Cultivation of Immortality: Peeking into the Diary, the Heroines Are Filled with Love

Not much to say, it's really good and I love reading it, so please give me more updates from the author. Unlike the male protagonist in Chuan Tong's Voice of the Heart novel, the protagonist did not want to give away the girl all the time, but decided to kill the original protagonist at the beginning. It is not clichéd or bad. The writing style is quite cheerful. The emotional line with the heroine is a bit fast but very sincere, and the true love can be seen in the ordinary. However, this version of the senior sister is too strong. When will the author arrange for the junior sister to rise with the two elders and the sect master? I also want to read Shura Field. In short, this book is worth reading. The author will give it a try. I personally feel that Shangguan Bing's part was not handled well. Let's see what happens next. I don't like the misunderstanding between the male and female protagonists. What will happen next?

My evaluation is that the needle does not poke! ! Please come more to the heroine, thank you. If you continue to torture me, I will be happy. I think the writing is very good! ! (I paid 5 yuan a piece) [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Harem stories (no giving away girls, cuckoldry, etc.), More daily life, less description of battles, very sweet daily life, a little funny, this is my favorite style! The diary session is very interesting [laughing]. There is no cliche plot where the male protagonist is ridiculed wherever he goes, and the sects are not the kind to scheming around everywhere, making it very comfortable to watch. Looking forward to the role of the clan leader [Learned]

To be honest, at the beginning of this book, I felt that the pacing was a bit out of control and a bit long-winded. However, after each girl got more and more diary information, the plot became more and more interesting, especially after the map was opened. This paragraph can be praised by the author. I thought it suddenly Adding so many characters at once would make it difficult to control the plot, but the result is handled very harmoniously, there are misunderstandings but not bloody, and the protagonist's cultivation is not as slow as before. After seeing the latest chapter and following the update every day, I feel that it is getting better now (lock up with the sect leader!)

First of all, I like the theme of "peeping into the diary"; secondly, your writing is quite good and there are no major flaws. Therefore, five-star praise! [You taste carefully] Beautiful, so beautiful! [Laughing evilly] Others update three chapters every day, but you update one chapter every three days, right? Two stars off! I'll check it out once it's updated, just don't stop updating it completely! [Cover face]

You can still read it, cool article. Shangguan Bing's emotional scene at the beginning was a bit poisonous. No, it was too poisonous. It was unprecedentedly poisonous. I suggest that after you see Shangguan soldiers drinking dragon's blood, just skip to the first ten chapters. You will know that that part is where Shangguan Bing wants it for the first time.

I really like this type of movie for the first time. The heroines know the truth from the beginning, so I like this kind of fast pace.

As the first diary I read, it is also very good, but I don't know why the author suddenly stopped liking the update and said yes, I don't like it anymore. It made me very uncomfortable, but I still hope the author can stick to it, okay, come on [blowing kiss]

1 Through the book, harem, system 2 The full text focuses on relaxation and happiness, and describes more interactions between the heroines. They rely on writing diaries to reach 800 words every day to obtain random rewards and improve themselves (the heroines each have a copy in their hands and draw lucky stars every day to obtain rewards) Five-star recommendation

Yes, according to the setting, when the protagonist changes places, the heroine's copy will spread around him. It is a matryoshka theme, but the writing is good. I don't know how to write such boring content later.

I'll give you a little encouragement. Although it's a bit poisonous, isn't this the kind of cool article you're reading? Why are you unhappy with the novel you are reading? I hope the author will keep updating.

I've skipped chapters and finished reading it. How should I put it? Let's just take a look at it. Not much else to say, writing a book is not easy, five stars encourage you! Many female literary yyds! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's pretty good. Great support, author!

The content is very interesting and funny, the male protagonist is also very open and sweet, and the dialogue is interesting, but the word count is a bit watery.

Let's put it this way, it's a very cliche diary, but the plot is cliche. The author's writing is very sweet and makes people happy to read it. I give it five stars and cheers for the author.

The future is promising, at least the contact between a few people makes people feel quite comfortable watching it. Although there are some abrupt parts, such as the two paragraphs where he talks in his sleep, the latter part is not important, and the problem is only obvious in the first part, but it's okay. I didn't suffer before. Looking forward to the next plot, just send more candy

A pure novel, but the love in it is very sweet

I have recommended the book about 6 times, so I decided to give it a try. Unexpectedly, it was surprisingly good, full marks for the candy, and the characters are also good. Although the plot is slow, it keeps moving forward. The only shortcoming is that it is too delayed in some places.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good Can't stop!

Not bad, good work, author, but it's a pity that I am short of money, otherwise I would give you the whole "Xiuer"

Very detailed, I hope to continue writing Don't let it suck, basically the rating won't be too low

It's not bad. I want to win the heroine because of her tightness, but I don't want Taro.

Hurry up, it took a little more than a day to catch up, author, hurry up!!!!

The previous harem novels are pretty good.

So far, it seems that there is no poison in it, and the writing is quite sweet.

It's quite good. When I first read it, the rating was only over 7 points. I was almost persuaded to leave. Fortunately, I went in and read it. The content is quite good. Come on.

Author speed update! ! ! ! ! ! The plot is really interesting!

It looks good. I love watching it. I hope I can keep up the good work.

It's been a long time since I've come across a readable novel. Even though it's a novice novel, at least it's readable.

Among the thousands of books I have read before, I think this one is the best [like] The character of the protagonist suits my taste, and the plot is also good. He doesn't care about other people's feelings like the protagonists in other books. This is enough to give me five stars [laughs] [like]