I Drew Talismans in Eagleland, and Made Them Real

To be honest, this book is quite good, but there are a lot of typos that I won't mention, especially the name of the protagonist, which makes me not even know whether the protagonist's surname is Li or Liu. But this book is really worth reading, and I will forgive you generously this time! You must learn to correct yourself, author!

It's so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore, so back off.

Can't stand it anymore

The subject matter is very good, but your plot is messy here and there. You can write more about cultivating immortals in the United States, which is pretty good, but the plot of returning to China is too cliche. You can write extraordinary novels about cultivating immortals in the United States, or maybe the Marvel world.

It's highly toxic, and it's better not to write about the reunion of college students.

Such an awesome system has no restrictions. The protagonist can just use some gorgeous and exaggerated extraordinary powers to call himself a god. Now the protagonist can just use ordinary extraordinary powers. This will make the protagonist's IQ not online, so let's add some restrictions to the system.

It's a bit messy. The author needs to improve. The flow of writing is three points. Let's work hard.

I can't move when I see a woman

Weird plot, very special, go to the bad country and meet the class beauty, there are only a few dozen people in this special code world, right, the probability is smaller than fishing for hair in the sea.

I don't know what is written in the back, but the details of Chapter 7.8 Are hard to describe! Persimmons and peppers in the vegetable garden in late spring and early summer? Shouldn't it be mid-to-late summer? July or August? Can it be eaten in May and June? , Wasn't it just planted?