Xianwu Daming: My Father, Da Luo, Are You Barking Again?

Mature authors have learned to give themselves five-star reviews

I met a 30-year-old young woman on the Internet. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good. But she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She lives in my city. Not far away, we made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my favorite type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging her. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. The whole experience was Cheng was peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content.

I have finished reading it. It is very good to have read Chapter 54 so far. It gives people a comfortable and comfortable feeling while reading.

I have been hesitating between five stars and one star. Five stars is that this book is really worth it and it is very comfortable to read. One star is too short, and it leaves a lot to be desired. In today's fast food era, don't post anything that has more than a million words. I don't know when I will see this book next time. I'll give you five stars to encourage you. I'll read it again after one million words.

Personally, I think it's pretty good. I feel like the score is low and I'll give it a full mark to make up for it. I don't think it's less than eight points. The plot is also very enjoyable. I just feel that the cultivation level is increasing a bit too fast. I don't know how to improve it later. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Come and read with the author I solemnly swear: Starting today, I will never update. I won't watch Drama, no travel, no illness. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict Self-discipline, cherish time like gold, perseverance, struggle and advocating first-class, Strive to create brilliance, take pleasure in coding, and be refined into steel a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of In youth, worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am a good author. Coding is my calling!!!

It was fun all the way, not bad, but can you write more about the interaction between the protagonist and the eldest princess?

I think this book is really good. My favorite part is when the protagonist shouts "Father, Mr. Liang Guogong". I don't know how long he can shout "Father, Mr. Liang Guogong". This book is very good! Cured my book famine

The writing is good, I like it, but two updates a day is too little, at least ten times is enough to read [laughter]

So far, the writing is very good and I have the desire to read it.

Well, it does have the feel of a Jinyiwei detective. The various reasonings are not pointless, and there are quite a lot of various foreshadowings. It is quite logical. Although some plots and sentences are slightly flawed, the overall look and feel is still good.

Gao Wu Da Ming: Now that you have become a martial saint, can you be a princess? Made by four タ A refreshing novel about fantasy upgrades The plot is smooth, the content is not new, there are some routines, but it is also refreshing. The character creation is relatively simple, which can be regarded as the basic treatment method of Xiaobai's novel. All in all, three and a half to four and a half stars.

It's okay, I can watch it, but there are three things that are not very good. One is that the two princes have the same pronunciation. This is unlikely. Anyone who may cause misunderstanding will be avoided. The other is the princess's love brain. This is also unlikely. Even if there is, it will not be for the protagonist who is unfamiliar and has a bad reputation. It is even less likely. She can do it out of other helplessness or inability. Resist and give the protagonist a little help. It is unrealistic to dive in from the beginning, and the eldest princess is not an ordinary person. She can get whatever she wants. The third is that the protagonist grows up too fast. It only takes a few days to start from scratch. The knowledge reserve is still very rich. External skills require training of muscles and bones, and internal skills need to be refined over time. It is too fast and exciting, but there is not enough detail.

The writing is okay. Generally speaking, this book can be divided into two major volumes. The first large volume is about the world of Jiuzhou. Some of Zhang Lin's work in the Jinyiwei of the Ming Dynasty, including solving crimes and cultivating himself. The first part probably takes up a little more than half. The second largest volume is After Ascension. The content of the second part is actually basically decoupled from the content of the first part. It can be said that it has nothing to do with it. One is the story of Gao Wu and the other is the story of cultivating immortals. The contents of the two volumes can actually be read as two books. After the ascension, there is basically no connection with the people and events in the first volume. There are indeed relatively few things about emotional drama. More books will be smoother and more delicate, and the characters will be fuller.

This book is really well written, recommended by a 15-year-old bookworm

Everything else is pretty good, except for the poisonous point of the marriage grant at the beginning. If it is postponed, why don't you just say there is no heroine? Later, when you look at the eunuch story, you can wait until the finale to get married. It would be better if there is no heroine.

It's okay, although I struggled to read the first few dozen chapters smoothly. Much better later. I've seen Chapter 300, and now a Western Magical Continent has appeared. And there is a plot conflict with Western Buddhism in Kyushu. The emperor was also very ambitious. If I were to write it, I would ask the emperor to give the protagonist a chance: let the protagonist choose 20 items from the royal treasury, and the royal guards will be dispatched by him. Let the protagonist quietly take over the magical continent of the West. Because the protagonist cultivates so fast, there must be a secret and he will ascend quickly. And the emperor is a wise king. It is completely possible for the protagonist to act freely. If that were the case, that would be exciting.

280. The setting of ancient times is about practicing martial arts and cultivating immortals. The title of the book has little to do with the content. The male protagonist mainly relies on cheating to fight on his own, but even after cheating, it feels like the male protagonist is still living in the shadow of his father, which is very uncomfortable. Don't know what to do

Five-star recommendation. The protagonist's IQ is above average, the character is also very likable, the story line is also very smooth, very readable, and has no poisonous points. It is a rare novel in Tomato [laughs] Come on, the author, for more updates.

It's pretty cool, but some of the skills and magical powers are arranged the same as in the low-end version, especially the descriptions of magical powers and magical powers and the descriptions of human-versus-human magical powers, which are severely weakened. The protagonist's cultivation talents are not highlighted and all rely on external objects to upgrade. The effects of foreign objects are also the same as the weakened version. For example, the effect of Enlightenment Tea is written to be the same as drinking wolfberry water [laughing]

It's a good book, with good writing and logic, but the plot is too tight and makes me a little tired to read it. It's an in-depth novel and it really deserves a rating of 9.0 Or above. I could still read this kind of book a few years ago, but later I like to read it more relaxedly.

I remember there was a novel like this, about Zhu Cixiang. I guess I continued writing based on that one. I forgot what the novel was called. The novel also talked about Emperor Liewu, Chongzhen hanging himself, destroying Beikong, supporting Nankong, etc. I have an impression, but I don't know what the book is.

After reading more than 300 chapters, he discovered that Goldfinger turned out to be the hidden protagonist. It would have been quite interesting to write this if it was someone behind the scenes. Both father and son worked for it. The reward for one of the missions that took the blame was the treasure that was robbed by his father. In total, you will never lose money.

After watching it, the plot in the later stages was too fast. It would have been better if it was slower. The plot about the heaven has been basically covered in one go. The expelled saint should also be able to expand on it. The overall review is OK, the later stages are not as good as the early stages, and the Kyushu plot is worse than the four major continents.

Overall, it's worth reading, but it's obvious that the author's writing style is average and relatively immature. He really wants to express the shock of ordinary people, but there are only a few back and forths, and the writing style is also that of fantasy novels ten years ago, with pupils widening, shock, etc. It's very retro. There are a lot of repetitions, and I don't know how many times I've seen the phrase "You really have the style of your father". Oh, by the way, exclamation points can be used sparingly, as they seem to affect the perception very much (´･_･`). I hope the author writes better and better, everything goes well, and inspiration continues. Come on

It's very good. The protagonist starts from a little Jin Yiwei and finally becomes the Heavenly Emperor. It's very good. However, I feel that the ending is a bit rushed and some things are not finished. The overall word count is a bit short and I didn't read enough. The rest is very good and worth recommending.

There are ups and downs, and one after another wonderful moments. The princess is raised in the opposite direction, and there are new ideas, but it is a pity that it has not been developed. In the section of heaven, it is inevitable that there will be a tendency to follow the dog's tail. In the later period, if you don't fall into the old ways, you will definitely become a god. Overall, the quality is very high, a rare product.

Are you sure the protagonist has traveled through time? ? Don't know the fairy tale?

The writing is quite good and the characters are described in detail. Although the subject matter is a bit complicated, adding elements such as history, cultivation, detective, prince, consort, etc. Is not to my taste, but I think it deserves a 5-star rating.

I feel that this book is really good. I haven't seen such a relevant book in a long time. I just don't know what the world view is like after the first-grade realm and the ascension. I am looking forward to it. Author, please give me updates as soon as possible. It is not enough to read [angry]