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As a simulator subject, this book itself is not easy to write and the author is a novice in college, but it has done very well among novices. The writing is not laggy, and the seven female protagonists Lin, Ying, Chu, Ai, Dasu, Xiaosu, and Ye are all finished in one hundred and fifty chapters. The final explanation of the origin of the simulator also forms a closed loop, ranking second among the same themes I have read. Then there is the author's poor grasp of the plot. The main reasons are firstly that there is no outline, and secondly that it is really difficult for novices to avoid it, so the character image does not reach too high a height. If I want to try a Western fantasy in my next book, it can make up for the shortcomings. I estimate it will take a year and a half to finish. I wish the author can maintain his original intention and still have the same passion as when writing this book in the future, and create a more perfect story [Sending Hearts] Finally - I wrote a novel in advance in order to play monkey, Salty Fish You Are Too 666

The soothing rhythm is so delicate that it can be called meticulous. Along with the humorous writing style, the plain and warm daily life is combined with every thrilling and heart-wrenching simulation, and the insertion of jokes and complaints adds a lot of fun. Similar to the use of memes and complaints, I don't feel too entangled. I think it is still a bit lacking, just like a bowl of tasteless noodles. If there is no sauce, wouldn't it be tasteless? I still want to say something 3P is every man's dream. ——Wang Xu

It's a very good book. You can see from the book that each female protagonist has distinct characteristics and personality. The male protagonist's personality is not toxic at all, but there is one thing about the personality. The part about dividing the family property between relatives is a bit toxic (you can skip it, it's really toxic), but it is also the biggest toxic point in the book so far. Then it's gone. The author is a newbie and a reader-turned-author is very brave (compared to me). Finally, update more and keep a good rhythm. Oh! And my sister is really miserable [cover face][cover face]🉐After being eaten once, she was "sucked 🐮a hundred times" (not really 🐮) (The above is just my personal opinion. New book friends can take a look, but it's better to check it out for yourself whether it's good or not)

I think it's a good read, and I'm quite obsessed with CP, but I feel like there are so few people reading this book. Every time I feel like I'm being criticized, I can't see other people's comments if I want to. I want to be criticized with others.

Brothers, this is not a male channel, this is a female channel. The emotional descriptions are too delicate, mainly because the protagonist in the simulation is from a female perspective. There may be people who can't stand it (like me), the kind of person who constantly misunderstands that women don't care and men don't care.

Watched it on March 30, 2025, 1.14 Minutes, I really like this one. A book written by a young author. This kind of author. I love my books very much and will never finish them no matter what happens. It can be seen that the author wrote this book very seriously, and the character of the protagonist is well created. At least he has the courage to face the problem head-on. And solve the problem. I think the biggest poisonous point of this kind of harem novel is. That is, the protagonist wants to have a harem. And unwilling to solve the problem. Just talk about one thing here and there, so that they don't meet each other. Moreover, the plot of this book is not procrastinating, there is no obvious water mark, and the writing is average. From time to time, two well-written sentences will pop up. The most important thing is. Shorter in length. It can be seen that the author wants to write a good story, not just rely on this book to make money. All in all this is a good book and well worth reading. Thank you very much, the author [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

After thinking about it, the characters in the book... Zhixia's love affair + Zhixia's long-lasting love; Yingzi's "destined" + Zhixia's "not what I want" love; Avril's "library fairy" + Zhixia's "genius composer"'s long-planned plot; Chu Ningshuang's inferiority complex and sensitive "Achu" + my favorite stupid idiot who loves to foul ~ Axia's childhood sweetheart... I also like the author's funny jokes, I really like it! Come on, the author, may your work be a hit!

Start speaking I caught up on the latest chapter in one day. Let me talk about this novel. First of all, the plot. To be honest, this novel is very unique compared to other novels. The plot is interesting. Each story has multiple female protagonists. In terms of characters, the characterization, emotions, and image are all very good. It can be said that the characters are brought to life. And the author is also a bookworm for ten years. His writing style is very good and you can read it with your brain [OK]

I think this book is a good book, not a pretext. You can say that the article is a plot dictionary, and you can see the back at a glance, but you have to understand that the simulator article will be badly written, just like Long Aotian of the different world system. So I am a person who reads stories based on writing, and the author writes really well on these two points. The sister's fantasy, the domineering Zifei, the coquettish Ningshuang, the gentle Qingge, the strategic Wei'er, the abstract leaf, and the stupid kid. Everyone's image is very good, and everyone's simulation is very sweet. Some people think that it is a failure for the male protagonist to have no memory at the beginning. If he had no memory at the beginning, why would you go to someone else? No more harem? In addition to some author complaints, Internet memes, game memes, anime memes, and sweet articles, I think it is worth reading.

Very exciting! I can't tell that this is the author's first time writing a book! Although the male protagonist is a scumbag, he is not annoying. Every simulation the author makes is to save the heroine, and the emotions generated make people feel very sweet and have endless aftertaste. And every simulation is basically unique. Except for the Su sisters, it can be seen that the male protagonist is still very dedicated. Of course, the heroines have all gained memories, which is something that cannot be dealt with. In the end, fraternity is also the inevitable outcome. If you abandon any one of them, you will feel sorry for your life in the heroine simulator. When I started simulating my younger sisters Lin Yunran and Ying Zifei, I felt that the story was a bit thin. When it came to simulating Avril Lavigne and Chu Ningshuang, things were obviously much better. The story reaches its peak when Su Qingge, Su Yanhuan and Ye Jiu meet the two sisters. I really like the bickering between Ye Jiu and the male protagonist, it's very middle-class and very interesting!

The overall impression is okay, but the emotions are really not very delicate, and the character descriptions are rather sloppy, maybe because of the short length. The most important thing is that the sugar content is really not enough. Except for Xiao 9, who is okay, the other people's realistic emotional lines are very poor. It's so interesting. The process in the simulator is too compact, the beloved Shura field is too bland, and the sweet life after graduation is sketchy. In general, there is no big bad point, nothing outstanding, the overall situation is peaceful, 4⭐️encourage me

The simulated plot may seem dull, but the reading is really gentle and delicate, and tears fall down inadvertently (maybe I'm too sexy🤣). Each heroine has a completely different personality, and the simulation process is not always smooth, but the feeling of satisfaction after each successful simulation is something that ordinary novels cannot bring. The male protagonist will also have his own thoughts. It is currently speculated whether the virtual reality technology that appears in the first simulation will be related to the simulation. I can only say that it looks good and I love watching it😋

It's a good read, I love it, and I can look forward to the future. I hope the author can properly handle the subsequent plot of Shura Field and the full ending, and not be too vicious or sloppy [laughing and crying]

It's really good. I've been looking forward to that rare simulation. I think it should be a yandere. When I first met, I was a junior yandere. Then I passed the simulation, gained memories, transformed into the ultimate yandere, and then wandered between life and death every day. Hahahaha, the ultimate yandere is the nightmare of all playboys, I'm really looking forward to it.

This is pretty good for a short story. For someone who has never experienced the pain of love, this is a very good fantasy novel. There are some shortcomings, that is, the description of other characters is not very good, and the main plot such as the female protagonist and male protagonist is okay. Personally, I still recommend it.

This novel brought me unexpected surprises. After just flipping through the first 20 pages, I was introduced to a future world full of infinite possibilities. The author cleverly constructed a storyline that was both bizarre and fascinating, making me feel as if I had traveled through time and space and experienced a different future. Each character is lifelike, and their fates are intertwined to weave moving pictures. Although the story has just begun, I can feel the happy ending, as if all the suspense and challenges will eventually be answered perfectly.

As a pure deer person, I feel that the showdown is too early. As a result, the subsequent plot lacks excitement. Even if all the simulated characters are over, we can still write more about daily life, conflicts, misunderstandings, and frustrations to make each character more vivid, and finally wrap it up. But the previous writing is really good, and I like every character.

The author's writing style is really strong👍. Now that I have read the first two stories, it gives people an aesthetic feeling. It is really comfortable to read👍It really feels like a combination of the online articles of the older generation and the beautiful texts from school.

To be honest, the writing style is good. This rating is indeed low, but there is too much content in the simulated dungeon and too little realistic part. The most important point is that the simulated content is not the operation performed by the male protagonist himself. This results in the male protagonist's setting being different in each dungeon. It is very fragmented. It would be much better if there were more realistic plots.

Finish it for me! Although it is the first time for the author to write a book, his skills are not very good and he cannot grasp the long-form story, which results in omitting a lot of stories in the last dozens of chapters. However, it is also a good choice to face his own shortcomings and leave the imagination to the readers. There is no regrets at the end, it's very good!

The quality is very good, exactly as described by the seller. I am very satisfied. I really like it. It completely exceeded my expectations. The delivery speed is very fast. The packaging is very careful and tight. The logistics company has a good service attitude and the delivery speed is very fast. I am very satisfied with my purchase.

I finished reading it in one sitting, it was really good, and the author's writing style took me forever. The characterization is good, too sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, sweet, spicy. The only shortcoming is that it is not interesting enough. I suggest the author give me all the manuscripts to review [smirk]

It's not fantasy, it's not science fiction, it's not magic. It's a very normal harem love story. It's already invincible. It can be seen that the author doesn't write because of writing. I look forward to the author's new work.

First of all, it looks good, and the writing is good. Apart from some minor issues with classic Japanese comics, there are no major flaws. The following is my personal feeling. Is this a common problem in simulator writing? The characterization is relatively insufficient. If you write too much, it will be too bloated? Each simulation is equivalent to a small outline. In the simulated heroine line, there are few backgrounds for other heroines, and there is little real-life plot. The characters of each character are thin. Except for Ye Jiu, even the other simulated heroine lines, Ye Jiu has a lot of space to shape. It can be said that I personally feel that she is the most successful. Chu Ningshuang is half of it, and the Su family twins... Well, it feels like the author is trying to write a knife. My sister successfully brought me in as a starter (for my xp Miss Ying, there isn't that much plot, and the inner and emotional changes are not detailed in the plot, so who can fill in for me the missing Miss Zi Fei [crying]) Although your characterization is lacking, your writing and stories make up for it (bushi) Come on, I want to read your novels for the rest of my life [Sending my heart]

Awesome, overall good, especially the middle part of the book "Bing Ti Lian" was handled very well, sweet but not greasy. In the later stage, it can be seen that it is weak and lacks stamina. It ends a little quickly, but overall it is very uninspiring. As the author's first book, I give it a five-star review as an encouragement. Come on for the next book!

This is the best book I have read this year. The old treeworm originally thought that there was nothing left to say about tomatoes. But after all, the sky is the limit. If you are raised by a tomato, the tomato will also pamper you. Come on, author!

It was only after reading that I thought about rating it that I was undoubtedly overwhelmed. Although the writing was a bit immature and the story was not handled so well, it brought me enough happiness and gave them (her) a perfect ending. This is a good [blowing kiss]

I have been speechless for a long time. Maybe I have read too much garbage and suddenly I am not used to eating fine rice bran. But even so, I can still feel the beauty written by the author. The story may not be too novel, but there are too many similar stories in human history, but some stories are still passed down by the public. It is the difference in writing skills. After reading beautiful things, my mood will not consciously improve. Book, five stars! No need to say more!

What can I say, this book is very well written, and each simulated emotion is also very delicate. At the same time, there are many authors, and they can make some interesting jokes. And the author obviously cares about the readers and will refer to their opinions. There is also a summary at the end of the volume, which is very thoughtful. Finally, I must strengthen Ai. The elf girl is so impressive, so romantic and cute. Ah, I can't stand it. How can I live without this book? I hope it will be a hit. The final score is expected to be between 9.3-9.6. At the end, the author gave me a lot of updates. It's completely unsatisfactory! ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ I would like to add that I hope the cover can be upgraded to be more attractive. I almost missed it.

How should I put it? It's very interesting, it's the kind of movie where you know what's going to happen next, but if you don't watch it, you just feel itchy and want to see it. This feeling is really... Too hot! (The author is too short!)