeling down, I used to be in the comment area in the circle, and I promised the author to comment, but then there was no comment... Now I have added it (Kneeling down. Jpg) The author writes very well! Please keep writing! (Waving handkerchief. Jpg)

The author writes well, no need to comment at all, it is very comfortable to read

It's beautiful, it's nice, it's nice. The author describes it very carefully. The author's description is like writing an essay