New to the Martial World, and My Wife Is the Princess of the Empire

No matter whether you can read it at the beginning or not, thank you all for watching. Because it is the first time for a newcomer to write a book, and it is Chuanwu. The structure is not very mature, so there is a lot of foreshadowing and explanation at the beginning, so it may look boring. The introduction content probably only appeared in the second volume, and the main plot also started to unfold in the second volume. If you are patient, you can continue reading and give it a try. The author is constantly adjusting his structure and improving his writing. Thank you for your support!

I give five stars just for encouragement. For me, this book is boring or boring. The theme mentioned at the beginning of the article is that the male protagonist is looking for his wife. However, the author did not mention that he was going out in the first three chapters and later, so the readers will definitely not want to read further. There are very few scenes that set up so many male protagonists, and he did not see his daughter. I can recommend it. The author has to take a look at the world. How to describe a protagonist attracts the audience to think what the protagonist will do next. You have to let the audience know what he is going to do next and let the audience guess. As for writing traditional martial arts novels, there is really a very small audience now. I can only say to keep working hard. But for me, I am sorry that this book is really boring.

Five stars for encouragement, the writing style is there, but there is no focus, the main line is vague, and the group portraits should not be written from the beginning. After reading the nine chapters, the protagonist appears in less than a few hundred words, but dozens of unfamiliar names and forces appear one after another. It is confusing, as if you are starting from the middle of a book. Mainly for the introduction, it's really hard to stick to it.

Please encourage me. The introduction is really misleading. Not only did the daughter not appear at the beginning, but a lot of language was used to describe the realm, and the protagonist did not appear. Generally, after seeing this, many readers will feel that they have been cheated and will not continue reading.

I'm working on the new book first. I'll give you four stars. I originally wanted to give you one star. After reading more than ten chapters, I have read books for more than ten years, and I really don't understand them. I read the introduction and could only say one word, and I couldn't tell the priority.

I don't feel there are any major negative points, but I feel that there are a bit few emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists. Most of the interactions between the male and female protagonists are summarized, and most of the descriptions of the male protagonist's growth and fighting process are taken up. To put it simply, it's not sweet or sadistic, the rest is the growth of the male protagonist.

Why are there so few people reading this? The writing is so great. If I change the name, this book should be a hit. It's a good book. Why are there so few people?

Don't give up, keep writing. I personally think this book is very good. Don't give up believing in yourself because of other people's words.

I read the latest chapter in one go, the plot is good.

The realm of freedom, the realm of carefree heaven, and the realm of mysterious wandering gods. You are now in the realm of the free spirit.