Harry Potter: When the Potter Kids Return to the Next Generation

I'm from Grindelwald! Thank you so much for allowing me to eat such a delicious meal😋. The writing is smooth and natural and not OOC at all!

It's so good. I've been in a bit of a book shortage recently, so I happened to come across this book. The subject matter is very novel, the plot is interesting, and the characters are also very realistic. [Sending my heart] I really like it 🥰 @Ace's Killer. It's so good.

Looks good! This is my first time watching this kind of subject (I haven't watched Cursed Child, and I felt that Voldemort and Bella couldn't have a child, so I didn't watch it). The grandchild generation passes through the child generation, and the gears of fate begin to turn. Little Lily and little Harry also get along very well. In the early days, little Harry always thought that little Lily and little Albus were his siblings. Faced with little Lily, a potion waste who looked like Lily Evans, Snape was reluctant to deduct points after all. Little Albus, a Slytherin from the Potter family, I also like his character very much. He is polite to everyone. Except for little James, he is very good at all subjects. Except for flying, little James and flying are simply his biggest shortcomings. Little James appears relatively late in this book. He is simply the Hermione of Harry's trio. He is very smart and a hexagon warrior. The speculation about Sirius and Peter in the headmaster's office is simply the truth. Ggad also appears in this book, but it appears in an article written by little Lily and her roommate. Almost the entire British wizarding world knows about ggad. Dumbledore died on the spot, and Gellert, who was far away in Nurmengard, wrote to them specifically asking for the ending. Finally, I hope that after Lily and the three return, Harry and Sirius can live a good life and not re-create the tragedy of the original work.

The writing is good, with a very interesting line of thinking, and there are a lot of funny scenes that involve people's faces. The author is also good. Both of the two books he wrote are good-looking. Even after leaving, he still shared the outline and gave the story plot. If the author moves, you can also check and let me know, maybe we can meet again by chance. It's just a pity that good writing is ruined by the mechanism, forcing people to leave, making people hate them but there is nothing they can do about it.

It's very beautiful, but I won't write about it because of the problem with foreign persimmons 😢😢😢😢 Foreign persimmon, give me a rat 🥺 🥺 😠

This book is the most beautiful one I have ever read. It goes from the future to the sub-age. I like the two books written by Da Da very much, and Lily. The author's portrayal is really cute and detailed. At first glance, one can tell that he is a child who grew up in a honeypot. Finally, I really like the article written by the author [sending my heart][sending my heart]

A very nice article with enough laughs. It can be said that it can instantly kill most of the literary works in Tomato. I have always wondered why the text in Tomato becomes increasingly unreadable. It turns out that many of them are continued by AI, which can publish one or even hundreds of books a day. As a result, such an excellent author left Tomato. I can only say it's a pity, but I think it's better this way The novel circle should be a place where people talk about their favorite content together. Fanfiction is about creating a new world for your favorite characters and creating another possibility, rather than discussing the characters in the article or even scolding them. Please don't bring in the bad habits from other circles. The Internet is dirty enough and completely smoky.

The concept of this book is very novel. Most HP fan fiction is a growth story written from the perspective of children and parents, but this one has a light and funny melody, with many "original jokes" mixed with warmth. Little James said to Sirius that he gave your name to his first child. My heart really trembled when I saw this. Needless to say, the gold content of "When everything is over, I will give you a home." "Two months of confusion and infatuation, a century of ineffability" is even more ceiling-level. A wild idea just makes up for the previous regrets. I hope this book will get better and better and give everyone a he ending. Come on, author, I love you so much!!! 🥰🥰🥰[Admiration]

The subject matter is very new and very interesting, but I feel that the author has not updated it for a long time. It was only updated on April 24th, and it is now May 2nd. Really nice to look at. It was fun, but it died out all of a sudden. Come on come on come on. 🥺🥺🥺❤️ I think it's so so

There are no shortcomings except that it is too short and ends in one go. This is a novel of pure joy. There are no plot twists or suspense points, it is just fun from beginning to end, and the author's writing is really humorous. Little Lily's high-energy crowd is super E and lively!