The Cultivation Big Shot Can Read My Mind, and Now We're All Humiliated

I really like the subject matter and the rhythm is very enjoyable. I just hate some of the swear words in it. Maybe I'm just used to it, but most of the swear words are insulting words for women [face covering].

It's pretty good. I hope the heroine has some ability to protect herself.

It's great. Update soon. Don't make me kneel down and beg you. This is my first time reading a mind-reading novel about the world of immortality. It's so beautiful. It's finally finished. I've been chasing it for a long time. I'm so happy! ! ! The author is really great! !

Super pretty! ! ! Especially when the heroine sees a beautiful man, she just sighs that he is beautiful instead of being a nymphomaniac! ! ! This is a super plus! ! ! It's not too toxic for me, and everyone loves the heroine, who is also protecting everyone, just like family. This is one of the few mind-reading stories I like! ! This is really a breath of fresh air among the current monotonous articles about being unable to move and becoming nymphomaniacs when they see beautiful women! ! ! (≧▽≦)Highly recommended! ! ! !

Let's start with the writing style. The writing style is actually average, but it is smooth and not childish. It can be seen that the author has certain writing skills. Then there's the plot. It's hard to imagine how many explosive things the author has read before he can write such an amazing story. It's so funny that my eyes widened when I read it. What's more, what's eye-catching is the non-repetition of the characters' stories. This article can be considered a medium-length article. There are no repetitive events from beginning to end. It can be seen that the author has really put his mind into research, and it is difficult not to admire the author's logic and imagination in the twists and turns of the story. Then there is the character design. This is a group favorite article. The focus of the article falls on the protagonist, and the image description of the supporting characters will be relatively one-sided. The inner world of the heroine is very rich, and she also plays a major role in promoting the plot, and her quirky character design is not broken. I think the highlight of this article is not the author's writing style, but the melon in the article, because it is so explosive!!! Generally speaking, it is a funny group favorite article, and everyone is like a big family, which is quite warm.

I originally thought that this girl's voice-over article was a pornographic article about female porn. This book is not poisonous at all. It is so funny. It turns out that eating melon is so enjoyable.

Very nice! ! ! I really like this kind of thing, but it's best not to have a CP... Please, please, please

It's good to read, I update it quickly, I can't stop eating, the writing is very interesting, hahaha all the way

The writing is quite good, and various scripts are online, but there are some shortcomings, and the details need to be polished. For example, in the first few chapters, Jin Dashan invited everyone to eat spiritual fruits, but it jumped directly to the heroine saying that the fruits were delicious. The maid bringing the plate to the table, and what the spiritual fruits looked like and what kind of smell they exuded were all omitted. Moreover, such small details that can increase the sense of immersion appear every few chapters, which is very uncomfortable. You have to make up for it yourself, otherwise you will think that you are reading an abridged version of the book. [Cover face] I'm very curious. Lin Hongyu's humanistic novels don't explain that he has hatred for the protagonist. Why can't he hear his voice? The author should be more rigorous in the setting, or add some drama to the villains, otherwise there is no way to explain the inability to hear voices.

Finished spreading flowers, finished reading! It's a good heroine who eats melons from beginning to end and is read in her mind at the same time. The story of saving the world as a group favorite has no CP (defeat the evil forces, save a lot of lives, rebuild the world gate and break the restrictions, which is considered a salvation). There are also many super cute CBs, and there is a bit boring in the middle, fighting for melons... But the flaws are not hidden. There are always people in paragraph reviews who are "correcting" the author's wording, but many of his "corrections" are wrong. When I wanted to post a paragraph review, I clicked in and saw this kind of reverse correction, which made me feel baffled. I also thought that a child in elementary school might have just learned this, so I exited and turned the page. This is the book I have seen the fewest paragraph reviews in, and it is also the book I have posted the fewest paragraph reviews in. It's not just for the sake of it, it's just to advance the plot, but I thought it was a bit stiff and I couldn't stand it, so I put it aside for a while and then watched it again. Overall, it was very good.