Star Rail: The Frail Craftsman Slaughters His Way Through the National Destiny Dungeon

So pretty! The author writes about Jing Yuan really well. He doesn't define others because of past events. He considers Luofu's safety. My opinion of Jing Yuan is: he is a person who misses the past but moves forward. The current Jing Yuan is not a Yunqi Xiaowei, let alone a patrolling ranger. He will miss his old friend when he sees him, but in the face of Luofu's safety, he is a general, so he will have some considerations. The author's writing is particularly good, and he establishes Jing Yuan's image in just a few paragraphs. The image of Lan is also very good. For the characters who are hunting for fate, the image is very good so far. Other authors wrote about the meeting between Pinoconi and Bobo Shark later. It's a beautiful setting without cp. The characters are all very well designed so far. As long as Jingyuan's image is not too OOC (don't ask for an article and Jingliu group cp, it's amazing). The plot of the article can keep up. I hope the national luck brushing later will not be too rubbish.

So happy, so hellish, such a beautiful mental state, I like it so much, I don't care about the writing style anymore. In fact, the writing style needs to be improved, because the description of the injuries in the first battle with Xinghe was very smooth, there were no ups and downs, and there was no feeling. It has a particularly strong presence, but as a fan novel (actually I want to write a sandbox novel), I laughed all the way from when Sang Bo was frustrated in more than ten chapters to the latest update Jing Yuan, which is enough to prove that it is very successful, but some places are really hellish, but I like it:) I don't feel how miserable the protagonist is. Really, maybe it's because I haven't written about my experiences yet (the author is really good at hiding this aspect, and maybe my mental state is a bit beautiful, but in short, I really just wanted to laugh a little bit (how come hell jokes don't count), and I haven't been hit by the knife at all. The author still needs to learn his knife skills.

It looks good, please order more😍It's just that I'm a bit uncomfortable without the Star Core Essence, but my wife's writing is very good

It's pretty good, but I really recommend that the teacher write a shorter memoir like that bad one. A dozen chapters is fine, but thirty or so chapters are a bit too much. It's really annoying (affected by the plot). It's not that it's not written well, it's just that it's a knife with dozens of chapters in a row, and I'm not specifically looking for abuse of this kind of complex. After reading it, I'll feel really bad. If it's too long, it'll be hard to adjust to it in a short time, but because this kind of memoir won't know what happened if you don't read it, I have to read it😣 Another reason is that a lot of people are probably attracted to the book because of the title and the theme of group pets, but it feels like the teacher is always stabbing the protagonist, either vaguely or absently, or openly. Although there is no conflict with the theme of group pets, it seems really weird. But the teacher is actually very good at writing, the characters are well grasped, and the plot is very interesting.

Love it. I feel like there are so few Blade fanfics.

So beautiful! The only drawback is that there isn't enough. See why I found this good book so early. Beautiful, my long-dead Bai Yueguang! This book is so much fun, it's so beautiful!!!!!!

It's okay. At first glance, it looks a bit similar to the book Outlaws, but upon closer inspection, it's actually not that similar. Each has its own characteristics. That book focuses on friendship, and this one is a little more casual, which is more convenient for knocking. But sometimes it's a bit awkward, so that's the initial impression. I'll come back to add more after reading more.

Apart from a bit of a knife, the plot is really good 🙂 When will there be a CP side story [Admiration] I really love the father-type CP, the Lan one, and the Narcissus CP. The other ones are also pretty good, but it's a bit hard to watch directly at the moment 🥺

It's very interesting. I've been following it for a long time. It's also the longest book I've read. It's really interesting. The plot touches my heart. Ying Xing is favored by the group. I'm very happy to watch it. Lord Di Gong's preference is really hard not to love.

Awesome, looking forward to the next episode