What Does the Great Calamity of Heaven and Earth Have to Do with Me?

The author must be young, and the evil he depicts the three masters and disciples is too simple. To sum up, he knows his mistakes but does not admit them, shirks responsibility and avoids facing them. However, their regret and sense of helplessness and repentance are also portrayed subtly. These two behavioral traits are contradictory. It proves that the author should be quite kind, and all the evils he can think of are the most vulgar and resonant evils. This is the result of what we have learned and seen. So when I read the author's article, I felt pity for the master and the disciple. It gave me the feeling that kind people were deceived and made unforgivable mistakes due to specific factors. On the whole, people are not bad. This is your problem, the author. Real evil is impossible for people to sympathize with, it is so disgusting that it makes people sick at the thought of it, and it is absolutely impossible for people to feel the slightest pity. Take Leng Xinchan as an example. What you wrote makes people hateful at all. It completely deviates from the character of a person who is obsessed with profit. All I see is a little girl who wants to become stronger and is willing to pay all the costs. You have to know that you are writing about her being violated. This is a completely redundant description. There is a huge difference in the character base between the one who is active and the one who is passive. Of course, it may be a cognitive bias caused by social experience and age. So to a certain extent, I feel that the protagonist you wrote is a bit too much. This is the result of not doing a good job of character balance. Of course, this is just my suggestion. Overall, the writing style is okay. Several reversal hooks in the article impressed me deeply. For example, the master swore to sever the master-disciple relationship because of the demon king's fantasy. To be honest, I really thought about it. This reversal surprised me. Imagination is admirable.

At first I thought it was a cool story, and at first I felt that they were really blinded by the false accusations, but in the last few chapters I found that the story was not that simple, it was not just about being deceived, but they were using each other, and between their future and their emotions, they chose their future and deliberately pretended not to know. It seemed that there was a very, very big foreshadowing. One less star, this book has some shortcomings. Since it is a fun article, you should enjoy it to the end. Instead of writing about them using each other to improve the level of this article, it is better to just go to the end and let the readers enjoy it. I prefer the carefree parts in the front. For these last few chapters, it is really better not to write it and just write about the protagonist killing them all.

After listening to part of it, I feel that the front part is pretty good, but the middle part and the back part feel a bit worse. I feel that this way is not suitable. If you follow the villain text, the front part and the back part are the same, which is better.

How should I put it? I'm so confused whether to give the author three or four stars. When the indigenous male protagonist is pulled back to the past by Tiandao, a time loop will occur. If the indigenous male protagonist cannot save the world, Tiandao will repeatedly restart the rescue process until Tiandao is satisfied.

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The author's writing is good and the plot is very good, although the protagonist is still

It's been a long time since I've read a book that I've read in depth.

A good book will naturally attract more people if you listen to it [Like]

Fits my personality

Rise of Jianghan Zixiao Sword Sect

It sounds great, I like it very much

Not bad, good, finished listening

The past is the past and the present is now. It's nothing like Xiu Xianwen.

I'm very interested in the content, it's interesting

Although the ending is not very good, I still want to watch the second part

It would be nice if there were character illustrations@author

I don't think this is a dog-licking article. It feels like a regret article.

Very good, really good. I feel like I was maliciously rated. It shouldn't be so low.

It's beautiful to look at, but a bit heartbreaking.