Cannon Fodder Screenwriter Star Riches

It looks good, but could you please write more about the career line? I like the career line better, and then there are the audience's reactions after the show.

It's a bit average. The author actually didn't have much feedback after the show aired. Although in the final summary, it was said that the first film was the heroine, I didn't see that many scenes of the heroine. Then it's time for the big male lead to come along with a secondary female lead, and the scenes will be concentrated. In addition, there is no sexism at all, and male celebrities are easily popular. Why are there so many actresses and we can't just praise women but not men? How to say it? Maybe there are people who like this kind of tune?

When I didn't read the heroine's work, I thought "Gods" was a story about many gods. However, when I read the content of "Gods" in the interstellar world, it was actually "Gods Killing". It doesn't matter that the work is called "Gods", but the content is not about Gods looking for ways to kill gods. It feels like the author thinks he is right all along. It makes my head hurt!

I particularly like the way the screenwriter tells the story in a eloquent way. There could be more career lines. I really don't like to watch the fandom, where you are scolded and scolded. It is a small setback. Every time it is a scolding battle, you will frown when you watch it. There is a feeling of overlapping plots. When you see it, you will understand. It has reached the stage of being scolded by the opposite family and then washed away. It keeps looping and boring. . . [Pouts]

Generally speaking, it's not bad, but the author writes about StarCraft. Some places are very advanced and some are very backward. It doesn't have the feeling that StarCraft is developed. The rice circle is also the same as the modern one, with a sense of fragmentation.

Actually, if I could, I would put it at about 3:5. This novel is just about the entertainment industry wearing an interstellar cloak. I thought the author almost wrote about what the heroine created. But if you really look at it carefully, you will find that about 30% to 40% is about how the stars in the industry make a fool of themselves. It's appropriate. It would be better to reduce the number, and the content created by the female protagonist is a bit monotonous (almost all male and female CPs are be, and they can also write about team friendship, friendship, family relationship, etc.), And they always talk about the gender opposition between men and women. Although it is indeed more realistic, this is a novel. If it is written like this, it will make readers feel very annoyed.

The novel is quite interesting, and the first two scripts of the heroine are also good. The author could use more punctuation marks, and it would be much better to break sentences appropriately. In addition, I personally think there is a bug, which is where Africans and Ouqi are. Does the Interstellar Federation also have this earthling reference?

The writing is very good and the slap in the face is very fast. I can't follow it due to personal reasons. The audience's experience of gaslighting is so suffocating. Just read this. I wish the author a great success and good reviews.

Good looking (♥∀♥) really a treasured author The heroine's writing is really wonderful. It feels like I have read several short stories, whether it is Zhu Xian, campus novels, or palace battles. It also writes about the audience's perception. I really like this series of novels.

Overall, it's a very good book. In my eyes, all the books that I can read now are good books. However, the relationship between the male protagonist and the male protagonist is a little bit abrupt. It would be fine without the male protagonist.

Not bad so far

The script is good-looking, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists is blunt, and the typos somewhat affect the reading... If you are really not good at writing emotional dramas, you don't have to write them. The heroine is not a big heroine, and the plot is a bit inconsistent. Halfway through, I thought I was talking about the script, but it is actually the plot of the heroine's world...

It is not recommended for those who often listen to books. This book has typos, too many words, and too few words. I have read 40 chapters, and now I have found about twenty typos. He has already finished the article. Generally, authors will not care about this, so it is very uncomfortable. Who knows how I felt after catching bugs for a long time and then finding out that it was a completed article? Now it's all private. (I'm afraid some people will say that this is already a finished article, so why am I still catching bugs) If you are really out of food, you can still eat this article.

The heroine inherited the original owner's company and saved the company from crisis. I fulfilled my mother's dream, filmed the script, wrote several good scripts, and cast a lot of actors. But Zhou Zhu and the original owner were too unhappy. Zhou Zhu knew everything. After being rescued by the company, he asked the heroine to resign. The heroine deleted the memories of Zhouzhu and the original owner for her own selfish desires, and refused to resign for others. In fact, it was difficult to find the right person for this job in a short period of time, and she was afraid that Zhou Zhuna would threaten her. The heroine is not a good person either.

As the screenwriter, the heroine has a new story and a new actor, so it's okay to watch so far. One of the characters is director Cheng Henian. I look forward to their cooperation and the author's better stories.

It's pretty good. Every little story in it feels like the characters have their own thoughts and are vivid. However, it feels like the heroine's emotional drama is a bit rushed and the ending is a bit rushed. Maybe it's because I want to read more stories written by Qiao Yu'an.

The career line is still okay, Zhenfeng Aotian [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] However, the emotional line is a bit abrupt and there is no heart-warming rush. It's too difficult for Assistant Zhou and the original person. One was replaced by the heroine and the other lost the memory of their love. I hope they both have a good ending [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

I feel like I keep talking about gender opposition, which makes me a little headache. The plot is okay, but I feel that every novel in it is the same.

After watching it, it's not bad. I feel like I could write more. It's a pity. I feel like there were very few emotional lines in order to finish it quickly. Suddenly, I started dating and kissed each other all of a sudden. I also want to watch other dramas and tell the audience...

Beautifully written, The plot of the drama during the filming was really well written. It's just too short, It's really too short and it's over as soon as it goes up. The author, you have no heart. [Cry][cry][cry]