He Was Promised to Be a Mortal Enemy, but as Soon as He Hooked His Hand, His Soul Drifted Away.

I just like this kind of article. Passionate yet arrogant and uninhibited, like wildfire The writing is the same as falling in love with the other person inexplicably, but it makes this emotion delicate, and you slowly fall in love with it vaguely, and the way of pursuit feels very respectful, not overly forced, and it is really delicious. This is the article I wait for every day. I really like this kind of article, but it is relatively cold in the early stage, and it is sweet and doting [shy] in the later stage. The author writes well, I like it so much, plus the writing style, I already like that kind of beautiful people, and they portray such beauty. Not to mention the plot, it's all awesome. The ending is not so boring. Like, like, little brother worships and worships the boss~

I think the writing is very good, and the ambiguous pull between the two protagonists is really exciting😘

The low rating may be because of the new book, but it is actually very, very good to read, and the teacher's writing is also very good. The two people's pull is very exciting, and the game between two strong people is so exciting. I especially like Jiang Sheng's character 0, as hot as wildfire, like a burning grassland, wild. But the lush, vitality is astonishing, and the summer as hot as the equator is in sharp contrast to Chaoyan. Chaoyan is the cold moon and white snow, the ice of the mountains that has not melted for thousands of years, the gloom that lurks in the deep forest, and the dull but extremely beautiful night. They are a perfect match for each other, just like his grandma!

Our team leader Jiang is very fond of it! Beauty Duan Er is amazing! Contrast, pulling, bad skin color, bad character! Nice[shy] Go ahead, go ahead, this book can add fuel to the flames! Sorry, sorry, I, a little illiterate, made a typo. It was Chaoyan [grievance] [grievance] [grievance]

Very very good! ! It's been a long time since I've seen something so beautiful and handsome. It smells so pure! (Tears) (No matter how much I look forward to seeing my 1 called 0 husband, it's so 1, 1 is outrageous!) Boss, I want to follow you, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! A very good beauty paired with a mad dog. She is so good at court banquet. Hahaha, this level of scheming green tea beauty 1, I feel like I am making Jiang Yan wet with my eyes (hey)

Zundu is so good-looking, I really like the interaction between Brother Jiang and Chaochao! ! Ah ah ah, it's so beautiful! ! What my wife wrote is so good! ! ! Looking forward to the next plot! ! Come on, madam!

I originally saw that the rating was a bit low and thought it might not be good to watch, but I fell in love with it and watched it for a whole day. Then sadly I discovered it was gone. No more, you know? ! ! ! ! I can't watch it anymore, I have to wait for the update. So sad. ‧⁺◟( ᵒ̴̶̥́ ·̫ ᵒ̴̶̣̥̀ ) Bro, I went to search for your other books. It turns out that this is your first book. Do you know how sad I am? It makes me dissatisfied with everything I watch now. What a pain! ! ! [Crying] I'm having a seizure again. Gosh, this type of book is kind of hard to find! ! ! ! ! ! ! Now I want to make a time machine to travel to the future! [Covers face] Crying... I kind of want to see Jiang Sheng counterattack. What should I do? No way, the description of Chao Yan is so beautiful, my God! [Sinister smile]

Very nice, I love this type of writing! Extremely horny!

Before I read this article, I was actually attracted to Lei's kind of handsome and muscular guy, because the ones I read before said that they were supposed to be cool and handsome at the beginning, but they turned into old sisters-in-law, and they were so delicate that it was unbearable... But this book made me see a different and brand-new character, Jiang Sheng has the characteristics that a man should have, and his character is well interpreted. He is not a cookie-cutter person who is doted on and loved and simply accepts love. He is a high-spirited, hot, Chicheng, mature, reliable, responsible and guiding lover. Chao Yan, as Gong, has also broken through the public's stereotyped impression of Gong. Here I see that Gong can be strong, reliable and protective of his lover, or he can be fragile and sensitive who needs to be guided and loved. However, he will not blindly ask for love, but strives to move towards his lover, whether it is status or other... And Jiang Sheng and Chao Yan also have very unique innovations in the definition of each other's identities as "husband" and "wife". All in all, these are rare breakthroughs. From the author's words, you can feel the author's love for the characters and creation, and there is love between the lines. I sincerely hope that the author will get better and better, and that more and more people will discover and like the author's articles [love]

It's really super, super beautiful. It's a true double strength and a beauty attack. I feel that this kind of dual strength represents two-way possession, two-way giving and two-way love, rather than the kind where one side is coquettish and the other side only gives blindly. I don't like this kind of thing. Moreover, the author's writing style in every world is very delicate. Jiang Shen really, really likes his precious wife, so he doesn't want him to be wronged, doesn't want her to get hurt, and doesn't want her to suffer a little pain. The same goes for Chao Yan, who is very capable and strong. He also cares about Jiang Sheng's every move. They both gave each other a unique, pure and strong love. I originally thought it was hard to find this kind of article, but I randomly saw this. Whether it is the characters, the plot, or the emotional description of both parties, I think it is really very good. Even though they are a natural match and evenly matched, another key point is that in this article, even though the author uses so much writing to describe their superior appearance, I can still feel that first of all, they are both men. Secondly, those things are not deliberately piled up, but they are such perfect existences. (I don't know if anyone can understand this point. If you don't read many articles, you can't tell whether it is BG or BL without reading the gender. ) Furthermore, they give me the impression that both parties have a very mature attitude towards relationships, whether possessive or controlling. This represents their persistent love for both parties. And I think this also highlights the theme of two strong people. Who doesn't like the love equally given by both sides of the evenly matched world? Although many of the themes of each world may have been roughly written, the author's delicate writing and emotional description made me feel that each world is impressive, instead of forgetting to rely on a certain character at first glance. So I am very grateful to the author for writing such a good work. I look forward to the next new work. I also wish Jiang Sheng and Chao Yan more and more happiness in that world.

★The two-way doting on each other, the green tea beauty with black sesame filling ✘The hot-tempered handsome guy doting on his wife. 1V1 Shuang Jie and Shuang Jie doted on each other, and Jiang Sheng and Chao Yan felt like they were crazy about each other. Unfortunately, there was no dark room plot. I can't imagine how happy Jiang Sheng would be if Chao Yan imprisoned Jiang Sheng. After all, this was proof that his wife loved him. Jiang Sheng used to be Chao Yan's crazy crush in the original world. Later, in the small world, his dream came true and he successfully chased Bai Yueguang. ★Jiang Sheng felt that he was the superior in the first world. Later, because he was not as powerful as Chao Yan and Chao Yan showed weakness, he naturally became the inferior. However, Jiang Sheng is indeed a man who dotes on his wife. In order not to make his wife hurt, even if he had the opportunity to be the superior in the future, he still did not do it. Jiang remained silent and just doted on his wife. Just calling Chao Yan "husband" can turn Jiang's voice into a cocky mouth. In this book, the real husband is not just words, but actions. ★Also, in this book with two male protagonists, both male protagonists are very charismatic, and there is no behavior that weakens men. Even some of the scenes of pretending to be pitiful are just the fun between them as husband and wife.

How can it be so beautiful? I also like the characters so much. There is so much sexual tension and they pull each other apart. I love it so much. It would be great if the author could add more chapters.

It's really good-looking, rich in content, and the plot is good, especially the emotional line of the protagonist is really well described. I really love this extreme pull. I really look forward to the protagonists getting together, but I also like the ambiguous pull between them. It's really sweet and makes me crazy. It's also super sweet after we get together, okay? It's good to watch, but it's not enough to watch. It's not enough to watch. It gives me the desire to keep watching. Big, come on, I'm looking forward to the next plot [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

After all, it's not so cute and soft, it's really two equally matched men in love [laughing][laughing][love][love]

This is so good-looking, I can't stop squirting. This is the dual male protagonist in my heart. . . Two people love each other and hold each other. Both are men. The love between men does not feminize the other person🥰🥰The author writes really well. I have also been following the second book, but I still hope that the author's third book will be a mutual attack novel! ! It will feel super exciting😘

Overall, it is very good. The characters of the two protagonists are very distinct, and the sexual tension between the protagonists is also very strong. The protagonist Shou Jiang Sheng is very strong and powerful, but he also cares so much about Chao Yan. He can endure and change for him, and you can feel his full love for Chao Yan. But the plot is actually relatively bland, without any major twists and turns. It feels like there are many places that could be written but are not, which makes it feel a bit unsatisfying (of course, because this is a fast-travel novel, it is not good to have too many chapters), but the sexual tension between the protagonists makes up for this (it is really too strong, the strongest sexual tension I have ever seen), which makes people want to read on. So I hope you will continue to work hard and make this book better and better. Have I actually been reading this for so long?

I rarely review a book in a long way, but I really want to say a few words about this book. Every small world in this book, and even the little fun points in each chapter, are densely packed. Reading the whole article is so exciting that it feels like screaming. Both of them are very possessive of each other, and this is the most equal relationship I have ever seen, and the writing is also very good. Although some of the articles I read before are well written and have exciting content, these articles are either too good for the opponent, and the recipient's response and possessiveness are very weak, or the recipient is not good enough for the opponent, and the opponent is very cold. In such an unequal love, sometimes I really can't feel the love and dedication of the indifferent partner. I have always felt that the love between two people is equal. This equality is not the equality of contribution, but the equality of emotions, and the equality of the reactions of both parties to the other's behavior. And this book reflects these very well. The feelings in the first world are a bit slow. This is because Xiao Jiang is slowly realizing his own emotions and accepting his feelings for Xiao Chao. The author writes this process very delicately. In the following worlds, Xiao Jiang firmly loves Xiao Chao, even if Xiao Chao does not know him in the new world, so the rhythm of love will be faster. Also, I am personally very satisfied with the beauty attack. Few authors can write this setting so well. The image of Xiao Chao is really great. He has always given me the feeling of Qingfeng Mingyue and Bai Xue. Such a cold and beautiful person is not ambiguous when expressing love, and is not inferior to Xiao Jiang at all. To me, Xiao Jiang is a blatant love, while Xiao Chao's love can be There was no small world at the beginning, but in the later period, it was no less than Xiao Jiang. In the novels I read before, many novels always insisted on being very offensive. In fact, upon careful study, it was not the case at all. However, Xiao Jiang perfectly explained that being very offensive can make people have the idea of being very offensive. I think that sometimes, it can prevent readers from feeling counterattack. This book really does that. It's rare to find such interesting writing. Well, I have watched a lot now. I personally prefer emotional lines, so I don't have so many requirements for the plot. If you want to read cool stories, you should be careful and avoid lightning. The cool points I am talking about are all emotionally cool points, not the cool points in the plot. Be cautious and avoid lightning [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

This is the dual-male story I want to read. It's about two strong characters, rather than weakening one of them. The interaction between the two sides that is full of sexual tension is so heartbreaking to me [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing] The attack is like a rose on the snow, quiet and elegant, but it is also like a snake encroaching on the prey. The feeling is like charcoal fire and sandalwood, hot and sincere. There is also wild laziness and occasional shyness, which I like very much. The possessive desires of both parties are described in an exciting way by the author. I almost vomited in the car, and I read it without finishing a chapter. This is the most heart-warming novel I have read in the past few months. It is so difficult. I hope the author will continue to make false updates and look forward to the ending of Sheng He Chao.

Super pretty! It makes me very satisfied! The plot is pulling! And that atmosphere! Be it a description of taste or a description of smell! The ambiguous atmosphere created by it! Absolutely amazing! ! ! I like it so much😍I like it so much!

I really, really like it, and the writing is both strong and strong, without selling labels. The sound was hurt, but it was because he liked the banquet, felt sorry for him, and couldn't bear to let him hurt. He was already attacking this point. Moreover, they are really satisfied with the control and control, and will not be sadistic or abusive, because once they identify each other, they will love each other through actions, and there will be no one who is afraid to speak, and one who does not want to speak, and finally becomes unable to speak out. The first small world in this book is really about white moonlight and cinnabar moles, N brush it up (╯▽╰). My favorite is the chapter about buying a cheongsam, Chao Yu's reaction is very cute (so there is no cp for him It's really hard to let go), and it's also the first sign of Chao Yan's love (it should be said that he has a strong possessiveness, "Do you want a watch?" Hahaha 😂 Changing watches is turned into changing rings, so embarrassing), Jiang's mother is also very cute (little native dog and swan, swan wants to eat her little native dog, and is also a millionaire), and the original Jiang Sheng also has a brother and a brother-in-law 😂. "His thoughts seemed to be filled and emptied out by this name. The other party was like a terrifying storm, sweeping past violently, leaving behind wreckage all over the ground. The wreckage called heartbeat." Chaoyan said to the seal. The sound in the image is the wheat field in summer, hot and restless, and it is also his soaring love for the sound. The banquet is the sound of the moon. The world is very good, so the sound touches the moon, and the moon also falls into the river. This is the crescent moon of the river. For the banquet, the sound is like the restless summer, and the moon in the sky actively throws itself into the embrace of human fireworks. Therefore, a gorgeous rose grows spontaneously on the glacier in winter. If a person has too low self-esteem in front of the other half, he will do many inappropriate behaviors. This inappropriate behavior will not only cause internal damage to himself but also hurt others. Although Shengsheng felt inferior in front of Chaoyan at first, she never hurt him. There are still many worlds waiting to be unlocked, but it will not be a loss to invest in We Shengsheng and Chaoyan [Note] [Note] [Note] Koke experts can be bold

Ahhhhhhhh! It's really super, super pretty! But there are too few, and there are only two planes at present. I really hope that there will be more, and I will work hard [please give me more updates]!

It looks so good. I love to see more! ! This world has the right time, right place and right people! I was secretly looking forward to a plot in which the team leader becomes jealous after becoming enlightened (no)!

It's really, really beautiful. I don't like to watch fast time travel. I think the characters will have different personalities in another small world. But in this one, although the status in each world is different, their own personalities and images are the same, and they are all what I like. When they join forces, their sexual tension is wow! I don't even want to say more, they are both very strong, not the weak little white flowers (the male protagonist deliberately pretends not to be), they are possessive of each other, don't love them too much! What kind of sparks will be created when ice and fire collide?

Good-looking, both strong and clean, with extreme pull, sweet and loving but not abusive, and a good personality, I really like it 😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I really like it. The happiest book I have read in a while. I really like the emotional flow between the two. There is no such thing as a long-term talk, and the two of them do things very efficiently without being sloppy. It's really great. Some people say that in this book, 0 chases 1 and 1 feels that 1 does not love him, but in fact the love between the two is equal. They can give everything to each other equally, and they are not the kind of people who only love me when I love you. It's just really ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (forgive me for not getting above 40 in composition (but in fact my Chinese language is generally 110 hehe)) I really like it (dark crawling) I really like this kind of dark love, it is simply my super dish! ! My Maya felt refreshed after reading this. I like it very much. .

Beautiful, so beautiful. It's really cute when describing the interactions, ahhh. Show me everything! ! And this book is really good to me. Jiang Sheng really dotes on Chao Yan (Chao Yan also dotes on Jiang Sheng), not just in words, but in the details. You can see Jiang Sheng's careful behavior all the time [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] Chaoyan gets slapped in the face every time, hahaha, it's so sweet to pick up afterward. [Cool][cool] The possessiveness of two people towards each other is really touching [laughs][laughs]

The front part looks better and the writing is better. I can feel the tension between the two sides. What about the later part? Everyone will know by looking at it [awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Overall it's pretty good [OK][OK][OK]

He said he was a mortal enemy, but in fact Jiang Sheng had never been able to resist Chao Yan's beauty. He said he was a mortal enemy, but in fact he had always coveted Team Leader Chao and wanted her to be his wife. In addition to the fact that in the first world, Team Leader Chao had a higher status, when the two of them got along well, they found out that they had collided with each other. Team Leader Chao wanted to be mentally prepared before giving it to Jiang Sheng, but who was Jiang Sheng? He was Team Leader Chao's husband who loved his wife very much, so he persuaded himself again and again. Even if he is in a high position, he always uses his identity as a husband to treat his wife like a wife. God knows that in every world, the team leader Chao is so beautiful that people and gods are angry. He coaxes the team leader to call him wife, but every time when his life is perfect, he finds various reasons to say that he has given up on his wife. Jiang Sheng, you deserve to have a beautiful wife! This is really cool to watch. It's a real double power. It's so good and you'll want to see more of it! ! !

This book is really super good, ahhhhhhhhh, believe me, I have read so many books with two male protagonists that I am almost exhausted. This book is the best, none of them [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] The author should read more, I can't read enough, I'm hungry [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] I don't like the world of orcs very much. There are too many things that Gong hides from Shou. Although it is based on the world background and the huge gap and inequality between orcs and time-travelers. Although Shou knows everything Gong hides from Shou, I don't like it. It is so different from the previous worlds. The feelings between Gong and Shou in this world are like a layer of fog, and I don't like it. But the first few worlds are very good, and I have reread them once or twice. Don't give up on this book because of my subjective feelings. I'll take another look, hoping that the next world will be better, otherwise I might give up writing. The Cake Fork world is a bit similar to the Orc world. Gong wants to find from Shou a sense of superiority and control that he doesn't have because he is a cake. Emm, maybe this is the reason for the character. After all, Shou is indeed Gong's licking dog and can tolerate everything.

Super super pretty! I've tried it two or three times and really like it! The last world was shown directly to me and I cried. Wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Ps: To avoid surprises for those who have never read it, this book will be read slowly, slowly, slowly! A World is so long that it can be taken out and read as a short article. Jiang is Shou, Jiang is Shou, Jiang is Shou! This is the main text, Jiang likes to call his wife Chao! Chao also accepts calling me husband! There is a plot about dressing up in women's clothing. Jiang really likes to see the court wearing cheongsam! If you are confused about these three points, just leave and find a book that matches your XP. Don't scold the author in the comment area. The author also cut his own legs to cook. 🙏🏻🙏🏻