Naruto: I Started by Kicking the God of Ōtsutsuki to Pieces

It's okay. The only bad thing is that many people like to substitute their own characters for Naruto's. The reason why Naruto is Naruto is because no matter what happens, he will slowly come out of his inner shadow, he will stick to his own path no matter what, and his character will not change no matter what the situation. This can be seen from what happened to Kawaki. Originally, Naruto was supposed to be more mature in his rebirth, but Naruto here is obviously more childish.

The beginning is wrong. In a word, this book is more suitable for Naruto to be a time traveler, but there is no good beginning and foreshadowing, which leads to huge differences in the original characters, such as Naruto. Naruto is the protagonist, and he has not traveled through time in the original novel. He is equivalent to an adult. He is written with the character of an elementary school student. In other words, it would be better if you change it to a time traveler. Summary: Without a good start, viewers will not be able to get involved, and there will be no foreshadowing for the character transformation. I hope it can be improved. The subject matter is pretty good, but the beginning and the characters of the original characters were inappropriate, which made me have no desire to continue reading.

Overall, it's okay. The disadvantage is that it doesn't feel like Naruto, and it lacks Naruto's usual carefree and serious character. Just look at the catalog and see if Naruto fights the Sage of Six Paths... It really shocked me. If you look at theoretical combat power, Sage of Six Paths is still the highest (upper limit) among Hokage currently.

Big cheers for the author

That... Author: Can you keep Hinata full? She can eat about 100 bowls of Ichiraku Ramen in one meal. I have never eaten enough, so my strength is quite low. The strength does not need to be too high, as long as it reaches the upper reaches of the top 12 Xiaoqiang. If it really doesn't work, then it's okay to be in the middle of the pack. Just as strong as Neji.

I recognized you from the time you wrote about Youta. This person is a person that many fan novels have not written about. It can also be said to be a pity. Many people are saying that Jiraiya's death is a pity. The end of Zabuza and Haku is also a pity. But since the appearance of Youta, I feel that he is very regretful, because other people with regrets are almost adults, but Youta is still a child.

The author probably has never watched Naruto.

Well written, keep up the good work!

Naruto, the character design is broken. Don't tell me that it's because of the second creation. Good second creation characters, plots and characters will not be broken [face covering]

Come on, it's a very good fanfic. Tomato Naruto fanfics don't have masterpieces. If you master it, this one might actually become a masterpiece. Come on!