Cultivation of Immortality Indiscriminately, Zen with Joy

It would be nice to change the title of the book. Great story, superbly written. There is good in good deeds, and there is also good in stealing. The clever writing and grammatical touches make the story as refreshing as the gentle rain in late summer. Save one, keep changing, and maintain your writing style!

The writing style is relaxed and pleasant, the story is warm and interesting, it is an excellent book that is easy to read, and the future is promising. Five stars are given to the author, come on! ! !

It's very interesting. It doesn't have those bloody scenes. It feels very fun and interesting. Perhaps compared to those fantasy novels that involve fighting and killing at every turn, this type of fantasy novel is more interesting [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

Super pretty! High level! The writing is smooth! Rich content! Character description

It is gripping, the plot is fascinating, and it is intoxicating to read. The writing is smooth and the description is in-depth and delicate. It can make readers feel comfortable and trance-like into the whole story world.

Hahaha! Excellent work! Excellent work! The author is very talented and witty, praise, praise, praise!

Overall it's pretty good! It is relatively good among Tomatoes. Although there is a section in the plot that I personally feel is a little bit not to my taste, but overall it is still very good! And the author is very humble! I have to give you five stars for your humility, but of course the writing is still okay! The writing is also okay, and I have a good foundation! There are no major flaws or mistakes at the moment! Keep up the good work! !

I came here from the book "Crazy Criticism of Officials". Since it is still being serialized, I want to read this completed book by the same author. It can be seen that the author has made great progress in terms of character creation, plot direction, creative ability and writing outline. When I first read this work, I could actually see a bit of the author - a shadow of a young man living in the 21st century. But it is also subject to this. The perspective and thinking of the protagonist are limited by this shadow. Whether it is the plot of the adventure in this "strange" fantasy continent or the entertainment of the novel genre, they are limited to the first person of the protagonist and cannot gallop freely. In a nutshell, it is like a bird entering a cage. There are many highlights and brilliance in the novel. I can appreciate the effort that the author put into this work, and I can also imagine the countless flashes of inspiration that came from his constant concern for this work in his daily life. However, just as regrets always run through real life, so works written based on the perspective of real life cannot get rid of regrets. (Internet articles need to use the writing vision of Internet articles.) I have finished describing my metaphysical feelings, and I would like to talk about specific things for reference. In addition to the writing vision, there are several obvious shortcomings of this work - ① The plot is not strong enough and has poor endurance. However, except for a few talented writers, this is a point that requires writing experience, that is, to directly incorporate the plot points into writing and thinking habits; ② The lack of logic. It is true that this is an online article, and its logic cannot be compared with real life. But on the contrary, online articles need more logic than real life precisely because they have an audience. For example: the personality charm of the protagonist cannot be shaped by cooking when he is undecided, the protagonist group's attachment to the protagonist cannot be based solely on the protagonist's goodwill and let other characters attack him, etc... Overall, this work is quite satisfactory. It deserves 3 stars in my mind, but I understand the difficulty of creation and persistence. I give it 5 stars. I hope the author can produce better works in the future!

A very relaxing novel, not brainless, light-hearted and humorous. The main character has an obvious personality. It's good to read when you're in a bad mood. The only drawback is that when I read it, I can't keep the corners of my mouth down, which makes people look weird to me outside. It's quite funny [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

The book is a good book, and the ratings are not low. Why would the author destroy the Great Wall, write more than a million words, and then come back to reunite with his relatives? I guess I encountered a problem that I couldn't solve. Well, I look forward to the author's next good book to comfort so many book lovers. Farewell

The style of the novel is similar to that in the storybook, Renaissance, entertainment can

It's very beautiful and well-written. It may be the use of AI, but it doesn't have the uncomfortable feeling of AI. It just has too many AI pictures, which is not necessary. Also, the depiction of spiritual practice is a bit lacking, but it doesn't hurt.

Funny and beautiful is the dream love letter I have been looking for

The author's writing style is fluent, his knowledge of rhythmic poetry is extremely profound, and his words and stories are humorous and interesting. It's beautiful!

This is a casual novel about cultivating immortals. The pictures are great and the author is very attentive.

The descriptions of the characters are vivid and distinctive, the structure is compact and the language is humorous. . . . A rare good book!

Very good. Why is the rating a bit low? I have been a bookworm for twenty years.

Yes, it's really well written. Big boost to the author.

It's really beautiful. I really like this.

Well written, very good, five stars. :

It's pretty good. It has the YY feel of a brainless and refreshing article.

The author's writing is so miraculous that it is beyond the scope of Tomato's understanding. It is a must-read and a must-read.

The writing style is good, the characters are well written, very vivid, and it feels good to read.

Super pretty, funny, and brainy

It's pretty good. The atmosphere of the article is quite relaxing, and the readers will feel happy after reading it.

The writing style is witty and humorous. The protagonist has good intentions but has no temper. He goes mad but is not crazy. The protagonist is wise but has unclear self-awareness. It's very good for an author to write a novel, but it's very hard work. Maybe everyone has their own style of writing, but I can't see it.

The beginning is novel, there are many articles and poems, the elegance and the popular can be switched freely, the cultivation system is as ethereal, and it feels familiar.

The plot is coherent, but I think there is something wrong with this rating. The writing is sophisticated and can be read by old bookworms. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.

The structure is clear, the content is wonderful, the description is vivid, it's worth it, it's super good-looking, it's worth a thumbs up, thumbs up, thumbs up👍

It's not bad, the writing is witty and the plot is rigorous, although sometimes the plot is too over-the-top to make it difficult to understand.