The Guide Comes First

It's good, I just want to see more love lines ~ I also hope that the male lead will be > 4, Sihasha Damn, can the appearance of the heroine become more beautiful as her spiritual body grows?

After reading the author's extensive descriptions, I feel that four is not enough 😳. There are also many descriptions of other male characters interacting with the heroine (yes, I also like Xie Zeyan). It would be a pity if they are not together later [Admiration]! Now it seems that the heroine is not a strong woman, but she is not a dodder either. I hope there will be a golden finger for the heroine in the realm of nothingness later on. Many descriptions are detailed, and it is a good article [Chigua]!

For the first time, I met an author who writes seriously. The heroine and the hero are each struggling on the edge of life and death, and constantly have goodwill towards the world. The heroine is tenacious, warm, and gentle, giving all the strength to those around her. The realistic storyline makes the story line even more magnificent and colorful. Only through constant baptism in the wind and rain, rainbows will surely cover the stars.

It's nice to look at, it's really a non-typical whistle direction, and the setting is great! I really like watching the interaction between the male and female protagonists. I clicked on my xp. Thank you very much [sending my heart]

It's really good to watch, but to be honest, some of the plots are hard to understand, especially the chapters about the male and female protagonists, which are simply pitiful. I feel that the plot is really confusing in some places. Although it is indeed a group portrait, it is really difficult to understand in some places, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists There are relatively few of them. To be honest, among the 100 chapters, I feel like I don't even know if there is any interaction in 50 chapters, and the updates are also relatively slow. To be honest, I feel that the group portraits written in the middle are a bit messy. I don't know which one is right. I hope there will be more chapters with male and female protagonists.

In fact, I don't really like to watch the sub-plots. I know it's a foreshadowing, but I still can't stand it. I hope that there will be a plot directly related to the heroine. It doesn't mean that the sub-plots are not well written. I really like this kind of subject matter. The male and female protagonists are both very good. I hope the author will work harder.

Look good, give it more meat, and I have a guess, I don't know if it's right or not. I feel that the author puts so much emphasis on the relationship between guides and sentries. Sentinels have many benefits, but guides only redeem sentinels. Is this really the only use of guides? Is the direction of evolution really so unequal? ​​[What]

It's rated 4 stars. The writing style is rather old-fashioned, and the preface often doesn't match the postscript. It makes me feel like an old lady is talking in her sleep, and the text is unclear. The communication and psychological activities of the characters sometimes feel a bit inexplicable. Fluency is really important for novels. The biggest obstacle to this book is that it is not smooth enough, and it feels difficult to read because of the words. I really like the setting, it's a pity

As long as I encounter a guide who is fascinating but doesn't know it, I will love him without thinking. Looking forward to the growth and upgrade of the heroine. It can be seen that the author has his own outline. It may be a little lacking in experience and some sub-lines need to be read more carefully. I look forward to improvement! Also, I think the heartthrob likes Su Shuang. Can you praise the heroine's appearance more and find a chance to repair the injuries on her hands without being so realistic 🥺

It's really good to watch. Maybe the transition in some places is not very good, but the overall story is very exciting. Kudos to the author! I hope you can finish it and don't give up! °˖✧︎◝︎(⁰▿︎⁰)◜︎✧︎˖°