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Master's Article, It's Best If Master Can Master It, Please (╥Ω╥`
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The Two Male Protagonists Who Cultivate Immortality Can Make People's Eyes Brighter Again and Again, Don't Let the Writing Style Be Awkward
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Dear Master, Thank You, Thank You, Thank You
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Please Smash Your Shuangnan Xiu Xianwen at the Bottom of the Box into My Face😁
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Master-Disciple Love Is Quite Sadistic, Is It True?
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Cultivation, Two Men, Group Portrait, Genius, Two Strong Men, Children of Aristocratic Families
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Two Male Protagonists, Master and Apprentice, the Master Is on Top! ! Disciple, Don't Be Soft and Cute! !
I'll scold each one of you for being so delicate! ! I am a huge thunder...
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The portrayal of people's hearts is very real, but to be honest, if Shou is not strong enough, you really shouldn't get close to Gong or get close to him. He feels very stressed and has ideological differences, and it is easy to be targeted or hurt. I really feel that if Shou and Gong are together, he will suffer a lot of grievances. This is not caused by Gong, but it is probably caused by indirect reasons, and Gong actually has a kind of arrogance in the first chapter. In it, he knows Shou well from the introduction and some conversations, so he should also know that Shou actually cannot persevere. There are many factors, and these factors he cannot change, but to ignore it and ask him to become an immortal, it feels like your parents want you to study well, but you really have no talent. You can't force this kind of thing. If you insist on doing this, there will be no results and both parties will suffer. I might admire people like that, but I still can't be friends with them because I don't have the ability or the ability to help others unconditionally. After all, it would be uncomfortable for two people to get close if they have different ideas and concepts. So I really want this book to be. If I want to achieve Dzogchen, I have to change my qualifications, but I feel that the author is not very good at changing this. After reading a few chapters, I can see that the style is realistic.
It's really beautiful, the writing style is quite simple, and the descriptions are very delicate and real. I wanted to cry when I was a child, especially the parents in Lianhua Village. I was so moved. Then, I also loved the descriptions of the two protagonists. Xie Ruzhen is so gentle. At first, I thought it was the kind of "good old guy?" Who sacrifices himself for others. I feel that Qin Zhi's mentality is easier. Empathy, especially when Xie Ruzhen was attacked by the people, really felt that it was not worth it, but when he comforted Qin Zhi, he suddenly felt that he was being comforted along with Qin Zhi. The misunderstanding was dispersed a lot, just like the police uncle, someone may cause trouble to him, but he will come to save that person. I really admire him and feel super safe. As expected of a "priest", that kind of temperament, uh, gentle and tolerant yet powerful [sending my heart] Then Qin Zhi is so miserable, it's not right, the world is very miserable, ordinary people don't have any golden fingers, they just want to live a good life, it's too difficult for ordinary people. But Qin Zhi can still work hard, endure being bullied, and remain calm. I admire him even more. And then other people, well, everyone has misfortune. I think I can already predict that there will definitely be more abuse later. [Cry][cry][cry] It's really not that my tears are too low, I'm going to cry to death. I haven't even read a few chapters in one go to ease my sad mood [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] Dear author, can you please not let anything happen to my sister and the others? I feel like Xie Ruzhen said that he is not suitable for the sect. I am afraid that if Qin Zhen works hard to survive here, he will end up like that senior brother He. When he comes home, he will be found dead [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] (I went crazy early in the morning. I hope the author will update it soon, which means I read these 100 chapters so quickly)
Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! After reading this little bit, my biggest wish is that the author can write well and keep updating. Don't give up just because the data is not good, otherwise we readers will be very sad [almost crying]
The portrayal of family relationships is quite good, and the characters are all well drawn. The protagonist is not a very powerful and omnipotent person. Instead, he has some flaws that a mortal should have, which is very real. Moreover, the descriptions of mortals are also very detailed and show human nature. I wrote this book review after reading it, and I sincerely recommend it. I hope the author will continue to work hard, come on [top post]
He Lingzheng. He is an upright, responsible, capable, and hateful person. The author shaped his soul. When he first appeared, he was very hateful. However, as the number of appearances increased, people's views on him changed greatly. His younger brother died because of other people's selfish desires, and his parents were retaliated by demon cultivators. He has fallen, awakened, and been punished for hurting his fellow disciples. He will apologize. He is a person of flesh and blood. But the author set up a situation in which he must die at the beginning. He is probably that soul, symbolizing his talent for training. But he had to sacrifice. He needed to save his senior brother, because he was the senior brother and that was his ideal. So after being forced to become a demon, he destroyed his eyes and his own soul. He was also realizing his ideal at the last moment [crying]
Real and simple, it is really touching. I look forward to the following chapters [Learned]
I personally watched a few of them and liked them very much. They are all to my liking.
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This article is a growth-oriented article. Generally speaking, I still prefer the growth-oriented article. The character design is also quite good. The two people redeem each other. The ending is a bit watery, but overall it is still good. Overall, the rating is a bit low, but it is definitely good-looking. How to say it? The first volume is really full of emotions, and the second volume makes up for a lot of cp. The attack is really gentle and gentle, and the endurance is very strong. Then they like to play straight balls and so on. The ultimate pulling feeling. I love it. I have only read more than 90 pictures of the second volume. I will comment after reading it. I've finished reading the next volume. He Lingzheng and Wei Chi, Xiu Xin and Gu Sheng, Yue Qing and Ji Wushuang Lin Qingshuang won the second prize for the best affectionate male. After understanding Xiu Xin and Gu Sheng's feelings, he did not break them up. In the first volume, Gu Sheng removed the soul stone and under the test of the Demon Lord, he resolutely gave him his soul stone, but he lived and died. It can be said that Lin Qingshuang really loves Gu Sheng and feels a little sorry for him. Gu Sheng is really lucky. Yue Qing and Ji Wushuang in the second volume [should be Yue Qing and the Three Lords in the first volume], but I am not sure because the names of the three Lords were not disclosed in the first volume (because I read it in December last year, and it was a long time ago, so I can't remember it. Then I found out by searching Yue Qing's name that the Three Lords belong to Ji Wushuang, but there is no mention of it in the article). Generally speaking, Yue Qing's love for Ji Wushuang in the second volume is remarkable. Although Ji Wushuang did not love him, and the love was relatively forced in the early stage, what he did later was not to openly say "I love you" and add love to the burden, but to pay silently, and the final ending was also good. Qin Zhi and Xie Ruzhen Needless to say 99 (It's really too late and I have to go to class tomorrow to make up for it later) Finish spreading flowers
The third book! ! From Prince Regent to Jianghu to Xiuxian [Adoration], I like every one of them. And unlike other themes, ordinary people also have the brilliance of ordinary people. They don't have a very unfavorable background, but have a very awesome identity. They are done in a down-to-earth manner. It's really good-looking! ! ! ! The author will update soon! ! ! I really like the book you wrote [sending my heart] Highly recommended, the characters are described very delicately
After reading more than a hundred chapters, there is no plot about Long Aotian. It is close to life. The description of the storyline is also quite realistic and has a strong sense of immersion. I only have one emotion. I want to ask Qin Zhi if you are tired. [Crying] What a miserable person. The writing is a bit cumbersome and may not be very friendly to old bookworms who have high writing requirements.
Although the author said that the data was not good, he still worked hard to finish this long novel. I liked this one better than His Highness. The openness of His Highness and the ending of the story that was not a happy ending made me hold my breath for a long time. I gave up on the last third and a half of the story because it was so uncomfortable. I have read this book "Cultivation of Immortality" very seriously. Although the main story still has a painful ending, the side story and the second world story gave me some blood. I like stories full of love and endings full of love. Please continue to work hard.
Super nice In fact, I already feel that I haven't read a long novel in ancient style for a long time. Mainly because I haven't read a long novel in a long time. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are very vivid. But when I cut the knife, it really hurt my heart. Overall, it's not very sadistic, it's kind of sweet and moderately sadistic. But I really think Qin Zhi is a bit miserable. There may be some flaws in some parts of the plot, but regardless of the flaws, I still think it's very interesting! Five-star praise [send heart][send heart][send heart]
It's so real. The real world is like looking at the people around us with a microscope. Ordinary but great.
To be honest, the description in this article is quite delicate and quite humane. The protagonist in the article is just like ordinary people. He has no arrogant talents and cherishes his relatives. I really like this lack of pride and being very confident. I also like the second protagonist. He saves the world first and loves all things. Personally, I think this should be the true meaning of cultivating immortality.
Ahhhhhh I really like this article! This is my first time to follow a serial. I am scratching my head waiting for the update. I rely on this little spiritual food to recharge my batteries every day. Author, please don't stop updating just because there are not many people who have bad ratings. My spiritual food, wuwuwu, I rely on this to survive during the finals week of college students aaaaaa[cry][cry][cry]
It's really good. The characters are rich, as are the supporting characters. The plot is compact and very attractive. I've read almost 500 chapters without realizing it. The relationship between the protagonist is also very attractive. It's not particularly flat. Overall, it's very good. I think it's above the tomato level.
I've read a third of it, so I'll give it a five-star rating. I personally like this type of writing, although occasionally I feel that the male protagonist is a bit too frustrated (?) Hmm... How to put it, the idea of the plot is actually quite good, but sometimes the description is too strange (?) For example, the disciples of Yunxiao Sect's targeting and bullying of Qin suddenly turned into everyone's protection. To be honest, I didn't change it, especially why the bullying was not written enough (?) After all, no matter how dissatisfied I am, in fact, after knowing the other party's contribution, many people have the sense not to do anything else. As well as the bullying and sacrifice of Senior Brother Li Yue in the opening scene. To be honest, I feel that Li Yue's bullying does not fit the character. Since he is a person who does not sacrifice for the sake of sacrifice, such people often do not care about a position to bully. I know the contradictions of people, but I personally feel that this does not fit the character. And since Yunxiao Sect is such a fair and honest organization with clear rewards and punishments, such exaggerated bullying is inappropriate, and some bullies have not been punished. But the protagonist gets punished every time. To be honest, I start to feel unfair. The same goes for the section about the sky thunder. Since the merits are immeasurable, according to the previous section about Wenyue being struck, it stands to reason that the protagonist will either be unable to be struck down by the sky thunder, or it will not be seriously injured. There are other people who are at fault. If fairness is not applied to everyone, is it still fair?
In fact, I feel that the male protagonist is really pitiful, having to endure the pain over and over again😣 I think I might have collapsed myself [face covering] 1. I am not moved by their love. I just feel that the male protagonist is so pitiful🥺Really pitiful! She finally gained the love of her family and got a sister. The sister from her previous life can still protect her in this life, but it backfired... She couldn't bear the abuse from her family anymore... 2. Um... I'm probably only suitable for being a demon cultivator [laughs awkwardly]... I feel like I want to scare everyone inside when I look at it [laughs awkwardly] 3. After seeing Chapter 73, did you sneak away to save your sister? If you just want spiritual stones, then you can just sell the Kirin Stone [laughing awkwardly] Isn't it enough to just be willing to do it? 4. The more I think about it, the angrier I get! The male protagonist went to apply for a job and got injured. If you don't accept it, then don't accept it! But at least give me a fee! At any rate, it was your sect's disadvantage that caused the male protagonist to be injured. At least you should pay for mental damage, hush money, or medical expenses! [Awkward laugh] This sect is hopeless. [Awkward laugh] There is no severance pay for dismissing the disciples. The one named Wei Chi was injured and couldn't go back. He didn't ask the sect for the fee, nor did he say whether it was the sect that raised him or his senior brothers and sisters. Because of the brotherhood, I gave him something [laughing awkwardly] I saw him chatting with the male protagonist, and he also mentioned that they were injured and couldn't practice. They could neither stay in the sect nor go home, so they had to find a place to live for the rest of their lives [face covering] It's pitiful to think about it🥺 5. Think about it, let me comment again, that sect used formations to protect the surrounding villages, but in the end the villages were still destroyed, so why did they need this formation? It works? ! This kind of people can't even protect the surrounding villages and towns, but they still want to protect the world? Ah bah! Rubbish! It's clear that everything is fine within the formation, but you still let the family members of the sect disciples be exterminated one by one. What else is it if it's not garbage? [Awkward laugh] I don't even ask for a large sect to protect a province. I just think it's enough to protect the surrounding villages. As a result, the surrounding families can't protect them. What kind of immortality are they cultivating? Cultivation of demons comes faster [laughing awkwardly] No wonder the sect is getting more and more lonely. Those who are not possessed by demons must be emotionally indifferent [laughing awkwardly]
Not enough! Can you write more? It is one of the few novels that I have finished reading. Every character has its own characteristics. I am also very happy that He and Wei are in the second life. Senior Brother Lin makes me feel so sad! Thanks to the author for presenting these stories, I love them!
How to say it! It feels like a flashback starting from the first chapter. It makes me want to skip the chapter and read it. But after reading a few more chapters, I realized that I still need to read this one bit by bit. It's really good to watch. Lin Qingshuang is so sorry. Who told you not to have a mouth since you were a child? But I don't want to talk about Gu Sheng, he also loved Xiu Xin for two lifetimes. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhh! Darling about loving them all being loved being being being loved being loved by them.
Well, not cliché. It's interesting. The protagonist's personality is also relatively three-dimensional, but I can see the author's intention in character creation and plot setting.
It's good-looking. The people around the male protagonist are all very nice, and they all have brains. He has very upright views. The description of family relationships is very touching. The protagonist's previous relationship is also very sweet. Friendship, family affection, and camaraderie are all very touching. Good-looking. I urge you to update more!
The author's writing style is very delicate. The relationship between the two people is slow-burning, but after being together, it feels like a long-lasting flow. Yuhan is a gentle and guiding type. He guides Qin Zhi's growth step by step [shy] The two of them have a very relaxed and warm atmosphere together [blowing kiss]
The writing style is very delicate, and the pitfalls can be filled in. It is quite good-looking. It is not like a good book like Tomato. It is interspersed with a lot of foreshadowing, and the article has ups and downs, and it is well controlled. I also like the character of the male protagonist. I feel that the male protagonist and He Ling are a good match. It is a pity.
Very good. It's really much better than some books. I like this kind of thing.
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It's very beautiful, with clear logic (՞ਊ՞)👍, full of details (^ν^), and the main character has a distinct personality. I've read so many books, and this is the first one I've given such a high rating. It really pokes me 📚(¯∇¯;) I like it very much. Please give me more updates from the author🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻Please. ฅ՞•ﻌ•՞ฅIt's really not enough to watch for a few hours all night. ಥ_ಥI just finished it. I feel sorry for the hungry children (╥╥)
This book is really good. I have been following it since the beginning. The logic, thinking, and emotional intelligence of this book are all very high. I usually don't rate novels unless they are particularly good-looking and attractive.