[Two Male Protagonists] [Ancient Imagination]
[Duan Ci, a young man in bright clothes and an angry horse × the gentle but somewhat sinister young master named Li, Li Yan]
Duan Ci, with a fierce loyalty, vowed to worship the prince. Unexpectedly, a roadblock appeared on the way - Li Yan, who accidentally entered the sect of the prince of Jin.
Duan Ci thought, just come in, but he has to be on top of Li Yan, so the two of them took a step back, and from then on they began to live a life of serving the same master.
Unexpectedly, this kid doesn't know martial arts. He opened his mouth and asked Duan Ci to protect him. Just protect him. You have to provide me with breakfast for a month in return. From then on, the two of them started a life of pushing and pulling.
When Duan Ci felt that something was wrong with Li Yan, it was the night he took her to drink Tusu wine. The boy was so drunk that he held him back and refused to let him go. He even kissed his neck and pressed his hands and feet to sleep all night long!
He is not manly! Duan Ci thinks it himself.
Li Yan called him again with his final tone: "Master Duan."
Duan Ci cleared his throat and suppressed his restless heart: "What's wrong? I'm here."
When completing the second task, Duan Ci finally couldn't bear it any longer. He pressed his elbow on Li Yan's neck and pressed it against the door, trying to dig out his brain to see what he was thinking.
As a result, Duan Ci couldn't help but decided to ignore him for the whole night as punishment for Li Yan.
After the third task was completed, the boy finally couldn't bear it anymore, picked up Duan Ci and put him in the carriage.
Duan Ci was furious and resolutely refused to obey. Unexpectedly, the usually weak-mannered scholar actually showed his true feelings. He clasped Duan Ci's hand and kissed him on the lips with lightning speed...
Reader comments
To rate myself, it must be five stars┏(＾0＾)┛
Hmm... It's a good book! !
Let me give a higher score to the first book with two male protagonists that I read on Tomato. The emotional line of the protagonist is not flawed, but it feels like it cannot be developed. Maybe the structural framework needs to be strengthened. Pretending to be drunk and having a secret kiss, mother, is a bit sweet.
I've almost finished reading it. Although the story line is relatively thin, it is more relaxed and interesting. The main characters are also well-drawn. The author can look forward to the future.
Ah, thank you, the ending of Little Marquis and Si Nian was something I didn't expect... It's the author's first book... But to be fair, there's no need to worry about the writing. In my opinion, your level is already above the average level of Tomato. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the plot logic is too simplistic, and it creates a serious sense of separation from the identity of the characters (I think the exit of several important characters is too hasty). But I have to praise the character design! Whether it is the frank and sincere Mr. Duan, the gentle and graceful Xiao Li, or the heroic Shen Jingqiu who vows to fight for the glory of women in the world, they are flesh and blood, each with their own charm, making them unforgettable. Unfortunately, the details of the characters are not enough, and there is a tendency to make facial expressions (I wonder if it is due to space limitations?). However, overall it is a very good ancient novel, and I hope you can create more exciting works in the future.
I really like reading books with two male protagonists and I would like to support them.
I followed a few more chapters and it was great
I think it looks great, but it's the last one! ! ! My Li Yan, my Mr. Xie Xiaohou and baby Si Nian [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]
I hope the author can write this kind of ancient text again next time [smile][smile][smile][smile]
It was really heart-wrenching to see the ending. It is full of words but full of meaning. It has great stamina. Great writing! ! [Love][love][love]
To rate myself, it must be five stars┏(＾0＾)┛ Hmm... It's a good book! !
Let me give a higher score to the first book with two male protagonists that I read on Tomato. The emotional line of the protagonist is not flawed, but it feels like it cannot be developed. Maybe the structural framework needs to be strengthened. Pretending to be drunk and having a secret kiss, mother, is a bit sweet.
I've almost finished reading it. Although the story line is relatively thin, it is more relaxed and interesting. The main characters are also well-drawn. The author can look forward to the future. Ah, thank you, the ending of Little Marquis and Si Nian was something I didn't expect... It's the author's first book... But to be fair, there's no need to worry about the writing. In my opinion, your level is already above the average level of Tomato. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the plot logic is too simplistic, and it creates a serious sense of separation from the identity of the characters (I think the exit of several important characters is too hasty). But I have to praise the character design! Whether it is the frank and sincere Mr. Duan, the gentle and graceful Xiao Li, or the heroic Shen Jingqiu who vows to fight for the glory of women in the world, they are flesh and blood, each with their own charm, making them unforgettable. Unfortunately, the details of the characters are not enough, and there is a tendency to make facial expressions (I wonder if it is due to space limitations?). However, overall it is a very good ancient novel, and I hope you can create more exciting works in the future.
I really like reading books with two male protagonists and I would like to support them. I followed a few more chapters and it was great
I think it looks great, but it's the last one! ! ! My Li Yan, my Mr. Xie Xiaohou and baby Si Nian [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I hope the author can write this kind of ancient text again next time [smile][smile][smile][smile]
It was really heart-wrenching to see the ending. It is full of words but full of meaning. It has great stamina. Great writing! ! [Love][love][love]