After the Black Lotus Quick-Transmigrates, the Mad Protagonist Becomes a Loyal Dog

，Vs "The earthly world is like a dream. Now that you are free, are you willing to go to the great road with me?" "Good, remember my scent." "Love bursts its banks at this moment and overflows." "Storing up sparks for the big things." "When my body reaches its limit, my consciousness will take me out of the encirclement." "The love, hate, anger and delusion of the mortal world are nothing but projections of the high-dimensional world. Chi Jibai, I will wait for you to come to me in the high-dimensional world." Damn, you write really well, keep up the good work!

The author's writing is very good, the structure of the story is also perfect, and the world is also very grand. But one thing I still want to complain about is that I only came in after watching the two male protagonists! ! There are very few emotional scenes! Some worlds are a bit strange. I want to remind the author not to forget the main plot! Being a male video seems very exciting and good, but I came here for the romance between the two male protagonists. Although it doesn't need to be too clingy, it should at least be the main line. I feel that I am always influenced by the plot [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] forgetting my roots. I'm sorry to say it is a bit serious, but this is really a serious problem. I hope the author can pay equal attention to both emotion and plot! ! The plot is good, but I'm really impatient. Generally speaking, if you want to read the relationship line, don't start. It's a mess and unclear. I really think what the author can say about this book is like a masterpiece that is off-topic. It's well written but a little unclear. It's okay to read it simply as a mission article, but I hope it won't be labeled as a double male protagonist. I stayed up all night and read half of it. I'm really angry now. If it's slow-paced, it's too slow. It's several worlds apart. There are teachers, students, lovers, and brothers. Messy, ambiguous, really speechless, really speechless

To be honest, I felt a bit deceived by the copywriting. I thought it was some kind of funny quick-travel story, but it turns out that the dual-power skills are serious. The fourth dimension in the copywriting has little to do with the overall content style. The first and second planes are sweeter, and the others are more focused on plot rather than romance. Recommended for those who like to watch dramas. Of course, if you like sweets, you can also eat it. Although it is low-sugar, it is essential during the fat loss period. [Cover face] Now that I have seen the holographic text, I feel a little confused. And suddenly there is a focus on a supporting character, which is very abrupt and has nothing to do with the protagonists. Instead, Shou appears later, picking up sesame seeds and throwing away watermelons. I didn't understand how to write until I read other people's book reviews. In fact, I wasn't very happy with the book. It suddenly became depressed in the exciting parts, and it started to go high and low, especially the Infinite Flow. This may be a problem with the author's writing style. Just like my previous book review, the content focuses on the plot, but does not highlight the two protagonists, which weakens the sense of existence, makes the characters not full, the characters are not specific, there is no obvious sense of CP, and it does not match the title of the book. I still want to praise One or Two Dimensions. This one not only has sweets but also plot, and these are not missed. Please be cautious

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First of all, I'm a little bit offended by the author He Jin👀 Secondly, if you like to watch love stories, please be careful. This kid is written with no cp material at first glance. He is basically unique in love, has few scenes, and the emotional line is not obvious... But the plot is very well written. Compared with other fast time travels, especially Tomato's fast time travels, it is very well written.

This is the first time I have finished reading a serial. I really have nothing to say about Suisui's writing. I have been reading it not long after it was published. I was afraid that the data was not good and I started to reward it like crazy (because I originally wanted to finish the previous book but it was discontinued...). I also made an appointment with Zaizai to write a manuscript (I hate that I can't post the original picture). I actually don't like to post reviews very much, but the reviews I post now are basically about this book. I really love it. The relationship between Xiaobai was sweet and bitter at the same time. It made me geek out at the beginning and almost made me stupid at the end. Halfway through, I thought the system was a bad thing, but I didn't expect it to be a pampered cub from another generation (?). The character I added, Suisui Jin Shiqi, was also well written. She even had a role in the end. Seventeen is so cute. Every character in the plot is very vivid, and it makes people feel distressed at first sight. Some characters have reverse identities, some are pure scum and evil, each has its own characteristics, and the dungeon world is also very rich and exciting. In some places, it was only at the end that I suddenly realized that the foreshadowing had been laid long ago. Some sentences in the text are really delicate and amazing. Suisui, how come you are so good at writing... And I remember at the beginning Sui you said that you guaranteed to be full of sugar and cruelty-free (she was in a trance)

It's good to read. I've always liked Suisui's books, and the writing is really good. This book about two men really suits my taste, even though I'm still a baby. Suisui should update it soon. It's good to read. Can Suisui update 20 chapters in one day?

Super pretty! I really like Shen Yuzhi's character design! She is simply my destined wife! Wild and handsome! The plot is exciting! Super pretty! ! ! Just update it as soon as possible. The child is hungry [Start]

It's really good to watch. I really like Infinite Streaming. But when I saw the soul swapping and hologram later, I was really silent [face covering] It's very sweet, not abusive, it's a two-way street, Xiaobai wonders if there are too few descriptions, the characterization is not obvious, the impression is not deep, and Xiaobai's character charm and outstanding abilities cannot be felt. The addition of the character of Jin Shiqi in the hologram feels too sudden. There is a lot of understatement in the front, and then there is no separation between reality and the game in the holographic game. It seems that it is all in the game so far. I don't know if there will be reality in the future. It portrays the completeness of the story of the holographic game too much. Xiao Shen, as a quick travel mission, does not mention the system and missions in most of the plot. This article is about the story of this holographic game. It feels like the emotional line unfolds in a weird way. It's all physical contact, not much verbal communication, very little inner activity (including the previous ones) and very few supporting roles, so that everything in the holographic game is presented through narration, which is equivalent to reading a composition. It is estimated that it will be easier to absorb in a way where Xiao Shen introduces it while touching, and a proper perspective change will make it much more exciting [Thinking] Looking at the overall description of Shen Yuzhi, only the Forbidden Island chapter is more impressive. I only know that Xiao Shen is very good-looking, but when I think of it specifically, I don't know what kind of character he is. It does not show the charm of Shen Yuzhi. His general personality is Shirakiri Kuro from the Infinite Flow chapter. He also doesn't like to be controlled and is a bit rebellious. The appearance of the Forbidden Island is not impressive. The two protagonists don't seem to have any particularly clear settings such as personalities or preferences. Xiao Shen's original white and black are a good point in the infinite flow chapter. There is also a live broadcast, which can directly or indirectly trigger the emotional line with Xiao Bai. I don't know if the way of getting along with Xiao Bai in the game is too little inner activity. On the contrary, that part has no impression on Xiao Bai, but the story of Rose Manor is more profound. The attractiveness of the story directly overshadows the charm of the protagonist, and even the supporting characters are offline in confusion. I feel like the protagonist has nothing special about feelings, and he comes and goes suddenly, but the story is still quite attractive. The two of them are not that sticky, and it looks good, but I don't like some parts of it very much. I've read too many stories and picked them up, but it's still interesting [please read carefully]

I have read so much, and now I have read the cultivation series Black Lotus. How should I put it? This book may teach you the relationship between teachers and students, friendship, and family (?), But it may be a bit difficult to teach you about love. Its plot is a good oneヾ^_^♪, each small world is also very novel, but, dear, can we walk through the emotional line? The third small world, um, how should I put it, makes me feel like they are a bit like strangers who meet by chance. I thought Shen Yuzhi's death, um, would, um, cause a big uproar for Gong, but, in that one, Gong only had small ups and downs, and it felt like it was not the death of his good brother but the death of a stranger. There is also the small holographic world, the teacher-student relationship, really, I don't feel any love at all. I am originally the kind of person whose boundaries of all emotions are rather blurry. After reading this book, I feel that except for the boundary of love, all other boundaries are quite clear. If you want to write more, you can take the love line in the main text and other emotional lines in the extras. Finally, the plot line is y yds and the character design is also y yds [shy] [sending heart] [admiration] [blowing kiss]