Sailing the Sky Islands: A Universal Fishing Rod Hooks the Strongest Mecha

To summarize first, the worldview is too mixed and there is no well-defined scope, which makes it look empty. What the protagonist does is always placed in a large background with narrative language, so that there is no obvious positive feedback for what the protagonist does. It seems a bit broad, and everything has to be explained. Although it is very detailed, it is very confusing, as if in order to explain the setting clearly, it ignores whether it will affect the reader's perception. To be honest, I feel like I'm in a fog now when I see it. I can't find the main thread of this book, and it feels like a hammer here and a stick here and there. Moreover, I know that this is a mixed world, but I have not found out what the Alliance for Human Survival and Self-Rescue, this "Human Federation", represents about the crises that humanity faces in order to survive and save itself. Is the protagonist doing things to get to the surface? Have no idea. Does the protagonist and the crew have any goals so far? Have no idea. What does the protagonist do now? I don't know, anyway, just getting stronger is enough. Is the protagonist just free to explore? Have no idea. Does the protagonist want to change the current situation of human existence in this world? Don't know either. I just saw all kinds of mixed world views, all kinds of mixed power systems, and all kinds of narratives that were so boring and plain that I had no desire to read them at all. Regarding the tasks that the protagonist accepts in the academy where he is located, every time it feels like he is crushing the opponent with a mecha and it is time to feel refreshed, the narrative language is very bland every time. It was originally tied to the world view of the great voyage, but it turned out that it was not fun to fight back in the face of injustice. To be honest, I admire myself for watching it for so long. After watching it for so long, if I compare my emotions to a line, then my emotions are on a straight line most of the time. And sometimes the fluctuations, when placed in a narrative that is too broad and unclear in focus, become like ripples. There is no emotional impact of ups and downs, and there is no desire to read on. Not to my liking, I took my leave.

It's too messy, with messy plots and messy items. It gives me a headache to watch. I can only say that there is nothing extremely poisonous about it.

It looks good so far, but there is one serious shortcoming, that is, there are too many explanations. Everything is explained. At best, it is the author's setting, and at worst, it is just plain water.

The subject matter is very good and the creativity is very good, but the writing is average, the creativity is very good, and the subject matter is also good, but the plot is too cliche and makes people read very stiff. I hope the author can write in his own style [Thoughts]

The things were too messy and complicated. I thought it was a casual novel about fishing to obtain magical items, but who knew it was a hodgepodge of a wonderful boy's adventure... Every day you are either fighting or on the way to fight. You really don't need to open a cheat, just fight monsters and equip yourself.

It's creative, but it's a bit messy

The various worldviews are well stitched together, with occasional lulls and nonsensical laughs 😏, a good and refreshing article, I hid under the quilt to read it in the middle of the night, my mouth was a bit stiff when I smiled 😏

So far, it's quite interesting to write.

After reading the ninety chapters, the overall story is scattered and messy. There are problems with the story structure. The plot rhythm is like a breakthrough and lacks a lot of details, which leads to fatigue. Mark

The plot is too cliche and has no surprises at all