My Grandpa Is a Mega-Rich Tycoon

Keep writing, looking forward to it

Messy

I'm so awesome. Why was there Li Hanyan in the front, and then another person in the back? I didn't even explain where the person in front was, so it was interrupted. It was so uncomfortable to watch.

It feels pretty cool, but there are a lot of typos

Re-write it, it won't be right at all

Why is it repeated?

Speechless...

That's it. What did you write? After learning that his grandfather is the richest man. Shouldn't you dress yourself up? So low-key. Everyone is here to get involved. Is it interesting?

I don't understand what's going on