快穿之路人甲奋斗成大佬

It's rare to find a fast-traveling novel with almost no cheats, and the writing and logic are online! I was watching it with great enthusiasm, but suddenly I realized that there was no new content... So blue and thin! ! Author, please update~

It's beautiful. To me, the heroine is perfect. She's calm and intelligent but also empathetic. She doesn't have CP yet. She's really perfect. She's exactly the person I want to be and envy. Moreover, the author's writing is fluent, there are no major bugs, and she's also humorous from time to time. She's so beautiful!

Immortal product. The layout is full! It's not the kind of routine that sells patriotic sentiments, but the little people who shine dazzlingly in the times. Including some regrets in reality, such as the father of soybeans, pioneers finally have a happy ending in the book. This is not a kind of pity, but more like a utopian dream come true in parallel time and space. The protagonist is neither a virgin nor pretentious, and the whole process is refreshing and occasionally exciting. I think I will watch it again. It's poisonous... The heroine forgave her enemy for the original heroine, haha. I don't know what the author was thinking. Everyone in the comment section was very uncomfortable. Not only did she forgive her, but she also gave her 100 million yuan. It was really an eye-opener for me [sending my heart]

There is a beautiful world. There are also unsightly worlds, which are said to be populated by men, women, old and young, but there are relatively few male characters, usually women. As the game progresses, I feel that there are quite a lot of old lady characters. . . Overall it's okay Anyway, I am becoming more and more holy in the future. I think the comments are quite right. It is hard not to doubt whether there is a change of person. Moreover, I remember that in the beginning, the system allowed you to add points to yourself. But later on, there are no more points. Every world is so powerful. Logically speaking, I have accumulated a lot. And there are merits and so on. I can't tell that he is a person with great merits. .

It looks good. Compared with the introduction and the beginning, the content is a bit poor. So far, the content of the two normal worlds is very good. It seems that there is no CP. The golden finger is not too big. It is mainly about IQ. Everything depends on your own efforts. The pattern is very big. It is not a small love. It is very good [Sending Hearts]

It's a super, super good book. The heroine and the system described by the author are really good. They encourage each other and support each other for half of their lives. The heroine has a resolute character and an open mind. She is truly a person who helps the world when she is rich, but lives alone when she is poor. She works as a policeman in modern literature and brings glory to the country. There is no exaggerated gold finger, no strong female character, but the domineering male protagonist is always inseparable. Really highly recommended

This is a passionate novel, and Golden Finger also has it, but the writing is powerful and powerful, which makes people read it very much. I like it very much, but there are too few, please give it a try!

It's so good. I beg you, the author, to keep writing. It's not easy to find a novel that matches your taste. Listen to me, book friends who want to read this book are also hesitant. Except for the first few worlds, which are a bit boring, other worlds are good to read o(*≧▽≦)ツ Yad, has the author been changed? Why does the character of the heroine later become more and more crumbling as it is written, and do you still use those faith values ​​and merit values ​​as a display for him? And those with such high merits can't help but protect the Lord, and the merits are so dazzling, they have become golden men, and they can't even save themselves. Just kidding Σ( ° △ °|||), I decided to go to the ratings I left before I left. Later book friends, please don't follow in my footsteps.

I like it, I like it [Sending my heart] The heroine has a very upright outlook and is very hard-working. Each world has a different life experience. She has been an anchor, a scientific researcher, an athlete, and an ordinary person in the apocalypse. Every world has a different path to success. The heroine is so inspirational, it makes my blood boil. I'm sorry for the trivial details. Since the author wrote the story about the blood relationship between Yaozu and Zhaodi, he must have anticipated the controversy later on. Readers, don't be angry. No one can replace your body with anger. Let those who love to read read it.

So far, I have just watched the part of the Republic of China. The character setting (42 years old, dumping shit) is very poignant. The turbulent Republic of China did not have the romance we imagined, but only the patriotism of small people. The characters started from humble little people, one thing after another, and many twists and turns. I think the plot will not make people feel uncomfortable and exaggerated, but it is okay. I recommend this part!

The author is very imaginative, and the story is fascinating. When I first read it, the first story was a criminal investigation story. When I brought it into the perspective of Sishui, I was really immersed in it. I couldn't control it. There are ordinary life chapters, but also very imaginative post-apocalyptic immortality chapters, interstellar chapters, etc. There are also anti-drug chapters that we often read in life. The kitten Sishui is really powerful. Big idea, generally speaking, Sishui is very strong, super strong, but I personally don't like it. Several of the stories involve family members, but I think some of them do not describe the family relationship very well. There is a period chapter about going to Shenzhen City, and infinite tolerance for family members. I was very angry when I saw it. Maybe for Sishui, this small favor, quarrels, etc. Are nothing, but for me, it is really a breast obstruction, and for this little problem, there are many other small stories, which are very interesting. Later, the system appears less and less frequently. I suspect that the author has changed. Some of the stories behind are so good...

Don't be put off by the introduction, it's actually innovative, the author's writing is good, and it sticks to the title. In "Money and Humanity", I was always worried that the protagonist Shui Miao would die at some point (because the protagonist could not survive for only a few seconds at the beginning, and this was a fast time travel), plus some details (it felt like everyone was going to harm the protagonist, which is not deep enough. If you want to experience it, I suggest you put your heart and soul into it, but you may be startled by passers-by around you), it is very nervous and attractive. However, I was attracted by the chapter title of "I Was a Female Ghost in a Chinese Studio" and stayed, but I started reading it from the fourth world "I am a little kitten". I like that the police dog in it is big and strong, and the little animals are very cute. I especially like the extras in this chapter, they are very loving. "It was as if she was closing her eyes and concentrating. Three college students in front of her were kneeling in front of her, holding three sticks of incense and placing many offerings in front of them. While kowtowing, they asked Shuimiao for help." Also, the Agricultural University where the protagonist Cat is located has made "your graduation project will be guarded by cats" an admissions highlight. Let's briefly talk about these worlds. The first one will not be spoiled, as mentioned above, but there is a main character whose setting is not very consistent with the previous one (it is too bland and feels like a passer-by). Although I know it is a contrast, I really can't tell that the setting is not clear from the previous one. Establishment and foreshadowing (it's not that I can't see something wrong and suspicious about this person, it's mainly because of the high IQ crime aspect. In the end, it felt a bit overturned. The secret was exposed so easily, and it didn't quite fit the character) (It's just an opinion. If there are any mistakes, please feel free to comment after reading). But overall it is good, and it even closely follows the actual facts (although it is no longer relevant now), as shown in "The Richest Man Takes Over the Steel Pipe Factory", Laiyang Steel Pipe and Carbon Fiber do not follow the ordinary path of the richest man. The father of the protagonist (now male) in this world can be jokingly said to be the protagonist's guide in life. Every time the topic of conversation comes up, the protagonist is ready to do something. "Struggles in the 1970s" is a masterpiece. It imitates characters like Qian Xuesen and Qian Lao who give up their hobbies for the needs of the country, but change directions and still become leaders, which is exciting. The development chapter of "I Was a Female Ghost in Liaozhai" is not really about developing a relationship, it is similar to choosing a person, trying to see if the theory of dragon slaying is feasible, and finally creating the effect of the fall of the gods. Currently, "A Rich Woman Who Doesn't Want to Act Is Not a Good Screenwriter" has stable updates and many chapters. Yesterday I found that I had updated a chapter before I lay down, and another chapter after I woke up.

It's really good to read. The author's writing style is very good. He has created many three-dimensional characters, and there are several worlds that are really exciting. The first world, the Republic of China, studying chemistry, etc. Are all very interesting. Although the author's writing is very good, I still have to say that in the later stages, for example, in the world of The Extraterrestrial, the country has obviously lost its intelligence. When it comes to testing, it goes directly to the heroine without notifying it, causing the heroine to be seriously injured. The most annoying thing is that the heroine is too holy, and she says that everything is fine. Although there are some other worlds that are a bit holy, they are reasonable and acceptable. The strange world is really too speechless. There is also the feeling that the author obviously loves men. I have read hundreds of chapters. So far, except for the popular Aunt Fu in Hong Kong City, I have not seen a memorable positive female character (if there is one later, I haven't seen it yet). Hundreds of chapters have passed. The ones who guide the heroine, have a significant positive influence on the heroine, and provide strong support to the heroine are all men. There are really no exceptions. So far, there is no three-dimensional, plot-rich, positive female character. I really can't stand it.

The plot and ideas are good, especially the author's imagination. Many worlds are quite interesting and worth a look. One star is deducted because there are many bugs in the story, and the heroine's character is unstable. Some worlds are decisive in killing people (such as the one with the human trafficker), and some worlds of the Madonna made my eyes dark again and again (such as being paralyzed by someone, but still cheering to comfort others, a graduate student not retaliating after being ruined by a tutor card, and being laid off after his brother stole all his public savings and still enlightened him). Many people in the comment area said that the heroine is a boss. These are not setbacks, and it is normal to be generous and tolerate some minor troubles. I'll just em... Analyze the specific situation in detail. You can't just write her as a selfless and dedicated Virgin just because of her red thoughts, right? After all, she is not a true Bodhisattva, and the joy, anger, sorrow, and resentment of normal people should not be eliminated through cultivation. I hate the way she handles it because I feel like some worlds let bad people go. Just because the victim is capable, doesn't it mean that the perpetrator should be forgiven? ! You can't see evil being punished in reality, and you can't see it in novels either😦

I was really surprised to find this book during a recent book hunt. The heroine has a really good character and is very tough, the kind of toughness that allows her to work hard to live and blossom no matter what the circumstances. But in real life, I am a particularly envious type. It was really miserable at the beginning. The heroine who finally managed to survive encountered an unlucky system and was killed 50 times before she started to travel normally. The heroine's mentality is really good. No matter what happens, she never breaks down, so it should be a very sad encounter, but it looks really tragic and funny at the same time. Although the system is an unlucky guy, it is also very kind to the heroine. He cares for the heroine more than the heroine herself. Both of them are working hard and living a positive life, which is awesome. Each story is also well-written, but the first story is a bit scary. It's not suspenseful and scary about ghosts, but about the evil of human nature. It's really a bit shocking, but it's well written. The latter two stories are also very well written, but maybe because there have been a lot of news recently about domestic violence, sanitary napkins, collapsed houses, etc., They are more sensitive. Seeing that the characters are so well created, but the heroine becomes a male, it is a bit awkward. The story is really well written, and the selfless dedication and love for the country of the people of the previous era are well depicted. I hope you can continue writing and write more. I didn't really like the last few chapters. The Street Fighter chapter was inexplicable. The story of Believe in Science was a bit anticlimactic. The old Taoist priest in the middle was very touching, but the overall story was also inexplicable. The episode "The Man From Another World" was okay at first, but then I got more and more heartbroken. As a result, I suddenly added a supporting role, and the main character was disabled for the supporting role. I thought this kind of thing only happened in TV series, but I didn't expect it to happen in novels. Moreover, the setting of the heroine is a drug introduction. In order to keep people all over the world alive, this is forcing the heroine to sacrifice to God. This article makes me feel a little aggrieved. There are several other articles about BE, such as Liaozhai, the Republic of China, and The Last Days Cultivation. The golden fingers are so wide open, so why does it have to be a tragedy! But these few articles are really well written, and the ideas are very interesting. They are also be, but much better than that one about The Extraterrestrial Visitor. That article really killed me [smiles]

Hong Kong City Storm: The story of an orphan from Kowloon City to a Hong Kong City boss, exciting and highly recommended Mother is kind and son is filial: Sishui and Silly Son system work together to fight against human traffickers, punish evil and promote good, and forcefully promote Visitor from Extraterrestrial: The heroine was farming in the wasteland world earlier. I saw the special situation where the heroine was injured and paralyzed, and her blood was exposed, so I stopped watching. I am a good teacher: As the title says Hymn to Beidian: The Four Rivers of Anti-Japanese War are in the Guerrillas, Strongly Recommended College student entrepreneurship: Beginning as a student who was squeezed by the tutor, the heroine Sishui went from a pancake stall to a business boss, the heroine counterattacked Shuangwen and strongly promoted Fireworks in the World: The life of the heroine who was sucked by blood. My mother, three brothers, and nephews and nieces relied on the heroine to reach the top of her life. I don't recommend watching it. It's frustrating.

The overall story is very interesting, and the heroine is patriotic and positive. Let's talk about the shortcomings. It's not misogynistic, but I think there are some who love men. Overall, there are far more male supporting characters than female supporting characters, both in quantity and quality (fullness of characterization). Sometimes when I watch a story, I feel that it doesn't matter at all that some of the important supporting characters are women. I hope there will be more and more female characters in the future, and the author's wife's stories will get better and better!

The main theme is to strengthen the country and be patriotic, the storyline is good, and all the points are added here! ! ! But in the end, what it means is that there is actually an original protagonist, and the female protagonist is purely a woman (if I understand correctly). The author loves men very much, especially in prototype stories where the bad guys are changed to women and the good guys are changed to men... There are changes later, but there is still the shadow of loving men...

It's good-looking. I originally came in for a bland quick-travel story, but I was attracted by the first world. It quoted a real-life case in Hangzhou, and then introduced the murderer of another case. It was quite good-looking, with a neat twist. It's just that the middle part is not suitable for the timid to watch at night. It makes my back feel hairy and I always feel like there is someone behind me.

There is no cookie-cutter beauty design. The protagonist resists the constant death brought about by fate, and strives from the cliff to reach the peak of the era. Except for a few men, most of the later chapters are from a female perspective. Although it is a golden finger novel, it is indeed smooth and happy. The heart of the heroine is confident, enterprising, courageous and capable. Those who were deeply impressed were mathematicians, the Republic of China, and Hong Kong and Taiwan. No cp, truly no love, no clumsy parents, if there is, it will be a red heart♥️. Ps I personally don't like some parts of the world (The Legend of Prince Liaozhai, screenwriters in the entertainment industry)

The content of the article is very exciting. The author's writing style is very good. The previous article is also funny. Each chapter has unexpected content. It is different from other usual routines. Readers often say that this can still be done. Come on, author.

It's a completely different perspective, and the beginning is exactly the same as an idea I had. I originally wanted to write a time-travel novel, specifically about the protagonist traveling to different worlds, but I encountered all kinds of difficulties at the beginning [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]. I always felt that those who traveled to ancient times would not be so easy to survive, and even doing farm work would be exhausting. The writing is really great. Although the world of the chronicle is just mediocre when it comes to studying mathematics, the more I read the story, the more I like it. Especially the world of female ghosts. I like this perspective. It is for the common people, for the common people, and to promote the development of the world. It is really well written. Come on [Top post] [Top post] [Top post] [Top post].

I have seen the third plane. The writing is getting better and better. This cat plane is so cute and very funny. As long as this level continues, it will be completely five stars. If the author changes in the future, I will change it back. I finally know why the score is so low. The left and right brains are fighting each other. The heroine is very good, but the author has a few planes that are getting worse and worse. This is the first time I have seen the heroine become weaker and weaker. It pisses me off. Author, do you have to reward yourself with a bad plane after writing a few good planes? Such a good character design, the four waters are written as virgins. Don't look at the plane of human fireworks. It pisses me off.

It's okay. I don't like the stories in some worlds. I feel that sometimes the heroine has a bit of a double standard. If others don't like something that fits her own aesthetic, she will say that she has poor taste (my opinion is that no one should lecture others about their aesthetics like I did)… Maybe it's because I've read too many fast-traveling stories that focus on writing style and three perspectives.

It is a relatively normal article about fast travel. Although it is said to be a stranger, I feel that the core of this book is to tell us that even if you are a stranger, as long as you work hard, you can complete some of your career talents. Not to mention the talents, because later the heroine has fully equipped all kinds of talents, but in the first life of the heroine, even if he did not have such high talents, he still got into such a good exam. School, then tell us that hard work is actually more important in life, and talent is not very important because there are too many people with talent. If you have talent, others may also have it and work hard. On the contrary, others have talent and may not necessarily work hard. But if you have talent and work hard, then you will definitely be the winner. When you work hard, you may be able to match other people's talent. Of course, some special circumstances are not excluded. In short, even if we are passers-by, we are also the protagonists in our lives. We should not give up our lives and strive to bloom the flowers of our lives. Most of this book is about the feelings of family and country. There is no female competition or male competition. To be honest, I think the first one is the most beautiful. The following ones are the kind that you can think of the end as soon as you see the beginning. You can read it when you are bored to increase the interest of life and encourage yourself all the time. There are very few that are particularly exciting. You can read the article rationally and make appropriate choices based on my book review. You can read it when you are bored. I just read other netizens' book reviews. This book is very complete, but it is still quite good. What that netizen said is this. I just read other netizens' book reviews. This book is very complete, but it is still quite good. This is what that netizen said. : Although the educated youth is said to have abandoned his husband and son, he had no choice but to stay in the countryside. The author only summarized a series of not so good processes in which he abandoned his husband and son, but did not describe in detail the suffering he suffered in the countryside, and did not use irony. The educated youth, his character characteristics I don't deny any of this. He was forced to suffer in the countryside as a result of the country's policy at the time. This cannot be blamed on anyone. But he chose to be with the original male protagonist and gave birth to three children, but he did that in the end. To be honest, I don't understand it. I can only say that what he did was indeed wrong, but he did suffer a lot, because at that time, the male protagonist's father or mother was really a bit patriarchal, and his life must not be very good, and I can understand that he can choose the original male protagonist to have a child. It is really difficult for him to be alone in the countryside and he can only find someone to rely on. In fact, I have already impressed myself (I know what I said is quite funny). I think this society is really unfair to women. Really, when he gets great achievements later, they are basically all men. Women will not be recognized for what they do. No matter how great you are, they will only recognize you when you are particularly powerful. My, I can say that the educated youth is evil. You are more forced by society (I don't say he is a good person, but I don't think he is a pure evil person) The above are all my personal opinions. I feel that I may be a feminist in a serious sense according to others. I really blame myself all the time and feel that society is unfair to us women. As a result, even if a woman does something bad, I may subconsciously excuse her. I admit that my views are not correct, but sometimes I will know the female character and what is wrong with her, but I think more of it is a social problem. For example, if the female supporting role competes with the female protagonist for men, and keeps slandering the female protagonist, I think What I was thinking may be that the living conditions of the female protagonist are not good, and she can only rely on men, because she knows that she has a face and a figure, and maybe only men love her more. But what I actually want to say is that he can look for opportunities with women and let women help him, but he did not do so. It is probably because of his restricted thoughts. I know what I said is too ridiculous. You take it as my gibberish, right?

The second one is very exciting, I hope to write more similar ones. A slight flaw is that the entire page is devoted to describing the protagonist's great love, but the description of the protagonist's family is too little, and is often briefly mentioned. I hope that the author can consider adding some extras from other people's perspectives to supplement it in the future.

🐮, A Heart to China, the writing quality is good, and the content is very substantial. It can be seen that I must have read a lot of information, and can present these reasonably. Generally speaking, the writing quality is good, it is smooth, not laggy, and there is no nonsense.

The first few worlds are quite interesting, such as the Republic of China chapter, the Cat chapter, a loving mother and a filial son, etc. Especially the first world is strongly recommended. But what to say about the next few worlds, people who watched it were upset. It felt like the heroine's character was a bit broken due to the change of author, and it didn't have the same feeling as before. Now that I have seen the latest world of human fireworks, I stopped and did not intend to continue reading. The previous worlds are really beautiful, so you can go and check them out. Come on, author.

At first I thought it was a chronicle-style quick thread. At most, I had some writing skills, just to pass the time and read. It doesn't matter if I open the golden finger, I can't type and abandon the article. The result was so good, I couldn't stop watching Two Worlds. I even watched it all night two nights and have thoroughly reviewed it today. Sishui girls are what I think a fast wearer should look like! He has his own principles and bottom line. As the world environment, identity and encounters change, he will flexibly change his path, but he will not give up the bottom line of justice. Even in this world of human traffickers, using evil to eliminate evil will only make people happy! In reality, there are many families who are heartbroken by the disappearance of their children. Due to various reasons, they are not able to reunite as a family. So in the constructed virtual world, it is also a blessing to have such a capable and kind-hearted "executor" who can be efficient and does not involve innocent people. The system stone is both funny and pitiful. Not only can it not provide cheats to Sishui, but it has also tricked Sishui several times. In some worlds, it is even offline and invisible. I think this is another dispensable intelligent system with borders. I didn't expect that it can actually be "a loving mother and a filial son". Hahaha, I look forward to the author continuing to write interesting worlds in the next world! Come on!

Book review of "The Road to Time Travel, A Person Fights to Become a Boss" (review after reading about 700,000 words) Ahhhh, Shushu really likes this novel with no cp + strong country + good writing + good emotional lines + real and detailed descriptions. I read it all night and finished more than 400 chapters. Let me first talk about Shushu's advantages about this book: First, the emotional line between the host and the system is very good. There is a very detailed setting at the beginning - the system uses its own energy to form an identity for the host, and the host needs to stay in the world long enough to obtain energy to feed back to the system. This setting avoids the type of plastic sisters who use each other, plus the bad luck of the two unlucky children, System A and Shui Miao. The journey at the beginning is very unsatisfactory, and the beginning is terrible, but it is also successful and reasonable in establishing trust between the host and the system. The fact that the faith value obtained by Shuimiao can upgrade the system and the host gives both parties common interests. Coupled with the energy mentioned above, it can be said that the relationship between the two is already very solid in a sense. So how does this relationship manifest itself? Mutual trust is reflected in things such as the first time Wen Shi Lei fought for the identity of the host, and the world in "I Cultivate Immortality in a Zombie World" where he spent all his faith points without any reservation at the beginning to change the small star that collided with the earth. Reasonable emotional development and equal system host relationship are the highlights of this novel. Second, the emotional lines of the host Shui Miao and other characters are well described. Shushu personally thinks that "The Shadow Confrontation of the Republic of China" is the one where Shui Miao reveals the most emotions. The relationship with other comrades is very sincere and passionate, and the pain of knowing that the comrades sacrificed one by one during the latent period is also very real and touching. In addition to this world, the host can also be harmonious and harmonious when getting along with family members as the original owner in other worlds. I personally like this kind of emotional description without too many interests, so Shushu takes it as an advantage here. Third, no CP, Shushu does not object to authors who are good at writing emotional scenes between male and female protagonists writing stories with CP, but many authors of fast-travel novels ignore world travel when writing emotional scenes between male and female protagonists. In the middle and late stages, each world becomes like a honeymoon trip, without highlighting the authenticity of each world. Another reason is that Shushu is just a single guy and has not provoked anyone. When he doesn't want to read a book, the plot of the novel is not good and his face is confused by dog ​​food. Oh, this time, Shushu is sour. Fourth, a strong country, good literary talent, and positive emotions Needless to say, strengthening the country is the most invigorating thing to watch. Positive emotions are what Shushu, who is emotionally anxious and slightly depressed, likes. Looking at Miaomiao who is still optimistic and growing despite many difficulties, even though she is a novel character, I still like her very much. I hope she can catch up with her ideals and goals before me, and I will catch up later. Literary talent originally belongs to the writing style. There are too many points that I have crammed here. Like the passage describing Kun in "I Cultivate Immortality in the Zombie World", "Then, the next scene will be unforgettable for Shui Miao for the rest of his life. He saw the whale jumping up, and the entire sky seemed to have been completely covered by its body. It dived into the blue sea, swam in the current, sank into the East China Sea, and turned its tail under the wind and waves." It wrote about Kun's huge body and graceful posture. The ending of "The Confrontation of Shadows of the Republic of China" "The setting sun is also the rising sun. When it goes out and walks down the mountain to collect all the desolate remaining light, it is when it is burning on the other side and climbs to the top of the mountain to spread the fierce brilliance." It pays tribute to Comrade Shui Sanwa's sacrifice and conveys the news that the revolution is about to win. The ending of "Farming Makes Me Happy" describes the dreamlike beauty of the countryside: "White walls, black tiles, horse-headed walls, and lattice windows hanging in the corridors. In the dream, the water town is fragrant and green, and the jade tiger comforts Suzhou and Hangzhou. Who can't say that if this place continues to develop, it will not be another paradise on earth." This wave is the immense admiration of a poor student for a top student. Fifth, the description is true and careful. The detailed descriptions in the novel will give Shushu a very strong sense of enjoyment and immersion like watching a movie. In "The Shadow Confrontation of the Republic of China", there are two details that are very impressive to Shushu. One is the transformation of the trolley for loading excrement at the beginning + the "secret" when transferring the wounded later. Lift the car a little, so that when the car passes over the bluestone, the sound of the wheels rolling will not be so dull. "It is very detailed and true. When I read this, I couldn't help but hold my breath, for fear that if I didn't notice a detail, the transfer would fail and the spies would be chased. Another one is when he assassinated the traitor Wang Changshi later, when he pretended to be a big man and was about to attack, he "simultaneously shook the cigarette butts collected previously to the ground to create an illusion." After reading this, you will have to admire the boldness and carefulness of Comrade Shui Sanwa (host Shui Miao). The detail of cigarette ash was used to aggravate the hint that "the assassin is a male", causing the enemy to investigate in the wrong direction. There are many such detailed descriptions, so Shushu chose these two that made the most impression to introduce. Sixth, good writing style and correct outlook on life The author's ability to conceive plots is reflected in the first world "Money and Humanity". The links are interlocked and the plots are closely connected. There is also the later world "A rich woman who doesn't want to act is not a good screenwriter". It is a kickback and supplement to the previous world "I am a ghost in a Chinese studio", and the writing is excellent. There are many advantages. I hope the author can maintain the standard and then talk about a part of the novel that Shushu doesn't quite understand. It's not a shortcoming, just a small flaw. At the beginning of the article, it was also mentioned that there is a setting system that requires energy, and you can improve yourself and the host's abilities by relying on faith values. However, in the mid-term, neither the basic system nor the host has improved their abilities. This makes me very strange. If you want to highlight that the start of each world has talents but not to the point of abnormality, Shushu has a suggestion. Next time, maybe consider adding a setting that seals some abilities after the end of the world to gain luck in the start. Okay, the evaluation is over. I hope the author will write better and better, get more recognition, and make more money.