Senior Sister, Don’t Get the Wrong Idea. I’m Marrying My Junior Sister, the Demoness

I'm curious as to what is good about this book and whether it will be on the recommendation list? The details of the scenes are vividly described, but the plot connection is sloppy, and the dialogue between the characters is awkward and unnatural. Although it is clearly in the first person, the content sounds like a third-person narration. The character hasn't even appeared in a few chapters, but only two or three sentences are used to describe him in such a "high-spirited" way. The character's design is not very full, and the image has to be piled up with details. The plot is also not compact enough, as if there is nothing to write about. Each chapter has more than 2,000 words, but it is a running account. This is a fun article, and the main point of fun is probably to make the senior sister regret it. After reading several chapters, it is all about trivial matters with the junior sister, and it feels uninteresting. The fun is not that obvious. Generally speaking, the writing style is acceptable, but the plot and dialogue are stiff and draggy, and a bit boring. Logically speaking, an impatient reader like me who has read too many exciting articles will not be able to read it after a few chapters. The writing level is about the same as my second or third year of junior high school. I don't know how old the author is. However, I haven't seen it yet and I don't know if the level has improved. I wrote such a long comment not just to point fingers and dislike the article. I mainly hope that the author can improve it carefully and hope to create better stories in the future. Because I have experienced it myself, I can see that the author also has some love for coding. Come on. I originally wanted to give it an optimistic rating of three stars, but I think I'm still a newbie, so I'll give it five stars for encouragement.

It's okay. I read in the comments that the protagonist is a dog licker, but from another perspective, the heroine is burping in order to avenge the hero. Isn't this a kind of licking? How can two licking dogs fall in love and be called licking? It should be called mutual love. [Thinking] For now, as long as you don't have a harem, it's fine.

It's good to have a single heroine all the time.

It's pretty. I personally think it's pretty.

It feels okay, not too watery, and I personally think the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are quite good.

The author's writing is very good, and it is very in line with my taste. I hope the author will continue to work hard. After all, writing novels is not easy. I only need hundreds of thousands of words to support the author. I hope the author will persevere. ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ ) If you don't like it, don't criticize the author. It's not easy to write novels. You can easily write hundreds of thousands or even millions of words. If you look at your own essays when you were in school, you couldn't even write a few hundred words, so don't criticize the author.

The type of people who grow up together is quite good. Emperor Ruyan's role is a bit small and unorganized. From the beginning, he said that he will only love his junior sister in the next life, so don't change it to a harem.

Good profile, no good profile, no single female lead, do other girls have a chance?

The content is exciting, the male protagonist is single and not brainless, the storyline is lively and interesting, and the characterization is perfect

I hope it won't be unfinished. I hope it will be more than 2 million words. Come on, author, I support you.