The Female Protagonists Were All Shocked by the Combination of Martial Arts and Magic Skills

Why don't you go to the old book to promote it?

I came here to read mixed martial arts stories, and it turns out that more than half of the content is stories told within stories. Even for those storytelling-type books, the storytelling content is only 20 to 30% at most.

Yes, although the updates are a bit slow, maintaining this rhythm is a rare good thing. The most taboo thing about long novels is writing too fast. It doesn't matter if you have one or two stories in your novel from time to time. The main thing is to maintain this rhythm. There is no need to be too hasty, the story line progresses just right, and the emotional change will not be too sudden. The failure of many harem novels is that the main line, the emotional line, and then the multiple emotional lines are unclear. Now the main line is back to Peach Blossom Island, and the diary is given to the dungeon Xiao Longnu as the auxiliary line. The relationship is based on the daily interactions of the family, the main line is promoted, and the main line is advanced to drive the budding of feelings. The unknown dungeon of the protagonist invisibly presents peerless skills as a branch of the relationship. At least it lacks the deliberate diary atmosphere. Reading diaries that constantly judge people will always give people the impression that the protagonist is a narrow-minded gossip, otherwise normal people would not have so many targeted remarks. How can I put it, it started to become dull and boring later on. It should be limited to the writing problem. The women who appeared gradually began to be unified, and the story began to become unified. They appeared, pretended, slapped in the face, attracted women, appeared, pretended, slapped in the face, attracted women. Repeatedly, it gave people the feeling of gradually losing the main line and starting to focus on the auxiliary lines. There was no in-depth pursuit of the inner thoughts of the character. I gradually started to feel tired🤔, and I started to feel nothing. Come on, author, I will withdraw first.

When eldest brother writes a book, he just writes a book. Does he have to tell stories? Tell a story, just tell a story, do you have to tell so many chapters?

Personally, telling a story within a story is definitely uncomfortable. Isn't this just a blatantly low word count? Where is this matryoshka doll? I originally wanted to give a bad review and quit, but thought about it and held back. Then I read on patiently, and suddenly realized that this book is quite good. Later on, the matryoshka was also corrected, and it was done in one stroke. This was good, as it would not affect the main story, and it also ensured a daily water diary, which was quite detailed. Overall, I feel that it is a book with a score of 8.5 Or above. It is a seriously underestimated book. I will continue to follow it in the future. Come on, author! (Okay, take away the five stars and quickly code the words for me. Who are you looking down on for this little bit?)

The protagonist is a thick-skinned person, but he also has a bottom line and dignity. For the sake of life, it is necessary to be appropriately thick-skinned. The world is not about fighting and killing, this world is about human relationships. I haven't read too much of the rest yet, so I'll give you an evaluation first, because I'm afraid I'll forget about it after reading it later.･ﾟﾟ･(／ω＼)･ﾟﾟ･. It is good to say that you should not be afraid of trouble and nip the threat in the cradle. So far, it seems that it has been done well and the writing is quite natural. The story is also told very well, and it is eloquently told, attracting people, and very interesting. Harmful(/_\)

A great book to start with, interesting and funny. It is as short as the author. I hope it won't be too bad later. Come on, author!

I've read about 60 chapters, it's pretty good😊 Some jokes are intended to make people think they are funny and then keep making people laugh, but in fact, that's just the way it is! The protagonist is really a tolerant turtle. He even wants to kill the protagonist, but he still endures it? What a hero, tui!

It's actually very good. Although it took a lot of time to tell the story at the beginning, it only matters if the novel is good. I think the story of the Korean movie "At least Nine Rebirths" is quite good. Moreover, this paragraph is worthy of the identity of the time traveler, using the psychology and micro-expressions of later generations to directly establish authority.

The language is smooth, humorous, and the writing is sophisticated. The only regret is that the cheat system is too weak, especially for writing diaries. Since there are many heroines, there will be too few people with copies, right?

This is the kind of Yang Guo I like, humorous, romantic but not vulgar. Yang Guo in Jin Lao's works is too sensitive. Although the environment shapes his character, Guo Jing's growth environment was also very harsh, but it shaped his perseverance, honesty and honesty.

The story was a bit long at first, with some fantasy in the middle, but it got better and better as it went on, with a lot of two-dimensional elements mixed in. Those who like traditional martial arts may not be used to it, but the overall story is quite cheerful. I thought it took too long for the protagonist to upgrade. After reading the rest, the author probably wants to write more about fantasy fairy tales.

A very interesting book! Come on!

It's good-looking and interesting, just don't accept Huang Rong. In this situation, she is suitable for being an eldest sister and a mother.

The writing is very good, and the plot is exciting, especially the story of Ning Caichen, which has many twists and turns. It's a pity that the author doesn't know whether it is intentional or unintentional, and there are many modern words. Words such as father, husband, and mother are too easy to cause drama. If you replace it with father, mother, grandpa, master uncle, master uncle, great master, and senior, it will be easier to attract people.

This is the most enjoyable book I have read in the past few days. It is refreshing and funny. However, some of the stories are too long. I wish they were shorter and had fewer pictures.

It took me two days to read Chapter 59 before commenting. I have read another diary novel by the author about the entertainment industry before, but the system in this book is not reliable. What you get from writing a diary is just a pile of garbage. The way for the protagonist to improve is to buy pallu from the system to help him practice while idle. There are some shortcomings, but it is too watery and does not advance the plot very much. The protagonist is telling the story. Of course, the writing style is still the same as the previous one, which is more relaxed. If you can accept it, it is a masterpiece. I give it five stars!

In fact, the writing is pretty good, not even 6.7 Points. I feel like there should be an eight score.

Approval from a 16-year-old bookworm [Like]

Good looking as always It's really pretty [laughs]

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Very smooth, the author is very sensible, and the illustrations are first-class

Over 100 chapters, where is my little dragon girl?

Okay, okay, it's a very good comprehensive martial arts article. I hope you can continue to work hard.

The book "Entertainment Circle" has such a high rating, why does this book have such a low rating?

The story is too long,

Come on, don't let it suck.

Come on, well written

It's so funny, I'm laughing so hard, hahahahahahahahahahahaha

You have to be simple-minded to learn from Jin Yong in fighting each other. I overturned it later. The villain named Snow Mountain Flying Fox also learned it. I forgot his name.