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Too many nonsense descriptions And the character design and character description are completely inconsistent. How could a princess whose country had subjugated her country and whose family had just died be so unwary in a completely unfamiliar environment? Warm lights and the like to soothe the heart are nonsense. The subject matter is quite attractive, but the content is not that good.

It means you can't see it,,,

It's pretty good. It's well written.

Are you writing a novel or an autobiography?

You can write several chapters just for any fragment of your memory.

Too idealistic. For an ancient person who has lived for more than ten years, his ability to accept new things must be too strong.