Imagine if you really traveled through time, would you be so awesome?
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Looking at the corpses scattered in front of the city wall in the distance, fear made my body tremble continuously. A scarred man wearing leather armor and holding a scimitar came towards me. Among the rebels, anyone with a sharp knife is a ruthless character, and someone like this wearing leather armor is even more unusual.
Scar's eyes flashed brightly, and he shouted loudly: "Get ready for Camp B. Pick up the soil bag in front of you, follow the leader, and help me fill in the slope. You have completed the task. Eat meat at night. If you can't finish it, everyone will lose their heads!"
I subconsciously glanced at the two hundred or so people around me. We were the Yizi camp. There are regular soldiers and auxiliary soldiers in the Y-zi camp, but in the previous attack on the city, all the regular soldiers in the Y-zi camp had died long ago. We are auxiliary soldiers, and we usually earn some food by serving the regular soldiers. Now that all the regular soldiers are gone, they want us to die too, and then fill the ramp with our corpses.
Reader comments
Compared with those so-called historical time travel novels, it has strong logic. Old bookworms can't fault it. It makes people feel comfortable all the way. The power struggle is no longer just playing house, giving people a real sense of substitution. I highly recommend it but it is too little.
The plot is smooth and the logic is smooth. It made me stay up late to read it. I hope the author can change the first person description to the third person 'I'. This incident was probably described in more online articles in the 2000s. I have hardly seen it in recent years.
The plot character is quite reasonable and he should be a scholar with some background.
Very good, very real and the details are sentimental and real enough. In my bookshelf, this should be ranked number one.
New book, good looking, special
Objective and realistic, rare to see, should be given up without being verbose at all. By the way, I would like to ask the author if there is any information about ancient times available online. Please provide one.
Sigh - it's pretty good-looking at first, but the further you go, the weirder it gets, and you feel more and more like you're from an ancient time. It's hard to like this. I think it's just my personal preference. I have been reading online articles since 2008, so I can be considered an old bookworm. The author's writing style is very good, and the plot arrangement is also very good. It avoids many non-key branch lines and goes straight to the theme. This is great. I like it very much. The only negative point for me personally is the protagonist's occasional sauce and treating himself as an ancient person. It's a treasure for readers who don't care about it.
The writing is good, there are no cheats, I rely on my ability to make a living, come on⛽, can the update be faster?
If you want to read something different about IQ online, then read this one.
I have read a lot of time travel articles, and this book is really good. The protagonist is real and natural, the plot is compact and fascinating, and the author has a profound writing skills.
The perspective is novel and the writing is delicate
It's a very good book. This book reflects the author's level very well. The time travel is very realistic and very high-level. It's not like a lot of fast food articles nowadays. Each time travel has its own system. It's pretentious all the way. It's annoying to read.
The structure is clear and the writing is good. Many readers may be dissatisfied with the motivation of the protagonist, but not every book requires readers to have too much sense of involvement. I hope the author can tell his story well.
I thought it was another system, cheating, or something like that. The content is humorous and the description is just right. Cooperate with the advancement of the plot. As a time traveler, apart from innate predictions of the overall future situation, human factors do not have that big an impact on the situation. According to the current development of the plot, Pig's Foot is likely to dominate the ocean. As for whether he can defeat Dorgon to regain the rivers and mountains and restore the Han people's power. Stay tuned!
It's rare to see such good writing on Tomato
Why was it suddenly taken down? Jist.
It's very well written, much better than what I wrote [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
I think this book scores over nine points on a tomato scale. It is very real and reasonable.
Not bad, first person is difficult to write
The story and writing are both top-notch.
The storyline is close to life
Ah, how do you say this? It seems a bit late.
After reading the latest chapter, it suddenly dawned on me that this shit was moved from there.
It's a very good book, even people like me who don't like this type of writing will like it. I wonder if the one in the opening scene is the heroine?
For a reader who cannot read first-person novels, this novel is read with gusto and the frequency is right. [Laughing evilly]
I looked at the author's bookshelf and found several books that overlapped with mine. Among them is Ke Da's iron-blooded residual light. To be honest, from the time I subdued the little beggar, I saw the shadow of "Late Ming" [laughter]
Yes, very innovative, the Ming Dynasty of revolutionaries.
It's well written and the pace is exciting.
Very interesting, keep up the good work
Okay, it suits my taste! ! ! !
After reading twenty chapters, I feel pretty good.
Compared with those so-called historical time travel novels, it has strong logic. Old bookworms can't fault it. It makes people feel comfortable all the way. The power struggle is no longer just playing house, giving people a real sense of substitution. I highly recommend it but it is too little.
The plot is smooth and the logic is smooth. It made me stay up late to read it. I hope the author can change the first person description to the third person 'I'. This incident was probably described in more online articles in the 2000s. I have hardly seen it in recent years.
The plot character is quite reasonable and he should be a scholar with some background.
Very good, very real and the details are sentimental and real enough. In my bookshelf, this should be ranked number one.
New book, good looking, special
Objective and realistic, rare to see, should be given up without being verbose at all. By the way, I would like to ask the author if there is any information about ancient times available online. Please provide one. Sigh - it's pretty good-looking at first, but the further you go, the weirder it gets, and you feel more and more like you're from an ancient time. It's hard to like this. I think it's just my personal preference. I have been reading online articles since 2008, so I can be considered an old bookworm. The author's writing style is very good, and the plot arrangement is also very good. It avoids many non-key branch lines and goes straight to the theme. This is great. I like it very much. The only negative point for me personally is the protagonist's occasional sauce and treating himself as an ancient person. It's a treasure for readers who don't care about it.
The writing is good, there are no cheats, I rely on my ability to make a living, come on⛽, can the update be faster?
If you want to read something different about IQ online, then read this one.
I have read a lot of time travel articles, and this book is really good. The protagonist is real and natural, the plot is compact and fascinating, and the author has a profound writing skills.
The perspective is novel and the writing is delicate
It's a very good book. This book reflects the author's level very well. The time travel is very realistic and very high-level. It's not like a lot of fast food articles nowadays. Each time travel has its own system. It's pretentious all the way. It's annoying to read.
The structure is clear and the writing is good. Many readers may be dissatisfied with the motivation of the protagonist, but not every book requires readers to have too much sense of involvement. I hope the author can tell his story well.
I thought it was another system, cheating, or something like that. The content is humorous and the description is just right. Cooperate with the advancement of the plot. As a time traveler, apart from innate predictions of the overall future situation, human factors do not have that big an impact on the situation. According to the current development of the plot, Pig's Foot is likely to dominate the ocean. As for whether he can defeat Dorgon to regain the rivers and mountains and restore the Han people's power. Stay tuned!
It's rare to see such good writing on Tomato
Why was it suddenly taken down? Jist.
It's very well written, much better than what I wrote [awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
I think this book scores over nine points on a tomato scale. It is very real and reasonable.
Not bad, first person is difficult to write
The story and writing are both top-notch.
The storyline is close to life
Ah, how do you say this? It seems a bit late.
After reading the latest chapter, it suddenly dawned on me that this shit was moved from there.
It's a very good book, even people like me who don't like this type of writing will like it. I wonder if the one in the opening scene is the heroine?
For a reader who cannot read first-person novels, this novel is read with gusto and the frequency is right. [Laughing evilly] I looked at the author's bookshelf and found several books that overlapped with mine. Among them is Ke Da's iron-blooded residual light. To be honest, from the time I subdued the little beggar, I saw the shadow of "Late Ming" [laughter]
Yes, very innovative, the Ming Dynasty of revolutionaries.
It's well written and the pace is exciting.
Very interesting, keep up the good work
Okay, it suits my taste! ! ! !
After reading twenty chapters, I feel pretty good.
It's good, but it's too short. Keep it up.