After Being Read, It Shocked the World of Immortality.

I really like the subject matter and the rhythm is very enjoyable. I just hate some of the swear words in it. Maybe I'm just used to it, but most of the swear words are insulting words for women [face covering].

It's pretty good. I hope the heroine has some ability to protect herself.

It's great. Update soon. Don't make me kneel down and beg you. This is my first time reading a mind-reading novel about the world of immortality. It's so beautiful. It's finally finished. I've been chasing it for a long time. I'm so happy! ! ! The author is really great! !

Super pretty! ! ! Especially when the heroine sees a beautiful man, she just sighs that he is beautiful instead of being a nymphomaniac! ! ! This is a super plus! ! ! It's not too toxic for me, and everyone loves the heroine, who is also protecting everyone, just like family. This is one of the few mind-reading stories I like! ! This is really a breath of fresh air among the current monotonous articles about being unable to move and becoming nymphomaniacs when they see beautiful women! ! ! (≧▽≦)Highly recommended! ! ! !

I originally thought that this girl's voice-over article was a pornographic article about female porn. This book is not poisonous at all. It is so funny. It turns out that eating melon is so enjoyable.

Very nice! ! ! I really like this kind of thing, but it's best not to have a CP... Please, please, please

Let's start with the writing style. The writing style is actually average, but it is smooth and not childish. It can be seen that the author has certain writing skills. Then there's the plot. It's hard to imagine how many explosive things the author has read before he can write such an amazing story. It's so funny that my eyes widened when I read it. What's more, what's eye-catching is the non-repetition of the characters' stories. This article can be considered a medium-length article. There are no repetitive events from beginning to end. It can be seen that the author has really put his mind into research, and it is difficult not to admire the author's logic and imagination in the twists and turns of the story. Then there is the character design. This is a group favorite article. The focus of the article falls on the protagonist, and the image description of the supporting characters will be relatively one-sided. The inner world of the heroine is very rich, and she also plays a major role in promoting the plot, and her quirky character design is not broken. I think the highlight of this article is not the author's writing style, but the melon in the article, because it is so explosive!!! Generally speaking, it is a funny group favorite article, and everyone is like a big family, which is quite warm.

It's good to read, I update it quickly, I can't stop eating, the writing is very interesting, hahaha all the way

The writing is quite good, and various scripts are online, but there are some shortcomings, and the details need to be polished. For example, in the first few chapters, Jin Dashan invited everyone to eat spiritual fruits, but it jumped directly to the heroine saying that the fruits were delicious. The maid bringing the plate to the table, and what the spiritual fruits looked like and what kind of smell they exuded were all omitted. Moreover, such small details that can increase the sense of immersion appear every few chapters, which is very uncomfortable. You have to make up for it yourself, otherwise you will think that you are reading an abridged version of the book. [Cover face] I'm very curious. Lin Hongyu's humanistic novels don't explain that he has hatred for the protagonist. Why can't he hear his voice? The author should be more rigorous in the setting, or add some drama to the villains, otherwise there is no way to explain the inability to hear voices.

It's good to see. The system is a realm gate. The heroine's mother is the spirit of Yimu. The realm gate was broken many years ago and the heroine was sent to the modern age. After reading this novel, she traveled back in time and Tianyan escaped from one of the four nines. The heroine is a sect left to this world by Heaven. Eating melons will increase her cultivation, so how about the heroine? With little practice, it can help to treat her as a daughter of heaven and break through directly all the way. The heroine's melon-eating system has a protective effect on the heroine. Anyone with malicious intentions towards the heroine will not be heard. If she wants to attack the heroine, she will also have a safety shield. This can be said to give her invincible defense. The heroine herself is a cheerful and optimistic melon-eater.

This is another mind-reading novel that inevitably falls into all kinds of weird and crazy stories about father-in-law and mother-in-law. I'm tired of it.

Very cool! It's so memorable, so well written! This review was made four months after I finished reading the finale of this novel, because after I finished reading the finale, I put the novel down without reading it or deleting it. Today I accidentally browsed Shu Huang Square and found that this novel had an updated extra chapter. After I read this extra chapter, I found that I remembered all his plots. After reviewing it in my mind, I found that this novel is written in the mind-reading theme of cultivating immortals.

Finished spreading flowers, finished reading! It's a good heroine who eats melons from beginning to end and is read in her mind at the same time. The story of saving the world as a group favorite has no CP (defeat the evil forces, save a lot of lives, rebuild the world gate and break the restrictions, which is considered a salvation). There are also many super cute CBs, and there is a bit boring in the middle, fighting for melons... But the flaws are not hidden. There are always people in paragraph reviews who are "correcting" the author's wording, but many of his "corrections" are wrong. When I wanted to post a paragraph review, I clicked in and saw this kind of reverse correction, which made me feel baffled. I also thought that a child in elementary school might have just learned this, so I exited and turned the page. This is the book I have seen the fewest paragraph reviews in, and it is also the book I have posted the fewest paragraph reviews in. It's not just for the sake of it, it's just to advance the plot, but I thought it was a bit stiff and I couldn't stand it, so I put it aside for a while and then watched it again. Overall, it was very good.

Cui Xiaoshu is really cute, and she is really funny when she eats melons. She made many people die in society, but she also protected many people. She used a unique way to protect the people she loved and some good people who suffered unreasonable disasters, and she also exposed some evil people who acted one way on the surface and another behind the scenes. The group of people who eat melons is getting bigger and bigger, and as expected, most of them are people who love to eat melons. Those stupid melons are really imaginative and unexpected. The ending is also very happy, I really like this kind of good ending. I hope Cui Xiaoshu can always be happy with everyone's love.

The plot of the whole book is compact and interesting, and the writing is very good. I really don't understand why the rating is so low. [Crying][Crying][Crying]

Super recommended super recommended! I couldn't stop laughing the whole time! Hahahahaha! So funny! The whole melon-eating crowd performance was in place! Hahahahahahahahaha so funny! It would be great if it could be made into a video or animation! Hahahahaha!

Very good. First of all, the protagonist group did not doubt the heroine too much, which saved a lot of trouble. Thank you. Then, a person's melon will be written in a few chapters, without procrastination and making the reader unbearable. Finally, the conclusion of the article! I can't say enough about its valuable content, hahaha

I really like to read this kind of mind-reading plot recently. I finished it so quickly while watching it [laughing and crying], but it is true that the heroine is just a spoiler, and she has a lot of love, but this does not affect the joy of reading the article. Anyway, there is nothing special about blood pressure.

It's great, very interesting storyline. I can't stop watching it. Please keep updating.

The heroine is very laid-back, she can basically level up by eating melons, and the plot is basically one melon after another, which is my personal favorite type of relaxed humor. The ending of the short story is currently he, don't worry, it's a very stress-relieving story, and you can just read it during the break.

The heroine is the favorite of the group. Every time she eats the melon live, everyone is very cooperative. Even if the melon owner himself dies, he still stands strong and lets the heroine finish her talk. The system is a melon-eating system with a special identity, the spirit of the world gate. The heroine saves the cannon fodder sect and leads all members to quickly complete the dungeon and complete the counterattack mission.

I read it in one go, so cool! I feel like I rarely read mind-reading novels that are finished. I really enjoyed this one [Blowing Kiss], both in terms of plot and pacing. The author is so awesome [Like]

Read the entire article on October 14, 2024. (Cui Shu) He really saved the sect and everyone in the story line invisibly, and they are really good at eating. The combination of fish and mutton, I can't even imagine what it tastes like, but it looks good anyway.

It is indeed a very interesting and funny novel. The heroine San Guan is leading the sect from cannon fodder to the victorious ending. The process in between is interesting and exciting. Moreover, the setting is very good. Anyone who has ill intentions towards the heroine cannot hear her voice, so everyone around the heroine is a good person. It is a warm and interesting novel. It is worth reading.

It's so beautiful, the atmosphere is relaxed and happy throughout, no more waiting for a slap in the face, execution of the bad guy is now! The brothers and sisters of the sect and the elders were also very warm. They made me feel warm looking at the corpse. I just watched it hard.

It looks so good, I hope it will be updated more, and the arts and sciences will become more and more exciting. I hope the heroine will find an opportunity to learn divination and tell it from her own words, so that we can discuss it together [Eating Melon]

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This is a funny article about eating melon from the heart. Don't read it with your brain. The main thing is to eat melon. Unlike the traditional fairy cultivating heroines, they all practice diligently and hard, either meditating in retreat, going to some dangerous places to practice, or fighting with others. The heroine of this book is different. She grows her cultivation by eating melons. This should be attributed to her mother. I won't say too much. If you are interested, just click in and take a look.

It is indeed very beautiful and exciting. The plot is humorous, full of ups and downs, and the author has a lot of imagination. This is the first time I have seen such an interesting and novel novel, and it is worth reading. Five-star praise!

It looks good, it must be perfect💯. No cp, no ambiguity. The heroine has a good personality. It turns out that the heroine is not human, and she has no father. She was conceived by her mother herself. It turns out that the system is a boundary gate. Those unlucky ones from the original book are all alive. Very nice!