I Became Harry's Replacement in Hp

To be honest, I feel that the heroine is not a Hufflepuff at all. She can be anything other than Hufflepuff, so why must the heroine be assigned to Hufflepuff? [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

Overall it's okay (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The emotional line is sweet, but the falling in love is a bit sudden. The later books will be better and more natural. The ending was a little rushed, and I felt this way after reading several of the author's books.

Overall, it's pretty good. I like watching it. And I particularly like the protagonist's personality and style of doing things. It's just like the character I imagined. It's also a pleasure to watch. But the ending is very hasty and some of the plot is inexplicably close to the original work, and the author has a lot of typos. I hope to make progress when writing the next one.

I really like the plot. The heroine has seen through the essence of Dumbledore and the so-called savior from the beginning. Her strength has been increasing. Whether it is the Animagus patron saint or alchemy potions, she is very talented and hardworking. The emotional line with the second heroine is also very sweet. The silly dog ​​and the shrewd little snake are so matched.

Come on, author! It's the first time I've seen something like this. It's really well written.

The content is very good, I love the love between the two heroines! Knock! Knock! The only drawback is that the ending is too cramped, and it feels like a lot of writeable points are just brushed off at the end. What impressed me the most was the heroine's Animagus. When I first saw it, I expected her to bite Sirius [facepalm]

After reading it, I think it's ok, it's more to my liking, it's pretty good [please update]

Ah, I really like this book. The storyline and the characters of the protagonists are very good, but is there really no extra story?

The content is very interesting, and playing with the twins is a rare highlight. However, the ending is a bit rushed. I look forward to the next one being better!

It's well written, but some of the details in the writing could be better. It's the punctuation marks that really affect reading the text. Come on! I hope it won't be a trap!

It's said that it's a melon, but the heroine is always the one who gets hurt.

It's so beautiful, the heroine has a good sense of style, there are no idiots in the article, anyway it's very beautiful

The characters are well created and the author has put great care into them. The ending is so fast [I almost cried] Will there be a sequel?

Beautiful, super beautiful!

Good. Except for some typos and a little contradiction.

It's very interesting, I really like the way Arige and the twins get along together.

Although the ending is a bit rushed, this is my first time reading an HP fanfic and I quite like it. [Laughing][send heart] Let's read some other books by the author [I understand]

Damn it, just because I saw you on the Internet where I usually read, I give you a 5-star review.

It's very nice, but the ending is a bit rushed.

It looks good, I like the main CP! ! It just ended too quickly

It's very good. What's interesting is that the plot is a bit inconsistent with the title. I don't feel like I'm just trying to take advantage of it. Some of the plots are also relatively novel.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The author writes very well

Very nice, I support it

Overall good, very sweet

So pretty, so pretty

Looks good but feels a bit inadequate

Not bad, it's just that the rest of the article is too slow to finish.

The small one has finished watching it, and now the large one has also seen it. It must be fate. Five comments are required.

It's really beautiful. It would be nice if there were more of them [crying][crying][crying][crying]