[Urban Campus; Personal Growth; Mutual Redemption; Fantasy Main Plot; Everyday Life Subplot; Stunning Cross-Dresser; Brains and Brawn; Sweetness with a Sting; Sci-Fi Light Novel]
Ten years after Di Mo began posing as his older sister, Di Qian, his already abnormal life fell apart.
Once he started high school, the people around him grew stranger by the day: a cold, haughty childhood friend from a wealthy family, an airheaded transfer student who appeared out of nowhere, and a mischievous little princess who barged into his life.
But the most abnormal one turned out to be him. Who would believe that the unremarkable, short boy in class could disguise himself and become the campus belle of another school?
As time passed, “she” gradually lost the ability to tell whether her transformed self was wearing a disguise or taking one off.
“Dissociative identity disorder, or DID. But it's such an unusual case that even the textbooks don't dare describe it this way.”
“Rather than a primary and secondary personality, it's as if... in different timelines, he and ‘she’ each have their own lives.”
In these overlapping, interwoven timelines, can Di Mo find a way out?
(This is a slow-burn story. The sci-fi elements may require a little extra effort to follow. Readers are welcome to leave their thoughts and suggestions in the reviews. The author is happy to answer anything.)
(Also known as The Road in the Mirror, Flowers Along the Way)
After reading ten chapters, it is relatively easy to understand after thinking about it for a while. The light novel style is obvious and has a science fiction color. The subject matter is good, but the narrative is a bit naive. The author's writing skills are quite good, but the sense of rhythm needs to be strengthened. It can be seen that the intention is to start from the outside to the inside, from the shallower to the deeper, and to cut into the theme bit by bit from daily life. It is not suitable for fast-food reading, but is suitable for reading calmly. It is not difficult to find that the male protagonist's super power should be [borrowing] his own power from parallel time and space, and the others have not been seen yet. I will continue to read it and comment after I finish it. It can tell stories and make jokes, and the tentative rating is good or above. I have caught up with the author's remake progress, and my personal evaluation has changed from good+ to excellent-, which is a significant improvement. However, even if it is remade, it can be seen that the author did not grasp the multi-faceted narrative well in order to lay out various female protagonists in the early stage. If you don't look carefully, it will feel confusing. By the way, I suddenly discovered that the title of the volume is very particular. Even the rhymes and rhymes are designed with great care. I hope that I can continue to improve and may have a place in Guoqing in the future. I really don't take it so seriously when correcting students' compositions.
Personally, I feel that the author's writing is quite good 💕, and few people read it. First of all, the title of the book is not very... Attractive. There are really few well-written articles about transvestites nowadays. If I hadn't clicked in and saw the introduction on the homepage, I might have missed it... Maybe the title of the book can add elements of cross-dressing and transvestite? ( Secondly, the author's writing style is really good. The long sentences in some chapters have the feel of a prose writer, and he quotes some poems and adds the author's opinions, which makes it feel a bit like a literary youth (?). However, the biggest problem is that the main narrative is mixed and unclear, giving people the feeling of "The Riddler". I even thought that the male and female protagonists were "cut" in two timelines, plus special abilities, sense of déjà vu, and quantum core... It made it science fiction, but it was not explained clearly, and it gave the reader the feeling of the Riddler (of course, this is to set the stage for the future) Finally, I have to say that there are a lot of elements in the writing, and the author has included a lot of jokes, but... I personally think that some bad jokes are played too much, such as "2.5", Which may be offensive to readers with visual fatigue... It's okay to use bad jokes, but don't use bad jokes repeatedly. It's been a while since I've seen a good transvestite novel, and I really liked it. 💕[Blowing Kisses] No need for eunuchs 💕
I should say it or not, but there are really a lot of memes 🤦, and most people have heard of them, and no matter how well they are used, there is still a threshold for writing science fiction articles, and the logic must be very strict. I don't think the writing is boring, but I can't tell what kind of article it is, whether it is love, time travel, or daily life. It has a bit of a science fiction feel.
It's okay. I like Di Qian inexplicably. Sister Qianqian and Di Mo won't split and become two people, clones? In fact, I really want these "siblings" to share the same body. 😏😏 But the author can just follow his own pace [laughs][laughs]
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The writing is quite good, but the author has written so much and the results are terrible 😂
Although I didn't understand it, I thought it was well written. Come on, the writing is very good now, and the plot is always novel. I hope it won't stop.
I had a sleepless night, author. I don't understand the deep stuff yet. How about I go find out?
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